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Guys My first story...Hope u will like it...!! All the best vijju...!!!!
Story as follows:-
shivanya is hurt and is in the temple in a bad state...Here at Raheja's house Sesha as Shivanya is get caught by Ramya while transforming in to snake.
During this scene Ritik supports her and suddenly Shivanya would be transformed to Sesha...and Keep kanjar on Ritik's Neck and ask Anky/Yamini or others to remove that Bhel patras...
Ritik is in Damm shock with this scene...n then Shesha might take ritik out of house with kanjar on his neck & tell him that "u hurt Naagin/me with this kanjar...so in revenge i hurt your wife shivanya with the same kanjar and threw her away near to that old shiv ji ka mandir...
Dont know she is alive or dead...Go and check her status...and should transform to snake and go away from there...
Ritik who is in big shock of his life...where all his memories with shivanya gets flashed...
and tears roll out of his eyes...Shout louder shivanya's name...and says you cant leave me alone here...
I know my heart tells me you are not dead...Nothing can happen to you...Untill I live on this earth...
Runs to his car and starts going to Old Shiv Temple...meanwhile sesha goes there to that temple and see Shivanya in Unconscious state and asks Maha pandit Katak about her state...
and tells him...that Ritik is on the way...he is coming here...you manage him saying your wife can be saved only by doing this pooja to Shiv ji...
Ritik reaches that shiv ji temple's premises and madly searches for Shivanya by shouting her name...his voice is heard by shivanya and gets conscious slightly...and utters his name Ritik...Ritik...
Suddenly she gets scared that her naagin truth will be out if he see's her and she tries to get up and hide...Sesha watches this and tell her that your Naagin truth will not be out...dont worry about it and changes her Naagin costumes to Regular Shivanya Ritik Raheja's costume and make her lie there...and sesha hides from there...
Ritik Comes inside that temple and finds Shivanya...His tired eyes got solace after finding her whom he is searching so madly for past few hours...goes to her by running and hugs her and kisses her...
She will start feeling his gentle touch...opens her eyes slightly and see him...for her his Eyes are deep diving ocean of love...she hugs him back too...
They both give a very tight hug to each other...forgetting about everything happening in this world for few minutes...(she says to herself that i have no problem if I die also coz i saw him...)
in his hugging process automatically he touches her back and sidelines her hair and finds the cut where she is Bleeding...
He finds that and gets alert and see her in unconscious state and says Shivanya open your eyes..tumhe kuch nahi hone doongi...he lifts her in his arms...and tries to go out...but he senses that if he takes her to hospital which is very far away from this remote place something might happen to her...and See Shiv ji's idol...
Goes to shivji idol by carrying shivanya in his arms and says to him...Bhagavan pls help me...save my wife...in return pls take my life...I cant live with out her...pls show me a way he pleads n pray's to God...and cries a lot there...
Suddenly he will feel a hand on his shoulder and it is Guruji Maha pandit Katak...he says only shiv ji can save your wife now...you and your wife offer this prayers to him...Ritik put shivanya down and makes her stand by leaning her head on his shoulder...
They both offer puja to Shivji...back ground Triyambakam yejamahe plays...Shivji's rays fall on shivanya and she gets releaved from pain...and feels better seeing her Ritik will feel happy...
Guruji says to Ritik to apply this herbal Medicine on her back so that she will be alright in sometime.
Ritik lifts shivanya and make her sleep in reverse side and sidelines her hair and softly touches her and see's her cut and tears roll down his eye's and fall on shivanya's back...she senses his tears and says with a pain in tone that Ritik Main teek hoon...and falls asleep...
Ritik kisses her on her back and starts applying medicine...some hours pass and she gets conscious and feels better...he takes guruji's blessing...and lifts her in his arms and takes her to the car...
Sesha watches from behind...feels like whats going on in shivanyas life...she gets confused...what step to take next...Ritik takes her to Home...and next there Nhok jhoks start as ususal...
Hope atleast vey few may like it...Short & sweet...
Anupamaa
