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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update. Arnav saw Khushi and Geet going to terrace. He asked Maan to come with him to terrace so that he can talk to Khushi. Khushi is annoyed on Arnav useless talks and Maan is annoyed on geet's stuttering and shyness.
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Posted: 9 years ago
MaN ki questions ko geet and dee nahi payi. Lekin lagtha hai bina geet ko kuch javab diye apne app maan ko geet ke baare mai patha chalega...
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Posted: 9 years ago
hi thanks 4 the rocking update! well written! Arnav blackmails Maan 2 agree 2 b with Geet as he woos Khushi! Khushi wonders y Maan/Arnav asking abt her! Geet acts stupid in front of Maan/Arnav! he is irritated! update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: nitika20

Maan is being mean...
agar Geet sun leti Maan and Arnav ka conversion to???
At least Geet baki sab ke sath kaise behave karti hai..
isse Maan ko pata chal jata na... ki
Geet sirf Maan ke samne nervous ho jati hai...
Hey Devi Maiya . Khushi ko Bacha lena .. Arnav ke Qs se...
hehehehe ...
Geet and Arnav full on crazy hai...
hehe Arnav Maan ko blackmail kar raha tha.. help ke liye...
update next part soon ...


To observe Geet with others, Maan has to be in the same room as Geet and the moment Maan enters the room, Geet goes all shying and blushing. Toh how will Maan know what Geet's nature is?

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: -padmarao-

Nice update

Here khushi not interested in arnav n maan in geet
Will geet be able to talk normally with maan...
When is ur bday?
Waiting for the next update

It is on the day this story ends! So the day this story is complete, you can wish me!😉
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Posted: 9 years ago


CHAPTER 8. THE ILLUSION BREAKS

Geet was very happy person. Her Prince Charming was staying in the same house as her! She got to spend time with him! He saved her life from Daakus! He even held her in his arms! He came to talk to her on terrace! Hey Babaji! Geet giggled. Yes! Geet was very happy girl these days! As she walked past one of the windows in the ground floor she froze at what she saw. Her face turned red, her heart started running as if it was participating in marathon and her eyes feasted upon the scene in front of her. There was her Prince Charming wearing black pants and bare chested exercising. Haaye! Handsome hain yeh toh pata tha par itne handsome! Hey Babaji! She nearly swooned looking at him. He was doing some form of martial arts Geet noted absentmindedly. She stared at the man in front of her and her mouth went dry and her hands longed to touch him. She stood there hidden behind the open window pane staring at her Prince Charming as the said Prince Charming continued to exercise not realizing that he had an audience.

"So what do you think of Geet?", a voice asked him and Maan straightened up from his standard tai chi position. He turned to see Arnav in his jogging wear. Arnav jogged early morning daily like clockwork similar to Maan practicing his tai chi. And now he jogged in the place trying to bring down his temperature and heart rate before he went inside for shower.

"Why are you asking me that?", Maan questioned as he went back to his tai chi position and started working on his kicks.

"You know why!", Arnav shrugged. Neither of them noticed that someone was watching them and were in perfect hearing distance to hear every one of their words. So they continued to talk with their audience observing them and listening to them.

Maan understood right away why Arnav was asking the question to him. In the end of the day, Maan was the one for whom Daadima had chosen Geet. So Arnav wanted to know what Maan thought of the girl!

"So tell me what do you think of the girl?", Arnav probed as he took a break from jogging and sat on the swing nearby. Maan now turned towards his kicks, "What is there to think!"

"Oh come on! You spoke with her a lot yesterday! I am curious as to your thoughts regarding her!", Arnav prodded.

"You want to know what I think about her?", Maan asked as he stopped his exercise and turned to look at Arnav. They had yet to notice that they had an audience.

"I think I hate her! She is annoying! She is horrible! A dull village girl who I won't marry even if she is the last person on earth! I wish we can get away from Hoshiarpur ASAP because staying here means facing that girl and that is last thing I ever want to do!", Maan spat with one breath and went back to his exercise.

There was silence for few seconds and then Arnav mumbled, "That was harsh, man!"

"Sachchai hai!", Maan shrugged and focused on his exercise.

"I am off to take shower!", Arnav mumbled and walked towards the door of the house.

Khushi entered Geet's room singing her Devi Maiyya's bhajan but she froze when she saw her best friend sobbing her heart out.

"Geet!", Khushi shouted as she ran towards her best friend, "Geet! Kya hua?"

She nudged her best friend who sat on the bed, arms hugging her knees, knees pulled up to her chest, her head down and her shoulder shaking as she cried.

"Geet!", Khushi was alarmed. She cupped her friend's face and pulled her up to look at her. The moment Geet saw her, she lunged forward and hugged Khushi tightly.

"Kya hua Geet?", Khushi asked as she patted her best friend's back, "Hum kuch toh bataao? Tum kyon ro rahi ho?"

As Geet pulled away and continued to cry, Khushi spoke sternly, "Dekho Geet! Agar tum humein nahi bataaogi, toh phir kise bataaogi?"

Geet continued to sob and Khushi pleaded to her, "Dekho Geet! Humein bataao! Hum tumhaari jo bhi problem hai solve kardenge! Hum sab theek kardenge Geet! Par humein bataaogi toh hi hum solution nikaal paayenge na?"

Finally Geet broke her silence, "Yeh problem solve nahi ho sakta!"

"Par kyun?", Khushi looked at her in shock.

"Kyunke toote dil ka koi solution nahi!", Geet started sobbing loudly.

Khushi looked at Geet in shock, "Matlab? Tum kya bol rahi ho?" She grabbed Geet by her shoulders, "Dekho Geet! Agar tum humein apna best friend samajhti ho toh abhi sab sachchi sachchi bataaogi! Samjhi?" Khushi shocked Geet into stupor with her harsh tone and Geet slowly started speaking about what she saw. How she was walking through house few minutes ago and saw her Prince Charming exercising. How his friend arrived and asked his opinion on Geet. How excited Geet was thinking she will know what her Prince Charming thought of her only for her heart to break as he claimed that she would be the last person on earth he would marry. Citing what he exactly said about her, Geet was trying her level best to not start crying again. But after a while, she could not stop herself and started crying again.

Khushi hugged Geet as she tried to comfort her. Poor Geet! Why Arnav' why? Why did you break my best friend's heart? What is wrong with my best friend that you rejected her? Khud ko kaunse Desh ka Rajkumar samajhte hain pata nahi!

After a while, Geet calmed down, "Maine soch liya hai!"

Khushi frowned, "Kya?"

"Main Maan Singh Khurana se shaadi ke liye haan karne waali hun!", Geet announced.

"Kya?", Khushi was aghast, "Lekin tum toh manaa karne waali thi na?"

Geet chuckled but there was no humor in her laughter, "Manaa kar rahi thi kyunki main tabhi apne Prince Charming ke liye ruki hui! Lekin jab Prince Charming hi mujhe nahi chaahta toh manaa karke kya karun? Jo pehla rishta aaya use main haan keh dungi! Aur agar iss Maan ne mujhe thukraaya toh agle bande ko haan kahungi!"

Khushi stood up in shock, "Tum paagal toh nahi ho gayi ho Geet? Maan ke liye haan kahogi?"

Arnav was walking down the hall on first floor looking for Khushi. He wanted to know where was washing machine to get his clothes washed or atleast that was the excuse he was using for searching Khushi. In reality he just wanted to see Khushi. As he neared Khushi and Geet's room, he heard Khushi speak, "Tum paagal toh nahi ho gayi ho Geet? Maan ke liye haan kahogi?"

Arnav stood in shock. She was going to say yes to Maan. Poor girl! She will be so heartbroken when Maan will reject her! He was about to continue when he remembered something. For the girls, he was Maan' and Maan was Arnav'. She was going to say yes to him? Poor girl! She will be so shocked when she will know that I am not Maan but Arnav. He was about to walk again when another thought came into his mind. Why is Khushi so horrified at the thought of Geet saying yes to me? Did she like me too?

With excitement Arnav neared the room and listened to the conversation inside.

"Haan! Main Maan ke liye haan keh rahi hun!", Geet spoke in soft voice, "Jab Ma poochegi toh main haan kar dungi!"

"Geet! Galti se bhi uss Maan Singh Khurana ke liye haan mat bolna!", Khushi announced and Arnav was surprised to sense disgust in her voice. Nahi nahi! I am imagining it, Arnav tried to console himself.

"Par kyun?", Geet's voice was tinged with curiosity.

"Paagal hai woh insaan! Ek dum ajeeb hai! Usse shaadi karne ke se behtar kunwaara rehna hai! Hum sach keh rahe hain Geet! Shaadi karni ho toh Maan se toh bilkul mat karna! Humein uss insaan chidd aati hai!"

Arnav stumbled back in shock. Did she really think so bad about him? Was he so ajeeb? How did he annoy her? Arnav turned around and walked to his room in a daze. He sat down on his bed with his head in his hands. Why? Why Khushi why?

Did you hear that guys?

Yup. That is the sound of hearts shattering.

Ab kya hoga? You wonder!

Kya hoga? Simple!

Another 24 hrs mein ek aur update hoga, aur kya?

Good comments necessary, bad comments on pause till February is over!

Thank you, take care and have fun,

Kalpana

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Posted: 9 years ago
wow.. superb update
lo ho gayi galat femi..
poor Geet n arnav
lets see wht happen nxt
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Posted: 9 years ago
Oh no.. Dill toot gaya dono ka.. Bechara arnav and bechari geet :( hope ab toh sach bahar aaye.. Superb yaar.. Cont soon hun
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb update
Loved it
Well written
Plz continue soon
Edited by Happytwinkle - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Loved chapter 8 👏
Heartbreak for Arnav and Geet 😭
Eager for the next part.

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