SwaSan Diaries : Sanskaar's reflective road

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SwaSan Diaries's Part A ~ { Sanskaar's Reflective Road }
Hey my dear IF SwaSanians ! I am back with a Dash presenting you with my SwaSan Diaries...this the the first Part and this is based on Sanskaar's POV ...hope you all like it 🤗 ...

2nd Part will be : { Swara's Pensive Pathway }

My Reflective Road
~ Sanskaar Maheshwari

Dear Diary,

Today after that strangulation incident and the sudden reappearance of Kavita gave me a mind full of thoughts...I decided to share it with my beloved Swara, but she as usual doubted that I still can't forget Kavita...Damn! I sighed ...why doesn't she understand that kavita has been washed away from my heart and mind the day I fell in love with swara! Swara a very powerful lady!! Brave, Rebellious, Strong, Smart, Carefree & a modern person ...she is not only respectful but also a down to earth person..that is what made me fall for her...she is not beautiful but she is handsome..pretty and smart 😉 tip-top you can say'...though people consider her illegitimate I completely disagree with the word ..she is legitimate in my eyes because she's not like Ragini ''born out of love'' but she's a sweet fruit of two loving trees..

Though this struck me..the way I was trying to desperately separate lucky and swara the same is happening with me..Someone is being provoked to separate us the way I used to provoke Ragini...this time I was really guilt-stricken now myself experiencing all these that once Swara and Laksh suffered. I was ruthless, negative-minded , grief-stricken, vengeance-stricken and all bad ...but my shona's magical words came as a magic potion for me..simple and sweet full of repentance.. my eyes shone as I dipped in positivity.. I smiled heartily and slept peacefully or the first time in 5 years...

I love you swara! I murmured again and again ...I jumped! The day I realised my love for her... I could feel my heart thumping, I fell in love again ...but this time it was pure..
I've decided my dear diary.. I'll fight for my love this time..me, Sanskaar Maheshwari is giving you a true word..he'll fight or his swara ...you see '' loha lohe ko kaat tha hai''..I'll even turn negative this time for swara but I'll change I promise...

May god give me powers to win against evil''

Yours

~ Sanskaar


"Because one believes in oneself, one doesn't try to convince others. Because one is content with oneself, one doesn't need others' approval. Because one accepts oneself, the whole world accepts him or her."
Lao Tzu

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Sujayricky thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome 👏
The way you written sanskaar pov it was awesome 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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WOW.
Really liked the way you described Sanskaar's point of view..
Thank for the pm..
Continue soon!! :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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beautiful and just apt.loved it totally.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome
perfect pov of sanskar🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
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thank you all will reply all of you individually asap 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Superb take on Sanskaar's point of view Esha...🤗 🤗
I loved the titles you chose: Sanskaar's Reflective Road with the next part being Swara's Pensive Pathway 👏 👏

I just loved the way Sanskaar is so determined that he will not allow anybody or anything to come between him and Swara.

Waiting eagerly for the next part.

Love,

Viji
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Beautifully written !! Loved it. !!
Do write more n yes keep me updated !!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Loved the title: Reflective Road - and your letter bought out both the meanings so well, it sets out Sanskaar's thoughts and intentions and also serves as a mirror on how his past deeds are 'reflected' by the present events. Very lovely piece of writing.
Nyna

PS: Could we have the Pensive Pathways as soon as possible?
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: sujoyricky

Awesome 👏
The way you written sanskaar pov it was awesome 👏
Beautifull
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Thank you sujoy 😃 thank you so much 😃

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