A Night Mare SiRa SKR OS

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A NIGHT MARE


SIRA OS


Sita : She woke up suddenly and is profusely sweating. She started

sobbing making a slightest sound so as her husband sleeping beside

her does not wake up

She slowly get down their soft silky bed and walks out through

the long corridors.

everyone is asleep


Ram : Ram shifts in his sleep and as a habit puts his hand over Sita.

Ram abruptly wake up as he could not find her. He starts searching

for her in their room. Sita is nowhere. Ram always wants to keep

his Sita in a distance not more than his reach of eyesight. Sita...

Sita... Where are you and searching her he walks out of the

room

knowing that she may be in their garden on her favourite

swing.


Sita : Silently crying her heart out sat on the swing in the garden


Ram : He comes and silently sit beside her. Placing his hand over her

shoulder and bringing her more closer to him he make her rest on

his shoulder


Sita : Ram why do you have to trouble yourself. I didn't want to disturb

you thats why i am here.


Ram : Is it the same bad dream again???


Sita : Why Ram, Why do i get that bad dream always. I can't even

narrate it to others, what if it comes true?? Now tears flow endlessly

from her eyes even wetting Ram's shoulders.


Ram : Sita you know me very well i can't bear tears in your eyes. He

gently wipes her tears. If something is troubling you then it troubles

me too please share that dream with me you will feel relieved


Sita : It is...It is...

Its that i cannot live without you Ram. Not even for a minute i can

imagine your absence in my life.


Ram : Sita what are you talking about?? Slightly lifting her head cupping

it with both his hands. Sita you know very well Ram is no one if

Sita is not in his life. Sita you cannot stay away from me but I

can't stand even one minute if you go missing out of my sight.


Sita : I am sorry for troubling you next time i will wake you up


Ram : Sita don't divert the topic tell me what is that bad dream.


Sita : Ram i don't even know where i was in that dream. I have never

been there. I am all alone. You were not there. I was sitting under a

sitting under a big tree and... Sita is really sacred now, she

burries her head in Ram's chest and starts crying badly.


Ram: Sita... Sita ...look at me come on say it out. Sita you trust me

right please tell me


Sita : Ram i was surrounded by demons really scary. Ram promise me

you will never leave me alone


Ram : Ram smiles at her innocent wife. Sita now stop crying please

dear. Sita Ram makes her sit straight wipes her tears with his hands

make her sit closer to him in his embrace wrapping her in his strong

arms...

Sita you know that i am strong enough to fight the demons. Life is

very uncertain we cannot waste it on unnecessary thoughts.

Sita it is true that some dreams come true but not all. And more

over we are in Ayodhya Raj Bhavan and are safe.


Sita : Ram I am worried as i don't think that dream is baseless from few

days i am repeatedly having the same dream. What if it...

before she says anything Ram closes her mouth with his hand.


Sita : Ram I am extremely sorry for spoiling your mood.


Ram : No need to be sorry, Sita remember one thing if anytime I am not

around you and you miss me...Ram makes he look at the moon

in the sky... Seeing the moon close your eyes think about me when

you open your eyes you can see me through the moon. You can

talk to me even if we are far away from each other i will be listening

to you.


Sita : Sita smiles at Ram and sleeps on his lap while Ram caress her hair.



After a while when Sita is asleep Ram carries her in his arms to their

room make her sleep on the bed an covers her with a blanket in a loving way. This is a scene just few days after their marriage in Ayodhya. They never knew whats in store for them.

After few days they left Ayodhya along with Lakshmana to vanvaas and then Sita's Apaharan takes place. Sita is in Ravan's Ashoka vaan closing her teary eyes slowly opening them trying to see her Ram in the moon. Remebering their conversation in Ayodhya missing her favourite swing in their garden, missing her Ram's sweet consoling voice, his touch trying to act brave in between the wild demons of Lanka

Saying Ram she closes her eyes and dozes into sleep.










hope you guys liked it

do share your comments

manas😊

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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome and very emotional one shot.
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Originally posted by: Javeria3991

awesome and very emotional one shot.

thanks dear😊
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This is an emotional OS. I almost had tears. Write more
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Awww ! This was awesome and really emotional !
I loved the way you wrote as dialogues rather than description !

I still wonder how did Sita managed all those days in Ashok vatika ?
Midst of all demons , missing her family , missing her husband ,
Added to that is Raavan's fear . She is really Brave .

Write more like this .😃

Love,
Sruthi

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Hey Manas.
Awww...it's very emotional.
Beautifully written...loved it.

Please do write more .

Thanks for the PM.
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thanks priyu😳
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You know Suguna you are just Ultimate yaar.🤗 I have no words to thank you for doing this OS🤗, & I am going to tweet this for ppl to read, with ur permission, its mind blowing..!!
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Originally posted by: TOTAL-ROMANTIC

You know Suguna you are just Ultimate yaar.🤗 I have no words to thank you for doing this OS🤗, & I am going to tweet this for ppl to read, with ur permission, its mind blowing..!!


jarur kardena par mere naam suguna kahi use mat kana meri daadi ka naam hai aur mujhae bilkul pasand nahi😆 kya karu jabardasti jud gayi😆
tweet karne ke baad please mujae link pm kardena i want to see how it looks on twitter😃
call me manasa or just manas😃

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