Manan SS Besties Chap-3,Pg-4

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Character Sketch


Manik malhotra -hot nd handsome boy nd love his parents nd friends specailly his childhood best friend nandini(just like best friend) nd also love neeta aunty(nandu mom) nd study in space last year of clg.


Nandini murthy- cute nd sweet girls ,loves her parents nd his parents nd also crush on manik from 9th class nd navya best friend.


Aliya sexsena- fashion divaa of ths clg nd loves dhruv.


Dhruv vedhant- cute nd shy boy nd loves aliya a lot.


Cabir dhawan- cupid boy nd crush on navya from first day og the clg. Nd manik best friend


Navya- sweet girl nd nandu best frnd nd crush on cabir.


Mukti alluwaliya- tomboy, nd navni nd aliya r best friend.


Neeta murthy- nandini mom , lovely person,nyonika best friend love her daughter nd loves manik like beta.


Suraj murthy- nandini father nd sweet person, loves nandini nd manik a lot.


Nyonika malhotra- manik mom, neeta best frnd nd sweet person nd loves nandini like a mom from childhood nd loves manik too.


Mitesh malhotra- manik dad, nauthy nd loving person, loves nandini very much




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Posted: 9 years ago
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interesting
plz continue
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice c.s...
Sounds interesting...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazingg cs
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter-1


MALHOTRA MANSION


NYO(manik mom):- mitesh aapko nhi lgta ki hmme aab manik ke liye ladki dhudnichiye aab woh 25 ka hone wala h aur uske clg life bhi complete hone wali h


Mitesh(manik dad):- ha baat toh sahi h tumari par tumhe lgta h tumara pyara beta shaadi ke liye ha bolega 1 mahine se puch puch karthak gya hu mei usse mujhe bolta h dad chill relaxx abhi meri umar hi kya h aur abhi room me so hi rha hoga khumbhkaran tum hi baat krna usse iss baare me fir btana mujhe kya bola usne


Nyo:-aap chinta mat kigiye me usse baat krugi aur aap dekhna woh kbhi apni maa ko na nhi bolta


Mitesh:-ha woh toh akhir beta kiska h


Then nandini comes in malhotra mansion


Nan:- hey aunty ,uncle kaise ho aap aur yeh manik ka baccha kaha h kabse call kar rhi hu utha hi nhi rha h.


Nyo:-hum toh ekdum bdiya h beta aur woh sayad abhi tak so hi rha h


Mitesh wishpered in nyo ears aab tumare bacche ko koi nhi bacca skta


Nyo :-kya aap bhi bacho ke jaise kaan me bol rhe h


Mitesh:- nandu beta dekho toh hmara pyara sa baccha kya kar rha h( naughty tone me)


Nan:- ji uncle me abhi aayi


Mitesh:- nyo me bhi office jata hu late ho rha h bye nandu beta


Nandu:-bye uncle


Nyo:-jaldi aana


Mitesh:- haa baba


Nan:- aunty me manik ke bache ko abhi lati hu mera call nhi uthaya usne aur so rha h mujhe 7bje ka time dekar ki sath me clg chlege


IN MANIK ROOM


Manik was sleeping peacfully nd then he walk up with a jeark (because nandini ne uspe thande thande pani ki puri baalti daal di thi)


M-:what the hell ?nandu koi ese uthata h kya kisi ko kitna accha sapna dekh rha tha mei


N:- tu aur sapne omg manik malhotra sapne bhi dekhta hai hehehe


M:-stop laughing like a child


N:- toh tu kya budda ho gya h kya jo hass nhi skta tu bhi hasle mna thodi na kiya h


M:-bdi hasi aa rhi h nandu ki bacchi ko haaa aab dekh tu


N:- manik nhi mein aunty se bol dugi


M:-kyo kya hua darr gyi tu toh bda sab ko bolti rhti h nandini murthy kisi se nhi darti aur aab kya hua


N:- tu pahle yeh bta tune mujhe 7 bje ka time de diya aur tu yaha soo rha h aur itne call kiye woh bhi nhi uthaya tune


N:-aab yeh bhi toh bta de ki tere sapne me kon si ladki aayi thi


M:-oh just shut up ha tu toh chup hi rhe


N :-let me guess kahi kamini mam toh nhi aaye nd start laughing


M:- oh plz mere itne bure din bhi nhi aaye h jo kamini mam aayge mere sapno me


M:-mein itna handsome boy charming boy hu toh koi acchi hi aaygi na


N:- so tu yeh kehna chatna ki kamini mam acchi nhi h


Rukh tu aaj kamini mam ko bolti hu ki tu kya bol rha tha


M:-tu kuch jyada udhne nhi lag gyi aajkal jabse kamini mam ne tujhe incharge bnaya h tab se


N:-tu chup kar aur jaa ready ho ja clg ke liye late ho jayga warna pta h na phir kya hoga wahi kamini mam ka lecture sunna pdega kaha the abhi tak aap dono aur kya kar rhe the


M:- aab tera bolna ho gya ho toh jao na nhi toh bulegi tu meri baat hi nhi sunta h


N :- yeh hui na baat mere pyare bestee nd pull his cheek


M:-aab jao me ready ho ne


N:-ha ha ja na mna kisne kiya h chal me niche jati hu tu aa fatafat


M:- ha aata hu


IN HALL


Nyo:-aagyi nandu beta


Nan:-ha aunty


Nyo:- manik utha ya nhi abhi tak


Nan:- ready ho rha h abhi clg ke liye


Manik comes downstairs nd hug mom nd said good morning mom nd hug nandini too nd said good morning janglii billi


Nan:-aunty dekho isne mujhe kya bola


Nyo:- manikkk


Manik:-sorry


Man:-mom hum clg jaa rhe h nd move toward nandini nd said junglii billi nd walk away


Nan:-rukh tu abhi bta ti hu tujhe jagli billi kya hoti h


Manik:-pahle pakad toh sahi fir hi btaygi na


Nan:-rukh tu monster kahi ka


Manik:-woh toh me hu


Nyo watching these nd smile nd said inn dono ka kbhi kuch nhi ho skta pure bacche ki bacche h

Edited by Poojaja - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sounds interesting par manik ko nandu par crush nhh hai nt fair yr we could see possessive manik
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely story...continue waiting 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superb update...
Manan's bond is amazing...
Luved it...
Lukng forward for d next update ...
Plz continue soon...
Take care...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome
but it would've been better if manik has crush on nandini not she
Any continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very nice.
Continue soon.
Thanks for the pm

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