TWINJ SS: A FLIGHT TO LOVE.. part 7- page 32 [16.04.16]

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A FLIGHT TO LOVE


Prologue
Hey everyone, this is an idea for a new story that just came to me. Felt kind of exciting so thought of going through with it. I just hope that the story flows well, but keep in mind, it'll be a short story, so it'll be done soon, hopefully! And one more thing, the updates might not always be super long or long for that matter and sometimes may not even make sense. You'll have to bear with it. So do tell me if I should continue or not.
"Don't worry Mahi," Twinkle re-assured her little sister, "I know you don't want me to leave but I promise I'll be back soon!"
"Lekin di," Mahi started. "I just wish I didn't have to finish my exams and stay here,"
"Mahi," Twinkle went closer to her to hug her. "Maami understands that, don't worry,"
Twinkle had to go to her Maami's daughter in laws baby shower, and Mahi wanted to come as well, but unfortunately Mahi couldn't come because of her exams and college.
"Ab mujhe jaana hai," Twinkle says, inching towards the gate.
Mahi hugs her again tighter this time.
"Promise me you'll take care of yourself okay," Twinkle pats her head.
"Di, I really miss mama papa," Mahi tears.
Their parents had died when Twinkle and Mahi were both really young, and so they'd been raised by their Maami, but then once Twinkle enrolled in college, Maami was called back to Delhi by her son, and so she left Twinkle and Mahi to fend for themselves.
Twinkle waved again at Mahi before disappearing into the tunnel to the plane.
"4C, 4C, 4C," Twinkle mutters under her breath, looking for her seat. She finally locates it and so she sits down, her heart trembling with the fact that for the first time she was travelling alone. She closes her eyes and tries to slow her breathing.
Someone slowly sits down next to her, and she inhales the musky scent of someone's cologne, and slowly opens her eyes and sees a guy sitting next to her, in blue jeans and a white shirt with a black blazer on top. He turns and catches her staring at him. "Hi, I'm Kunj, Kunj Sarna." He sticks out his hand, and Twinkle looks down at it.
"I'm Twinkle, Twinkle Taneja." Twinkle slowly places her hand in his, and immediately pulls it back, feeling the small spark of energy.
Very short, I know! But it was the initial teaser part! I just hope everyone likes the rest of it! I do have a vague idea as to how to continue with this. Anyhow do let me know if you found this interesting enough.




index
prologue- page 1
part 1- page 4
part2- page 9
Part3- page 16
part4- page 19
part5- page 25
part6- page 29
part7- page 32
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting story i liked it
I love the idea of Twinkle and Kunj meeting fresh/again in our sense
Continue soon😊
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Ragini u started a new story yippee
I love the start it's gonna be AU so super exciting

Continue soon and ur updates always make sense to me to no need to worry
Chill maar
I hope ur maahi isn't too annoying lol
I'm sad leela is dead but happy RT is too lol
Love ya twin
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: 3dancelover

Interesting story i liked it

I love the idea of Twinkle and Kunj meeting fresh/again in our sense
Continue soon😊

Thank you uma!
I just hope u have the patience to sit this one through
But one thing
This is nothing like the show
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting concept
Looking forward to read it Ragini
Cont Soon
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Originally posted by: Iansomer1

Ragini u started a new story yippee

I love the start it's gonna be AU so super exciting

Continue soon and ur updates always make sense to me to no need to worry
Chill maar
I hope ur maahi isn't too annoying lol
I'm sad leela is dead but happy RT is too lol
Love ya twin

Khush baad mei hona
Pehle apni story update kar😆
Ian itne high hopes achhe nahi hote..
I knew aur kisi ko bhale samajh na aye mere crazy twin ko pakka samajh ayega
Mahi is not annoying here. U'll love her
And i didn't want RT here and right now leela seems weird to me too
So dono ko maar diya 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anam Ali

Interesting concept

Looking forward to read it Ragini
Cont Soon

Thank you anam
Working on part one
Will be done soon, hopefully 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting teaser...Loved it
Please continue soon..😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Ragini wow this is interesting
i am excited
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Posted: 9 years ago
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A totaly fresh story... thats what I loved about it... continue..soon

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