New Yuvreen SS: Ek Duje Ke Vaste (part 3,4,5,6 @pg3)

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hola amigos sabko salaam
Heya people howz my sgian behnaas
I know i know every one is busy even i am but then my passion for yuvreen n writing again brought me back here.
I cant see my sg land so lone and haunted so thought of writing something.
Any readers available then plz hit like or comment
Will post the first part of my ss either by tonight or tom depending on the views.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Go on. Looking forward to your new story 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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kdi bring it on jaldi jaldi 😳
specially now that they look bit more official 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Yaay...looking forward to it..😃😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Ok people so i am posting the first part but before that a small description.
This is my worst ever story i have written coz no new concept same old gisapita drama and still i am writing dont know why may b coz i m missing yuvreen a lot.
I ll try to complete in 4 to 5 parts and not drag much promise
I know very few people come here nowadays and still i am posting just for my few loyal readers.
Have fun n enjoy yuvreen
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 1 :
"Aaaooo yeh headache" saying this yuvi woke up. Rubbing his hand on his forehead he sat on bed. "Ufff yeh mera sar itna dard kyun kar raha hai".
He was about to get up from the bed but was suddenly pulled back by a hand beside him.
He turned around to see and was shocked for a moment seeing a girl lying beside him.
She was facing opposite side and he could only see her back covered with long hairs.
Yuvi panicked for a moment and tried to remember the last night.
Flashback
"I love you yuvraj par tum yeh baat kyun nahi samajte. Kyun tum us gawar suvreen guggal ke peeche pade ho" said alisha giving him a soft drink in a party thrown by manini in sucess of a contract won by TGI.
"Enough alisha plz leave me alone. Me aur suvreen alag jarur hue hai par humare beech pyaar abhi bhi hai" yuvi replied.
A: jis pyaar ki tum baat kar rahe ho na yuvi wo to kabki tumhe bhul ke samar ke sath aage badh chuki hai look.
Yuvi turned around and saw samreen hugging each other.
This made him more angry and he ordered for hard drinks and started gulping down one after another.
Flashback ends
This was the last thing he could remeber as after few drinks he boozed out.
Y: muje kuch yaad kyun nahi aaraha kaun hai yeh kahi alisha to...
Nahi cheeteh yeh alisha nahi ho sakti agar aisa hua to me topper ko kabhi face nahi kar paunga.
Rubbing his sweat from the face and gaining some courage he turned the girl around and a smile crept on his face. He was just looking at her mezmerizing beauty when suddenly..."Tummm" she shouted and got up.
She looked around and covered herself with the bedsheet.
"Yuvraj tum yaha kar rahe ho and hum yaha kaise aaye" she said in one breath.
"Topper pehle tu shant ho ja aur meri baat sun" said yuvi. (So the girl beside her was none other than her topper her suvreen guggal)
S: kya sunu me yuvraj. Tumne kaise mere drunk hone ka fayda uthaya
Y: enough suvreen (shouting) tu mujpe itna bada ilzam kaise laga sakti. Tuje me itna gira hua lagta hu jo apni ex girl friend ka fayda uthaunga. Agar fayda uthana hi hota to tab utha leta jab tu meri girl friend thi.
S: aakhir dil ki baat zubaan par aa hi gai na yuvraj singh.
Y: you know what tu jo sochna chaahe soch sakti hai muje tuje koi explaination nahi dena.
Saying this he got up and went outside the room.
****
Few hours later in TGI canteen:
Suvi was sitting and gulping down back to back coffee and trying to remember what happened last night.
Flashback
"Excuse me mam" saying this a waiter handed over suvi a drink. Before she could asked anything further the waiter left. Suvi decided not to drink though it was just a orange juice she dint wanted to take a risk.
The party was in full swing geeti rohan preeti vikram were all enjoying the break they got from manini's torture. Suvi was standing alone with that drink still in her hand when she saw yuvi and alisha near the bar counter. Alisha was trying to woo yuvi and he was not opposing her. Though they broke up a month ago she was still effected on how come he can move on so easily.
With all the thoughts surrounded she gulped down the drink and after a moment she started feeling dizziness.
Samar saw her getting low and held her before she fell down.
Flashback end
Suvi was still in her thoughts,"iske aage muje kuch yaad kyun nahi aaraha me to last samar ke sath thi to me yuvraj ke paas kaise pahuchi"
Her thoughts were disturbed with yuvi and alisha entering the cafeteria.
Suvi stood up to leave when alisha stopped her," suvreen its ok tum chaho to yaha beth sakti ho. I know its difficult to see your ex with me but ab tak to tumhe aadat ho chuki hogi afterall hum sab ek hi office me jo kaam karte"
Without giving her back suvi went out and on the way trashed with samar. Yuvi saw this from inside and was unable to control himself he stood up and went out.
Helding suvi's wrist he dragged her along with him to building's terrace leaving behind a socked samisha.
****
She was shouting all the way but he was in no mood to leave her. Bringing her on the terrrace he left her with a jerk.
S:whats wrong with you yuvraj singh tum pagal ho gaye ho
Y: haa ho gaya hu me pagal teri wajah se aur tu mujse puch rahi hai whats wrong with me whats wrong with you ek mahina nahi hua hume juda hue aur tu aur samar. Bas itna hi pyaar tha na tuje.
S: yeh sawal to me bhi tumse kar sakti hu bas itna hi pyaar karte the na tum muje tabhi to itni jaldi alisha ke sath move on kar gaye.
Y: kya bakwas kar rahi hai me aur alisha sirf dost hai tere aur samar ki tarah nahi. Wo samar jo kal raat pata nahi tere sath kya karta agar me time pe na pahuchta to.
He blurted out and suvi stood there frozen.
Last night incidents started running her mind again.
Flashback:
S: samar me theek hu bas thode chakkar aarahe hai tum plz meri tension mat lo n jaao party enjoy karo
Sr: good girl kabhi to sach bol diya kar teri shakal pe saaf likha hai tu theek nahi. To ab chup kar aur muje mera kaam karne de.
Samar went to the receptionist of the hotel where party was going on and asked for a room.
He took suvi to the room and led her on the bed to take rest. As he was leaving a punch came on his face.
"What the hell" shouted samar and saw yuvi standing there.
"Teri himmat kaise hui meri topper ko hath lagane ki" he shouted back and gave him more punches. Pulling his collar he pushed him out of the room and locked the door.
When he came back he found suvi standing there.
S: tum pagal ho gaye ho tumne use kyun mara wo good boy hai and me uski good girl (in a childish tone)
Y: good boyz good girlz ki drink spike nahi karte.
S: hawww iska matlab wo drink spike thi aur muje chad gai hai us raat ki tarah jab me pehli baar delhi aai thi aur gyanesh ne muje wo drink pilaai thi... yaad hai tumhe
Y: haaa yaad hai aur fir mene tuje gyanesh aur police dono se bachaya tha..
S: haaa tum muje jabardasti uthake le gaye the kidnap karke...
Y: tuje sab yaad hai
S: kaise bhul sakti hu
Saying this she started crying and he cupped her face.
S: me tumhe kabhi nahi bhul sakti kyunki i love you.
Y: i love you too bahut pyaar karta hu tujse tuje kisi problem me nahi dekh sakta par tu yeh baat samajti hi nahi.
S: kyunki tumhe samjana nahi aata tum bad teacher ho.
She came closed to her and then pushed him back
S: hawww tumne drink ki hai tumhe to drinking se problem thi na fir kyun pi.
Y: tere pyaar ke chakkar me. Tuje kisi aur ke sath nahi de sakta plz mere sath aisa mat kar
Coming close to him
S: me bhi nahi dekh sakti tumhe kisi aur ke sath. Tum sirf mere ho aur me tumhe kabhi kisi aur ka nahi hone dungi. I ll mark you mine forever.
Saying this she kissed him and then the lights when dim.
Flashback end:
Y: kya hua ab tere pass bolne ke liye kuch nahi hai.
S: nahi muje tumhe koi explaination nahi dena. U r right galti meri hai. Me kamjor pad gai apne dil ke haatho majboor ho gai. Aaj tumhari topper haar gai. Haar gai me apne pyaar ke aage.
Saying this she left leaving behind a shocked yuvi.

Ps: this is just a fiction and we should never ever rely on drinks coz it will only increases our problems.
I hate drinking and have never tried and never wanna try and i hope my lil sisies here will also keep themselves away from drinks when they will turn adults.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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It's not at all bakwas. Other fandoms write even more bhayankar stories with no story. Other fandoms means many other shows not just ShiviTi's other shows. Go on. Story is good! Mei peeti nahi lol.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice kdi 👏
do continue 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome 👏
Maddy ki pitai kr di yuvi ne
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice..😊
I will not drink..😃

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