T4| ArHi FF Second Chances| Link to Thread 5, pg 143 - Page 95

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Posted: 9 years ago
Oh my god.. I am breathing hard.. Can't believe it.. That was beautifully written girl..
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Posted: 9 years ago
A continental shift it was !! My heart skipped a beat when you mentioned Arnav opened his heart wide and Kushi reciprocate it without hesitation, eyes shining and showing him her love!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey Mirabell,
I can't believe how much I missed this story since I left IF. It sure looks like I came back at the perfect time. I just caught up to all the chapters since July and I truly enjoyed them even staying late to read after the kids went to bed. I love this Arnav and his patience and determination at making his second chance work. He is honest, amazing at communicating his feelings and amazing with his squirt. This is not even including his time with Maya. I love how he knows ecxactly what he wants and works on making it it a reality. Kushi would have given up so quickly and some may think he is too pushy but to me he is not letting his second chance escape without giving his all. He so deserves some happiness and I was very happy that you have made his torture come to an end. Now that I have re read some of the chapters and the updates since, I have to applaud y ou for describing perfectly everything that made Kushi hold back, her sense of being responsible for both Her daughter and mil, her fear of losing again, her inner conflicts on what a widow should do, her inner conflicts on how she is feeling, and so much. This is truly one of the special story of people who met when they were young, could not make it work at that time and reconnecting after they are matured. The fact that you have so many young readers enjoying a mature story should be the best compliment of your incredible writing. I know many (including me) were impatient and wanted to rush you but kudos to you for unfolding the story so we can appreciate each character in this story, Arnav and Maya's struggle, Nani, Mohan, Manorama who I so feel for (and i hope you can write an OS on how she comes out of this - not as the person losing everyone in the twilight of her years but her rebirth. She is a special character), the friends around Kushi in the US, Squirt and of course Kushi. This is really her journey and what a great ride it has been so far. But I know there is more in the cards even with her acceptance to be a part of his life. I love Mohan's Mema term - it shows how much Kushi and Meera have brought him out of his shell. Looking forward to your next update.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Oh,finally, ..finally I got some time out of my asli duniya to sit and read the wonderful few updates of this fantastic, heart wrenching, gut warming story... I just finished reading all the updates... N phew I can very well imagine what would you have gone through writing these updates when we readers are having a monster ride of an emotional roller coaster !!!!

Wonderful dear ... There are too many emotions running to even try and describe or analyse this beautiful story... I'll just go with the flow and would like to thank you for letting us experience thus..

Look forward to the next one !!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Brilliant!! Finally.. they are together... amazing!!

👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
When will you update dear???
Very eagerly waiting...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sweety421

When will you update dear???
Very eagerly waiting...


Updated Chapter 32 on Thread 5... :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update dear
Love this story very much
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Posted: 9 years ago
You are awesome writer dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
Both the part was awesome

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