Shanav-COLLAB SS YEH DOSTI HUM NAHI TODENGE (PART17 pg72)

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.anjali.

@.anjali.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: ice-cold
Wow 👏
Well written girls ⭐️⭐️
I am liking this more than the current track 😃😃

Yaayyy..thanx🤗

Hum bhi current track se pak chuke..to socha kuch alag ho jaye😉

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.anjali.

@.anjali.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: kulasya
Nice story . It's even better than current track . 👍🏼 Update next part soon. 😊
Par yar mujhe pahle pm karte to acha hota. Mai bhi kuch contribute kar sakta tha . Chalo koi nahi . 😆

Thankoos🤗

We will be waiting for your version...AT mein post karna or if possible yahi post kar dena we all will love to read some new ideas and additions😃

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.anjali.

@.anjali.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: coolhi1988
Awesome work...
anju, krishu fabulous job...

anju index update karo.. & pic wala post me pic kyu nikal diye tune???

dikhao shanav ka jalwa...

& mujhe thnks bolne ki jarurat nai h..
alag se thread banayi to kai log padh sakte h.. AT me hi likhte to har koi chk ni kar pata...

my pleasure..

continue soon...

Maine pix ni nikalinahi visible hai kya??repost karun?

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Krish58

@Krish58

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Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: .anjali.

Thankoos🤗
We will be waiting for your version...AT mein post karna or if possible yahi post kar dena we all will love to read some new ideas and additions😃

Thank you

Kulaysa we would love if you contribute we will surely ask you ..when we are in confusion and yes plz if possible give new ideas and you can even start your new story na activity badh jaaigi

Hiyu , anji and me will surely ask you for ur views and ideas do freely give it idea

Hoon?

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hiya

@coolhi1988

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Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: .anjali.

Maine pix ni nikalinahi visible hai kya??repost karun?

abhi dikhai di...
ek kaam karegi... maine jo banner post kia h na woh bhi apne post me upload karde.. me wahan kuch aur post karne wali huu...
huu??

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Kulasya.

@Kulasya.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: Krish58

Thank you
Kulaysa we would love if you contribute we will surely ask you ..when we are in confusion and yes plz if possible give new ideas and you can even start your new story na activity badh jaaigi

Hiyu , anji and me will surely ask you for ur views and ideas do freely give it idea

Hoon?

Hooonnn

Edited by kulasya - 9 years ago

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Krish58

@Krish58

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Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: .anjali.

Yaayyy..thanx🤗
Hum bhi current track se pak chuke..to socha kuch alag ho jaye😉

Thanks ice cold.. Yes hum bhi bahut frustrated hogaye the chipkali( Anna) ke vajah se aur yeh track se. Toooih aise thodaaa socha kiii bas aise thoda change deke Story banaye .

Thanks MTA

Will continue soon

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Krish58

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Posted: 9 years ago

#28

Part 3. The Confrontation

Manav - kaha le jaa raha hai hemant..

Hemant- be patient😆.. They both colony garden.. Manav picks up bags which he had bought for sharad..

Assume hemant knows woh sab gift manav sharad ke liye laya hai..

Sharad contacts hemant..

Sharad- ae hemant kaha ho tum dono.

Hemant- chacha mein manav bhaiya ke saath colony garden mein hoon manav bhaiya aapke liye Jo gifts laai the.. Bag mein Woh baga lene gaye hai.

Sharad- manav mere kiye gift laya tha? 😭

Hemant- haan aapke liye laaye the.

Sharad- acha soon Ab Jo mein kehta hoon waisa bolke manav ko hamare ghar le aa. Hoon

Hemant- eeeh.. Hoon..😃

Hemant comes to manav..and starts crying..😭

Hemant- manav bhaiya.. Jaldi chaliye sharad chacha ko kuch ho gaya hai..jaldi chaliye 😭

Manav - hemant kya hua hai sharad .. Ko😲 aur tum roh kyu rahe ho..

Hemant- chaliye na bhaiya chacha ko kuch ho gaya hai 😭

And hemant drags manav with him

Manav - hemant kya hua sharad ko aur vasant bhaiya aur varsha bhabhi kaha hai..

Hemant doesn't say anything and drags manav to ghotala's house..

Lights are switch off..

Manav- yeh light kyu bandh ..hai..hemant hemant kaha hai ... Hemant tu thik toh haina..😲😲😳

Koi jawab nai deta...

Manav -sharad kaha ho tum jawab do mujeh.. Kaha ho thik toh ho.. Sharad..

Sharad from back

Sharad- nai manav mein bilkul bhi thi nahi hoon..😭

Manav turns back and sees sharad standing and piche se shishir apne superpowers se sorry wala ppt chala tha.. Hai with music.. 👏

Sharad : kaise ho sakta hoon thik mein apne dost ka dil toda hai..😭 Aur logically dekhay jaay toh manav mujeh aisa nahi karna chahiye tha tume hamari bahut help ki hai ,saath diya hai jab kissine nahi diya tha..

I m sorry manav mein tumhe bahut hurt kiya hai yeh kehki tum chance lelelo ge jab mein Anna sa rutha hoon..😭

Sharad and manav were both in tears..😭😭😭

Sharad- sach kahu manav toh mein Anna ke dosti ke saamne andha hogaya tha..aur kitna galat socha mein ne tumhare liye.. Aur sach yeh bhi hai haan mera raaz hai Jo mein kisiko nahi bataa sakta. Aur jhut bolke mein kisika dil nahi tod sakta.. .😊

Sache dost toh tum ho mere manav kyuki😊 tumne hame hamare secret ke saath accept kiya hai bina koi sawal aur shaq ke aur dosti nibhayi hai aur colonywale aur Anna ne hum par hamesha shaq kiya hai jabhi koi gadbad hui ho ya na hui ho..😃

manav is touched by sharads gestures..😭

M:aisa mere liye kisi ne nahi kia..tum mere sache dost ho..tumhe😃 pata hai aj jab ana ne bola ke wo tumhe gift de ke manana chahti h to muje bura laga..ana me kbi aisa mere liye nahi kia..isi liye mai waha se chala gaya...par phir socha ke iss choti si baat pe naraz ho ke kya fayda..mai ye maan ke age badh jaunga k ana meri kabi thi hi nahi..isiliye mai uske paas wapis gaya taki mai uski help kar sakun tumhe manane me..akhir dosti jo nibhani hai..

phir jab tum aye to muje laga tum wo packets mere liye laye ho..I got excited..but😊 phir pta lga unme to ana ki yadein hain..ise chodo..zyada bura to muje iss baat ka laga k tumhe lgta hai mai ana aur tumhare beech aaunga..nahi😭😭 sharad never...mai apne doston ke liye jaan de skta hu pr unka dil kbi ni tod skta... 😭😭😭

Sharad- nahi manav bich mein mein aaya hoon tumhare or Anna ke bich..shayad tumhe nahi patah lekin jab tum yaha nahi the toh Anna tumhara har pal intezaar karti thi😊... Aur jab usse patah chala ki tum shahid hogaye ho sarhad paar phir bhi usse vishwas ke tha ki tum zinda ho aur wapas jaroor aao.. 😊

Jab usne tumhe sarhad paar dekha tha na toh usse aakho mein Jo pyar tha.. Jo tumhe dekhne ki khushi thi.. Woh Aaj tak mein ne apne liye bhi nahi dekhi.. 😭😭

Anna ko mein dokhe mein rakh ke uska dil nahi tod sakta.

. Manav mein tumhara aur Anna ka phir se yayaya kar waaunga.. Yeh mera vada hai..😃😃😃

Manav(with tears)- mujeh maaf kardo uss din 31st ki party ke din mein tum par chillaya tha aur tumhe hurt kiya tha jab Tumne kaha tha ki tum mujeh apna dost mante ho..

Sharad- nahi,nahi manav mujeh bilkul bhi bura nahi laga mein samaj sakta hoon tumhara dard ..tum kya feel kar rahe ho.. Jab apno se hi koi baat chupani ho ...tab kaisa lagta hai yeh hum se zyada aur koi nahi janta.. Manav

With these manav and sharad hug each other.. 👏🤗

Manav- tum mere sabse ache dost ho sharad..😃

Sharad- aur tum mere sabse ache dost ho manav. 😃

In background yeh dosti hum nahi todenge is going on.

Actually ,vasant is singing song ..

Hemant is happy and he switch on the lights and says..😃

Hemant- areee waah chacha aap aur manav chacha ne katti karli..

Manav and sharad are surprised.. And both laughs at hemantgiri😆

Vasant comes.

Vasant- are gende , woh batti hota hai ..katti kya hota hai .. Haan.. Varsha yeh dekho na kya kar raha hai..😊

Vasant- hemant,woh katti nai hota hai..katti matalb jab koi Ruth jata hai aur humse baat nai karta usse katti kehte hai .. Aur batti matalb jab hum kissi ko mana lete hai aur baat karne lagte hai...usse batti kehte hai..

Hemant- nai ,nai papa batti nai bunty woh happy home society mein rehta hai na woh bunty ..batti. Nahi..aapko toh kuch nahi aata..😆

Vasant- mujeh nahi atta ..mujeh..tujeh nahi aata hemant hamesha galat naam aur surname bolta hai. Samajhao na isse manav aise nahi chalta..

Even before manav could speak..

Vasant- yeh dekh gende.. And vasant makes apper his anytime black board to teach .. 😆

Manav is shocked..😲😲

Varsha- vasant yeh aap kya kar rahe hai ..manav hai saamne..😲

Vasant realise that he had shown his superpower in front of manav ..

Manav - yeh ..yeh kaise kiya aapne uncle.. Yeh kya tha ... Aap log kon hai...😲

All ghotala's are shocked ..😲

Edited by Krish58 - 9 years ago

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Anamta

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Posted: 9 years ago

#29

Yay maine sabse pehle pada

Chalo ab comments lo. Bohot achha hai. I like it*saxena style*

Mujhe bohot achha laga ye part. Congo babes😆

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hiya

@coolhi1988

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Posted: 9 years ago

#30

anju aaj rat ko tune agar yeh index full update ni kia na to me tujhe mukka marungi... ronnie wala mukka...
index me banner , cs, idea, credit, prologue yeh sab bhi likhna padta h...
aur title bhi update kar...

Edited by coolhi1988 - 9 years ago