*NiBir os-My star in the night*

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k's yeh train ma bor hone ka natija h agar tum logo ko bor ho maaf kar dena bt do give ur opinion plz no proof read n if possible toh plz koi pms send kar do

Na jaane kaisi sazish kar rahe ho tum
Na jaane kabse meri chahat ban gaye ho tum
Jise khud mein mehsus kar rahi hu ma
Na jaane kaise woh dhadkan ban gaye ho tum"

Her melodious voice echoed in his ears forming an adorable curve on his face he sat on the rocks tilting his head up towards the dark sky filled with twinkling little stars
"Kahan ho tum taara...ek saal ho gaya us raat ko jab mana tumhe aakhri baar dekha tha...ab aur kitna pareshan karogi plz laut aao" he was gazing the stars in the sky when a tear rolled down his cheeks he closed his eyes reliving the best few hours of his life
FLASHBACK

The sky was clear n bright the horizon was covered with tiny twinkling stars the silver moonlight shone brightly over the large sea the beach glittered beautifully in the night the cold winds blew softly over the sand and waves lapped against the sea shore it was indeed a beautiful moment of time while he removed his shoes n started walking on the shore listening to the soft music of waves n adoring the beauty of nature he found solace on that isolated beach
"It feels so pleasant being here" he said closing his eyes n inhaling the fresh air of the beach as soon as he closed his eyes a melodious voice surrounded his senses

Faili Thi Siyaah Raatein, Aaya Toh Subah Leke
Khama Si Zindagi Mein Jeene Ki Wajah Leke
Khoya Tha Samundaron Mein, Tanha Safeena Mera
Saahilon Pe Aaya Hai, Tu Jaane Kis Tarah Haan Leke
Kuch Toh Hai Tujhse Raabta
Kuch Toh Hai Tujhse Raabta
Kaise Hum Jaane Hume Kya Pata
Kuch Toh Hai Tujhse Raabta
Ab Kya Hai Kehna, Humko Hai Rehna
Jannatein Bhula Ke Teri Baahon Mein Mein Panah Leke
Faili Thi Siyaah Raatein, Aaya Toh Subah Leke
Khama Si Zindagi Mein Jeene Ki Wajah Leke
Meharbaani Jaate Jaate Mujh Pe Kar Gaya


He was spellbound by the enchanting voice n started walking towards it's source he kept walking enjoying the moment to the fullest when his eyes fell on a girl sitting on rocks gazing the twinkling stars with her beautiful black orbs shining in gentle moonlight she was so lost in those stars n song that she didn't even noticed him

Guzarta Sa Lamha Ek Daaman Bhar Gaya
Tere Nazara Mila, Roshan Sitaara Mila
Takdeer Ka Jaise Koi Ishaara Mila


He was completely lost in her voice n sang few lines successfully gaining her attention
She turned towards him n was lost in that hazel brown pool that his eyes were

Roothi Hui Khwaishon Mein Thodi Si Sulah Leke
Aaya Tu Khamoshiyon Mein, Baaton Ki Chirah Leke
Khoya Tha Samundaron Mein, Tanha Safeena Mera
Saahilon Pe Aaya Hai, Tu Jaane Kis Tarah
Haan Leke
Kuch Toh Hai Tujhse Raabta
Kuch Toh Hai Tujhse Raabta
Kaise Hum Jaane Hume Kya Pata
Kuch Toh Hai Tujhse Raabta
Ab Kya Hai Kehna, Humko Hai Rehna
Jannatein Bhula Ke Teri Baahon Mein Mein Panah Leke
Faili Thi Siyaah Raatein, Aaya Toh Subah Leke
Khama Si Zindagi Mein Jeene Ki Wajah Leke


She than sang the last few lines looking in his hazel brown orbs while he started taking slow steps towards the mysterious beauty who was now standing near the rocks he stood in front of her as she completed her song

"beautiful" he complimented bringing her back to reality she broke the eye-lock n shifted her gaze to the other side
"thank you" she whispered feeling a bit shy due to his intense gaze
"ummm...sorry to interrupt you it's just that the song was too beautiful n I couldn't control myself"he said
"it's completely fine" she smiled at him n continued "u really have a sweet voice"
"not better than u"
"ummm...I...I should leave" she said n picked her bag
He didn't knew y bt he wanted to stop her bt how could he stop her she is a stranger afterall
He was busy in his thoughts when he heard her voice
"ouch!!!" she winced in pain
"kya hua" he asked coming back to reality
"vo pair ma kanch chub gaya"
"ohh god yaha aau baitho" he made her sit on the rock n sat on the sand he slowly removed the piece of glass while she cried in pain he hurriedly took out his handkerchief n tied it on her feet
"tum thik ho?? bohot jyada dard toh nhi ho raha???? ma first aid kit lekar aau??? Tumhe doctor ke pass jaana h???"he asked worried expression on his face she could clearly see the concern in his eyes
"ma thik hu tum fikar mat karo"
"u sure"
"yes"
"ok par thodi der yahi batith jao pair pe jyada pressure mat daalo"
"hmmm" she replied n kept her bag on the sand she patted the spot besides her signaling him to sit he did as she told and n uncomfortable silence settled between them which was broken by him
"hiiee m kabir...kabir kumar" he said forwarding his hand for a handshake she shaked his hands n replied "hiiee"
"vaise tum yaha itni raat ko matlab it's 2am" she asked
"haa...bas yuhi man kiya toh aa gaya...aur tum"
"vo bas taare dekhne ka man kar raha tha toh aa gayi"
"tumhe taare dekhna pasand h?"
"haa meri maa kehti thi ki taare hamari aankho ko naye sapno se bhar dete h toh jab bhi naye sapne chunane ka man karta h toh inhe dekh leti hu"she said this trying to smile bt it didn't felt like a genuine smile to him he avoided his thoughts n smiled at her
"mera dard kam ho gaya h mujhe chalna cahiye" she said n picked up her bag she stood up to leave bt she lost her balance n was about to fall bt he held her by her shoulders she looked at him her senses flew away t the distance between them was reducing with every passing second both knew that they should stop but their senses were long lost...they were really close and all she could could see was the mesmerising hazel brown orbs which were hypnotizing her...their noses were almost touching he snaked his arms around her waist he cupped her face with his other hand n pulled her face a bit more closer she could feel his warm breath on her neck making her go crazy "kabir"she whispered making it more difficult for him to pull back he looked in her eyes which were firmly closed he moved towards her forehead n stepped back
"m...m sorry" he whispered
"Na jaane kaisi sazish kar rahe ho tum
Na jaane kabse meri chahat ban gaye ho tum
Jise khud mein mehsus kar rahi hu ma
Na jaane kaise woh dhadkan ban gaye ho tum"

He looked at her shocked while she smiled at him
"i should leave"
"wait plz don't go"
"goodbye"she said smiling
"At Least apna naam toh batati jao"
"jo tumhe pasand ho vo bula lo"
"taara"
She smiled at him turned to leave
"ek min can I hug u for one time?"he asked looking straight in her eyes
She threw herself in his arms n whispered
"thank you for making my 20th birthday special...I didn't wanted to celebrate this day alone"
Kabir was shocked will be an understatement bt before he can react she was gone
FLASHBACK ENDS

"Mana tumhara naam taara rakha tha kyuki us din tumne mujhe ek naya sapna dikhaya tha the dream to live a happy life with u...aaj ma yahi hu usi jagah tumhara intazaar kar raha hun n I know u will be back after all ma apne bacho se yeh nhi kehne sakta ki I fell for a girl jiska mujhe asli naam bhi nhi pata"
"Nisha"he heard a voice n smiled
Edited by crazyvaishu - 9 years ago

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crazyvaishu thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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m sorry kyuki mana abhi tak kisi update pe comment nhi kiya bt plz wait till 4th march n updates bhi uske baad hi milege
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome vaishu 👏
Loved it
Please isse ts bana do please




P.s- Can i send pm on your behalf
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Aww...
Thts so lovely!!!😳
Awesomely written...
Thnx for the pm

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awww lovely
Thanks for the pm sujay
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I LOVED IT 🤗please continue soon .and thanks for the pms
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Posted: 9 years ago
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WOW! It was so BEAUTIFUL
LOVED it ❤️❤️❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I love it... But I love the song more
Roothi hui khawaashion main thodi si sulaah leke aaya tu khamooshiyoon main bataon ki chirah leke... Khoya tha samundaron main tanha safeena mera sahilon pe laya hai tu jane kis tarah leke❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely os 😊
One request please make this ts I want one more part plzzz...😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superb OS vaissy 😊
U started this os with a perfect song😃
It's lyrics is beautiful n I loved it❤️
Kabir nisha ki awaaz sunke uska demand ho gya😊
Der silence dear talk der comfort was described beautifully 👏
Kabir use rokna chahta tha destiny ne rok liabilit use😊
Kabir ne uska 20th bday yaadgaar bna dia
Der hug❤️
Taara... 😉

FINALLY she told him her name😊

N he smiles...

Plz vaissy ise ts bna de yr... Pretty plz😊
Edited by itznimi003 - 9 years ago

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