New ASYA TS: One Night.... Passion of Love, chapter 2,pg18,23/11/15

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A.S.K

@ToughStuff

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Posted: 9 years ago

#171

Loved it Di... Its was awesome...

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nilusoni

@nilusoni

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Posted: 9 years ago

#172

superb part loved it

asya talk with dilshaad wow

asya moments amazing

thanx for pm

plz pm me for next

excited for asya nikaah

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Sathya

@IamCrazySeven

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Posted: 9 years ago

#173

chapter 1

bnhh episode was my favorite asya sequence 😳

you did fabulous job 👍🏼

asad want to marry zoya

asya moment were too good

lovely update

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Sathya

@IamCrazySeven

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Posted: 9 years ago

#174

chapter 2

it was another amazing chapter

asya confession was too good

i loved that totally

and asad confession his for zoya just wow

i didn't expected from him

and asya and dilu part was perfect

i wish gul showed something like this

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H.e.n.a

@H.e.n.a

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Posted: 9 years ago

#175

wow wonderful story choco!

well I don't know if u will allow me to call you choco. but phir bhi.😆

your recreation of BNHH has touched my heart.

this was simple yet beautiful.

loved their confession.

loved the scene in Dilshad's room.

Asad manofying ammi.

poor Zoya. couldn't handle the shock.

but all is well that ends well.

Finally AsYa together,

thank you so much for this loving story.

thanks for the pm😊

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surbhi

@suearmaniac

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Posted: 9 years ago

#176

hawww!!!
m so sorry choco!!!
didn't i unres here!!!
well m just going to do that today
so sorry
m kicking myself how cud i do this

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surbhi

@suearmaniac

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Posted: 9 years ago

#177

this part was written exceptionally well
frm the time they loose control to the end dot
it just swayed flawlessly
and i love that a lot about ur writing quality
things just floww ❤️
zoya crying in front of dilshaad was heart breaking and it did broke my heart omg!!!
but i loved how dilshaad ka dil pighla as zoya fainted exhaustingly
and i love her more when she said she has to call aapi and jiju
oh and thruout this i just adored asad
oh my how changed
yess he confessed and oh so openly and then when he held zoya by his side when she cried ki she lost her ek aur ammi
so heart breaking i cried so much
with zoya
and that u wrote it lively
so kudos to u choco
keep writing like this
love you 🤗

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Nav

@kabhi_asya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#178

Nice TS...

Really enjoyable and interesting...

A small asya scene and its a whole new story from that scene... liked it..

Totally opposite to what happen in serial..

Lovely...

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ChocoBerry

@ChocoBerry

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Posted: 9 years ago

#179

Thank you everyone for reading, liking and then commenting on this Two Shot. As much as I enjoyed writing it, I did read every comment you guys left and I really feel honored to have you all around.

I love you all so so much 🤗. Thank you all once again ❤️

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MrMrsAsyaKhan

@MrMrsAsyaKhan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#180

Sorry for my late ass comment.

This has been on the top of my list since coming back from THE rabbit hole

It was emotional to say the least. Zoya was heartbroken finally coming to terms with whatever happened the night before. It made my heart ache, poor child. She found a mother in Dilshad and I can't blame her for thinking that she lost her.

Asad was an absolute sweetheart! I just love this version of him, taking responsibility for whatever happened. Asad confessing that there was always something between them and consoling her. And then admitting that he loves her. Such a sweet confession, despite whatever situation they are in.

Asad and Zoya walking hand in hand into Dilshad's room made me smile but it also gave me the shivers. Always wanted them to see them stand together like that, strong as ever. I wish everything didn't go wrong on the show. I wish they had slept together instead of the nautanki with Tanver the cow. Eurgh, just ruined my mood by talking about her.

Zoya breaking down completely broke my heart, but Asad wrapping her up in his arms and comforting her. That scene touched my heart!

Who can remain at angry with Zoya seeing her like that? Her fainting and then crying in Dilshad's arms. I loved the ending! What a perfect ending.

I LOVED the second part too! Well done beautiful, keep writing more of these fluff. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it! Having fine writers like you on this forum is what kept this forum alive for this long! Our Asya/KaBhi will forever exist within these stories. Thank you for writing this!

Sorry in advance for being so late. Forgive me! I'm living in some alternate universe atm. Don't get the chance to read anything on this forum anymore.

Much love <3