swasan ff *Tu rooh hai toh main kaaya banu* chap 2 upd page 1 all

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Hi people am Esha..new in this forum...i am a swasan lover and i have read a quite number of fictions by fans and i am quite impressed by these fictions..so i decided to write one myself 😊..as i am a newbie i need all ur wishes and comments so that i can improve myself.Being an avid swaragini lover..i have done justice to quite a few characters that i really like but basically this fan fiction is based on my sweethearts swara and sanskar 😃 hope u all like it.i am posting a short synopsis on my dimaagi plotand then i'll post chapter 1 and rest..please read and comment below 😳
tu rooh hai toh main kaaya banu
synopsis: swara and sanskar are married officially and in front of the maheshwari and gadodia family.as u all know swara now wants to unite raglak and agrees not to divorce sanskar..what happens next.
raglak are united now and laksh no more loves swara.And swara has also forgot the past and has decided to move on with sanskar.
genre:romance
censor issue:16+
Scene-today finally its swasan's wedding night

swara is happy and sanskar is confused
chapter 1
Swara is sitting on the bed wearing formals when sanskar arrives..
sanskar:swara tum sure hona ki tum yeh mere saath karne wali hon?
Swara:sanskar tum mere pati hon aur tumhara mujhe claim karne ka haq banta hai!
Sanskar: 😲 omg!
Swara:kya hua..chalo aajao bed par mein kabse tumhara wait kar rahi hun
Sanskar:haan haan (nervously)
(Swara shifts a little and sanskar sits beside her.she indicates him to untie her dori of the blouse.sanky gulps and swara blushes..he unties it shiveringly.he then slowly rubs his lips on swara's nape..to which swara in response kisses his ears.
Sanskar smiles and opens his shirt.he kisses her back and comes near her stomach.he slowly sucks her navel and swara winks.sanskar then climbs her stomach to kiss her.she kisses him back.he smooches her passionately and vigourously.then he breaks the kiss and sucks her soft neck.swara huffs.he then completely undresses her and kisses every inch of her face.then he switches off the lights and makes love to her.swara enjoys it.next morning:swara wakes up when the sunshine touches her face.she finds herself tucked in her hubby's arms.she smiles and remembers last night moments
tu rooh hai toh main kaaya banu taumr main tera saaya banu keh de toh ban jaau bairaag mein keh de toh main teri maaya banu tu saaz hain main ragini tu raat hain main chandni
so people this was my small chapter 1.1..hope its not vulgar and does'nt hurt anyone..but please comment below so that i can continue..ignore the #typo's..
precap:swasan moments & nok-jhok between swara and
laksh..swara pregnant

😊 thank u and comment below 😊 NOT PROOF READ..PLEASE READ ALL THE UPDATES FOR THE PROPER STORY..COMMENT BELOW AND MAKE ME BE BETTER..THE FF INCLUDES CHAPTERS1,1.2,2
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sure as soon as i am free from my work i'll continue 😆
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hi ppl i m back with my FF chapter 1.2.Sorry for the late post
CHAPTER1.2
swara now broke her world of imaginations and slowly freed herself from sanskar's protective hold.She tried not to disturb his sleep and slowly wore her clothes,but the thing she didnt realise that sankar was already awake.She quickly came out of her cozy nook and directed herself towards the washroom.yak!yak!
yak!yak!;the sound of vomiting which sanskar heard.He woke up with a start feeling scared.What has happened to swara?did i do something last night that made her sick?why is she puking?he rushed towards the washroom and banged the door. 😕
Sanskar:Swara!swara! Kya hua tum bahut bimar ho kya?abhi ruko bas 2 minute mein doctor ko bulaata hun!
*she stops vomiting 🤢 *
swara:nahi sanskar ji! I am ok
Sanskar:sanskar ji 😕 ? Swara pehle tum baahar aao
swara:ji!aati hun!
*she comes out*sanskar grabs her hand in concern*
Sanskar:swara tum thik to hon naa?zyada tabiyat kharab hai?doctor ko bulaoo?
swara:nahi main thik hun sanskar ji!bas aapko kuch bataana hai!aap zara sun lijiye naa!
Sanskar:pehle toh tum yeh ji-ji band karo! Haan batao
swara:achha sanskar!woh-woh!mmm...mujhe yy..yeh kk..kehna tha kkk..ki
Sanskar:shanti se batao! Aaraam se! Now how will swara say sanskar that she is pregnant?
to read more..keep an eye on my post...next update will be soon..till then keep reading folks!!
😊 ignore the typo's and comment below
Esha
CHAPTER 2 COMING SOON..GIVE UR COMMENTS BELOW ⭐️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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chapter 2
yeah hi peeps..sorry for posting the update late.but here's the 2nd partof my ff
so,this chapter is going to be a rom-com(romantic comedy).and i am mainly writing it in english.believe me and keep ur shoes & eggs aside.please comment and help me be better.:-)
chapter starts
situation-swara pregnant
San:shanti se batao! Aaram se!
swa:woh baat hai ki i m pregnant
San: 🥳 wow babe! Amazing...so whats so embarrassing about it?
swa:are u out of ur mind idiot! none can directly confess this
San:OK! By the way what was that ji-ji thing?
🥱 swa:oh i m sorry about that actually i was nervous!
San:yeah I understand!but from now on be careful haan shona:-)
SWA:yeah I'll be but first let's go and inform others
San:yeah but wait let me give my baby a kiss 😆
SWA: 😲 😕 but it isn't out yet then whom are u going to kiss now?
San:obviously you and your tummy Cuz I was so tensed after your weird behaviour, now I need to cool myself by touching your pink blossom lips my mine.
SWA:oh ho my hubby is in a romantic mood right now?
San:so what?come on.
*sanskar comes closer,swara shifts back a little and begins to fall.sanskar catches her and pouts 🤓
SWA:aah!thanks sanskar and what is it that u r sulking?
San:something's with you.you've made it your habit now! 😡
SWA:oh!that ''thank you'' thing I m so...oops I mean I'll not repeat it again
San:yeah thanks and sorry too but you've made a habit to fall every other time 😲
SWA:uff! Sanskar what's my mistake in that?chalo leave it and take your kiss and then we'll go 😉
sanskar kisses swara's juicy lips and sucks it gently converting it to a smooch,he invades and acknowledges her mouthing by inserting his tongue and then he breaks it and bends towards her butterous and smooth belly and sucks her navel gently and then he kisses her tummy and brushes his nose on it..swara winks
SWA:it was more than a kiss!but I liked it
San:oh very well then now you've completely understood how hot and romantic your hubby is?waise you taste so nice in bright mornings haan 😆
SWA:shut up you pervert!
THEY LAUGH AND LEAVE THEIR ROOM TO GO DOWNSTAIRS

precap: swara-laksh nok-jhok,swasan's rain dance & swara's miscarriage ( a lil tragic i know)
please please comment below and let me know how was it:-)
<font size="5">Esha</font> 😆 <font size="6">chapter 3 coming soon</font>
Edited by eshat.k - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Pls continue soon y miscarriage
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Read all parts..nice updates 👍🏼

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