Maa Tujhe Salaam-A Praja OS(Republic Day Special)

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Hello guys!!!
Wishing all a Happy Republic Day!!!

A small token to our beloved country on this occasion:




Maa Tujhe Salaam


Ajabde: Are you sure? I mean it's too risky for us...
Pratap: The Ajabde I know isn't scared of risks

Ajabde: That's fine but it involves school kids and that is risky
Pratap: But we have to do it and you have to accompany us!

Ajabde: I am not too sure of this...

The phone rang

Tringg tringg tringgg

Pratap picks it up.

Pratap: Great! Okay I'll be there. Yes she is in
He answered looking at Ajabde.



Pratap, Ajabde,Hakim,Chakrapani,Saubhagyawati were working for an undercover agency. They were in collaboration with the National Security Guards and the Government of India. Recently, they had got an intimation that a terrorist group were getting their Arms supply consignment during the Republic Day Celebrations of Yashpal Academy. The gang , though a small one, was attached to the bigger group seeking its roots in Uzbekiatan. But all they knew was that they were planning something ugly in the future. If they were successful in nabbing this consignment then the Arms Supplier could also be tracked apart from their plans getting spoiled. According to Pratap it was a golden opportunity to strike terrorism.

But he had to take permission from the senior officials. This was troubling him.

A meeting was arranged with The Head Of the Department, Mr. Raghvendra.


Pratap: Sir we have to do this. It's once in a lifetime chance!
RV: No Pratap I cannot allow this. It involves kids I cannot play with them.
Pratap: But Sir we can nab the suppliers also...

RV: I am really very sorry but...

Ajabde: I take the responsibility sir. Not a single kid hurt. I promise.

There was silence for a split second.

RV: Hmmm... Let me see what I can do
Ajabde: Sir its the question of millions of Indians and we have only one chance.

RV: I cannot guarantee anything. Even I have to answer people.

He left in a hurry.

Ajabde: Get ready... The Plan is on!
Pratap: But Sir has told...

Ajabde: As much as I know him, he will do something,its the questions of our people after all.



Later that Night,

Pratap got a call in the dead of the night
Pratap: Hmmm...

RV: Pratap!
Pratap: Yes sir!

He was jolted off his sleep
RV: Meet me now... At the Beach.

Pratap reached the Playground. "Beach" was the code word of a sandpit in a small garden.

He saw a figure standing right in the middle of the pit, sipping on hot coffee. It was quite cold in the open.

RV: I informed by seniors... And they declined it. I have to tell you this: There is someone high up there, who is a traitor to our Nation. All hot opportunities are declined and I never get a proper answer for this. But this time it won't happen. I allow you to go incognito there to nab those criminals. And remember, you have to tackle two sets of people: One is our men and other those terrorists. So beware. Good luck and give in your best. I am taking a flight to Delhi on the occasion of some work to avoid suspicion on us.

Pratap nodded in affirmity. Ajabde was right.



24th January, 2016.

Som: Pratap! Reach the office fast. I have tapped Yakub's conversation with his companion.

All assembled quickly.

Pratap: Play the recording

Yakub: Kya Miyaan? Sab khairiyat se hai naa? Ab bas Bharat Mata Ki Jai ke liye do din baaki hain, issue pehle ki Chidiya chug le, daane ko utha Lena hai. Khuda Haafiz.


Pratap: Bharat Mata Ki Jai is the code for mission name!

He tightened his fist. Naming a terrorist mission on the name of their country which they prayed, which was sacred to the masses.

Pratap: I won't leave you, I promise.

Ajabde: Maybe Chidiya is us or Police and daana is the consignment.
Som: Yes you are right.


25th January, 2016.

It was the eve of the D Day, the Mission Eve. Everyone were jumping in excitement. Tomorrow stood a few hours away, when they could serve for their country, when they could serve their people.

Pratap gathered everyone for the Oath which they took before every mission.

Pratap: We, the cadets of Undercover National Security Guards, take the Oath of Secrecy, of Integrity to our Nation and are ready to lay our lives for our people and country.
All: Jai Hind!




26th January, 2016.
The D Day had arrived, it was time for action.

The function was to begin at 8 hence everyone decided to reach the ground separately by 7.30
Ajabde and Sau arrived and mixed up with the school staff. The School hadn't been informed to avoid unnecessary panic among parents and school staff.

Pratap became one of the watchman at the gate of the event to keep a close watch on the arrivals.

As he was taking rounds, he suddenly collided into a man.
Pratap: Maaf kijiye Bhai saahab.
He quickly observed a tattoo underneath the sleeve on his arm.

Man: Dekh ke chaliye


But only Chakrapani was missing all this while. It was 8 by now.

Pratap: Mike check, come in all.
All: Aye aye captain!

Pratap: Chakrapani come in, I repeat.
No answer.

The event kick started.

"So ladies and gentlemen, please welcome our Chief Guest, Mr. Upendranath Singhania! Please give him a thundering round of applause."

"What!!", all exclaimed in shock. Upendranath Singhania?? He was the Vice President of their Undercover Agency. But the Chief Guest was supposed to be Mr. Diwan. How can he come?

Now they understood why Chakrapani wasn't there. He can't be a PA to someone they are hiding from.
As he graced the Red Carpet, Pratap hid behind the arrangement of balloons.

Ajabde and Sau rushed inside the school building to avoid being seen. His eyes were as sharp as a hawk on prey.

As he was wondering where Chakrapani was, he heard some commotion on the main gate.

He went there to check out once Mr. Upendranath had reached the stage and the gate was out of view.

Chakrapani stood there, arguing with the guards to enter as a parent.
Chakrapani: Mera baccha udhar perform kar raha hai aur aap mujhe jaane nahi de rahe Ho.

Pratap jumped to rescue as he realised he was still dressed in the guard uniform.

Pratap: Inhe jaane do, orders hain.
The guard nodded and Chakrapani entered.

Chakrapani: Oh my god! Today thank god I saw him from a distance and ran away from there. Now what?

Pratap: The Plan is still on! Keep calm and focus, all will go well.


"So Please welcome Mr. Upendranath on stage. I request you Sir to address our school students on this occasion."

UNS: I don't know what to say. Our country is our pride, our respect. People have immensely sacrificed for it and I feel honoured to serve it along with my team of National Guards. I would like to say that the children are the future of this Nation. So children respect your country and strive towards it success. Lastly, I would like to say:
Jahan Daal par Some ki Chidiya karti hai basera,
Woh Bharat desh haso Mera,
Woh Bharat desh hai Mera.

Bharat Mata Ki Jai!
Bharat Mata Ki Jai!


A thunderous round of applause followed.

Som was keeping a check on the CCTV system of the school and he noticed some activity in the basement.
Som: Guys target spotted. Basement. Quick!!

Everyone slowly moved in the basement separately. Ajabde was about to leave for it when a girl spotted her.

Riti: Mam? Where are you going? The flag hoisting is left.
Ajabde: Umm... There some work in the building. But you stay here.

All of them proceeded alertly to the basement and surrounded it from all sides.
There were some cars parked. Out of them, some noises could be heard from one of the vans.

Pratap inched towards it steadily,to find two men talking in it with some beeping sounds. He signalled Chakrapani to take on them.
"Hands up!", both of them barged on the men seated in the Van.

They were terribly shocked.

Pratap and Chakrapani opened the door and forced them out.
They pushed them to the floor and thrusted guns on their forehead.
Pratap: Tell me what are you all planning... Or else
It was the same tattoo man


Man: I won't tell you anything. But they are planning something big and no one will be spared.
He kicked him hard and punched him in the stomach.

Ajabde slowly moved towards the beeping sounds in the Van. She opened the diggi to find a bomb!

A minute left for it to explode.
Pratap saw it and punched him harder. Chakrapani too joined in.
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Pratap: Tell me!

Ajabde meanwhile was looking ways to diffuse it. A bunch of wires lay in front of her and only one could diffuse it.

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The beeps were becoming agonizing.
Pratap finally stretched his gun and it it on his forehead.

Man: I won't tell you anything!

He shot him, with the sound still echoeing in the empty basement.
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The other man got damn scared and bluttered out:
I am telling, I am telling everything

There is a plot hatched here. The gang is going to receive their Arms consignment as they are planning multiple attacks all over. Someone from the NSG is involved. I know only this much.

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Ajabde was confused. Was it red, blue, green or yellow? Learning bomb diffusing tutorials was one thing and diffusing it in practice was other.

Pratap ran to Ajabde.

Pratap: Calm down dear. Just close your eyes, take a deep breath and think.
Ajabde followed him and started to recollect. She visualised the bomb diagram and wire functions.
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Ajabde: Its the red one!! Red!!

Her trembling hand reached the red wire when Pratap took her hands in his and both of them plucked it out in a go

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Beep beep beep!!!

The bomb came to a standstill with just a second left.
Whosh!!! What a save!


Ajabde couldn't even smile in relief as some tears appeared on her face.

Pratap: Common guys!!! Get going
The other man like a true traitor attacked from behind at Pratap when a small scream alerted them all

Mam!!!

Chakrapani acted in time to finish him off before he could do something.

All eyes were on the small girl who had reached there.
Ajabde: Riti? What are you doing here?

But she was crying profusely. She had witnessed two gun shots and a bomb diffusal there.
Ajabde stepped ahead and soothed her.
Ajabde: Common, stop crying. You are a brave girl.

Pratap meanwhile got busy thinking about the consignment. It wasn't here. So where could it be?

He recalled the message that was tapped, RV's words before he left and the speech he heard.

Words started ringing in his ears as truth dawned on him:
There is some one who is a traitor... Chidiya chug le Dana... I don't get explanations... Jahaan Daal Daal par Some ki Chidiya... Bharat Mata Ki Jai... Bharat Mata...

Oh gosh!!!
He exclaimed.

Mr. Upendranath Singhania!!! The Vice President is a criminal supporting them. The speech he gave was a hint of consignment location.

He rushed to Riti.
Pratap: Do you know a bird or something like it in school?

Riti had stopped crying and she thought hard.
Riti: There is a Cuckoo clock at the Reception.

Pratap: Lets get moving guys...

Ajabde accompanied Riti to the event and silently dropped her in her group of classmates.
Meanwhile Pratap found nothing at the Reception. It was absolutely empty and silent. The Cuckoo clock was there but no arms or anything.

Pratap on the mic: Ajabde ask her if there is anything else related to bird
Ajabde: She is telling there is a golden birdpiece in the Principal's Cabin.
Pratap: Bingo!! Join me there.


They rushed to the Cabin to find men there, dressed in black guarding the Cabin.
Attack!!!

They attacked the terrorists in full might. They were three of them. Pratap engaged the main one in a fierce gunfight.
Zopp!
He got shot in the arm.

But in the next instant he killed him with a shot straight on his forehead.
The heads came out from the Cabin on hearing firing outside.

They were too many if them and Pratap had only three of them. But he didn't have to worry for soon Ajabde joined them with Hakim and Gang and there was a massive shootout taking place there.

Pratap quietly slipped into the Cabin.

He observed the boxes kept. He opened it one by one to find upper layers of grass and beneath it lying guns, bombs and weapons!!!

They had caught hold of the supply!

He rushed out and announced:
Your weapons are sealed out. Guns down!!

All the men were scared. Their leader hadn't arrived yet and the situation seemed out of control. So they obeyed him.

They placed down the guns.
Hakim handcuffed them all and locked them in the Cabin till the military arrived.

They very well knew who the leader was. But Pratap wanted to handle him personally so they decided to keep mum at the moment.

The team joined the school students for the Flag Hoisting as the National Anthem was played:

Jana-Gan-Mana-Adhinayaka,
Jaya He
Bharata-Bhagya-Vidhata
Punjab-Sindhu-Gujarata-Maratha
Dravida-Utkala-Banga
Vindhya-Himachala-Yamuna-Ganga
Uchchhala-JaladthaTaranga
Tava Subha Name Jage
Tava Subha Ashisa Mage
Gahe Tava Jaya Gatha.
Jana-Gana-Mangala Dayaka, Jaya He
Bharata-Bhagya-Vidhata,
Jaya He, Jaya He, Jaya He,
Jaya, Jaya, Jaya, Jaya He




26th March,2016

In the dead of the night

Ting tong
Ting tong

Went the bell of Mr. Singhania's house.

He got up and lazily opened the door when a black commando entered and thrusted a gun in his mouth
"Keep shut and follow me"

They sat on the dining table , facing each other.

He placed the gun on the table.
"Mr. Singhania, you are a traitor to my country, my people. And I won't spare you. So here are two options. Either I shoot you or you kill yourself. See I'll be straight. If I shoot you, there will be a CBI enquiry, your records will be checked. If by chance they land on your history, your family will be thrown out of this Govt Bungalow. They will be tortured as criminals and your children will curse you. But if you kill yourself, it will be a suicide under pressure. You will be a martyr, maybe your wife can get a Govt Job. The choice is yours."

There was pin drop silence.
Dishkyaaon!!

Went the shot. He killed himself.



1.21 billion people, 29 states, 1 Nationality: INDIAN
Divided by barriers, united by secularity, our country stands today as the largest successful democracy.
India, the Golden Bird of the bygone era. India, the founder country of Non Alignment Movement which was instrumental in ending cold war. India, our Nation. Considered as Dhara Shiromani(the greatest of all lands), India has the richest resources in terms of Nature, manpower and minerals. The cultural diversity in our country personifies our tolerance towards each other. With a rich cultural heritage to be envied of, India has a prominent history of diversifying arts and traditions. India gave the world the magic of Ayurveda, the knowledge of Bhagvad Gita, the power of Zero.
But all this is presently being overshadowed by terrorism and rampages. Why such intolerance towards humanity? It is time the people of India unite towards this larger cause of destruction. We have time and again proved our unity and have overcomes every grief together, whether it was The Taj Attacks, The Partition or natural calamities like landslides and Floods.
All said and done, I believe today that inspite of these attacks, India stands high in the International race for Supremacy. Tagged as the emerging Superpower, I bow down to this sacred soil which withstood so many riots, attacks and tortures. I bow down in reverence to my country, my Nation:
"Maa Tujhe Salaam".

#Proud to Be Indian


Yahan vahan saara jahan dekh liya hai
Kahin bhi tere jaisa koi nahi hai
Assi nahin, sau din duniya ghooma hai
Naahi kaahe tere jaisa koi nahin
Main gaya jahan bhi, bas teri yaadh thi
Jo mere saath thi mujhko tadpa thi rulati
Sab se pyaari teri soorat
Pyaar hai bas tera, pyaar hi
Maa tujhe salaam, maa tujhe salaam
Amma tujhe salaam
Vande maataram, vande maataram
Vande maataram, vande maataram
Vande maataram, vande maataram
Janam janam thera hoon deewana main
Jhoomoon naachoon gaaoon tere pyaar ka taraana main
chanda nahi suraj nahi duniya ki daulat nhi bas lootunga tere pyaar ka khazaana
Ek nazar jab teri hoti hai pyaar ki
Duniya tab to meri chamke damke maheke re
Tera chehra sooraj jaisa chaand si thand hai pyaar mein
Vande maataram, vande maataram
Vande maataram, vande maataram
Vande maataram, vande maataram
Tere paas hi main aa raha hoon
Apni baahein khol de
Zor se mujhko gale laga le
Mujhko phir voh pyaar de
Tu hi zindagi hai, tu hi meri mohabbat hai
Tere hi pairon mein jannat hai
Tu hi dil, tu jaan, amma
Maa tujhe salaam, maa tujhe salaam
Amma tujhe salaam, maa tujhe salaam
Vande maataram, vande maataram
Vande maataram, vande maataram
Vande maataram, vande maataram
Vande maataram, vande maataram
vande maataram ,vande maataram





Hope you all like it.
Jai Hind!


Mahishee😃

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Mahishee
Hats off to you
A splendid OS and the emotions it evoked
Am speechless and just in awe

Happy Republic Day

Jai Hind

Vande Mataram
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Originally posted by: twilightlover29

Mahishee

Hats off to you
A splendid OS and the emotions it evoked
Am speechless and just in awe

Happy Republic Day

Jai Hind

Vande Mataram


Garu di!
My firstie!

Aww... I know its not that good
This one was quite average

But I wanted to write this and I did it

Thank you very much!
Glad you liked it😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Mahishee
Jai Hind!!

Like Garima said it is really good. The emotions are placed right and and are invoked correctly as well.

And the team was completely in sync.

Thanks for the OS on this very day.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi Mahishee
How are you?
Thanks for writing such a beautiful os. It was perfectly written!
Loved all of the action.
I hate traitors!! Aur as you mentioned many a times the traitors turn out to be the person one trusts the most and that person most of the times is on a higher post!
Loved the os. Loved the emotions that you portrayed!
And the last scene was from the akshay Kumar starrer Holiday-A soldier is never of duty naa! I love that movie!
Love the os!
Love
Sayli
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Originally posted by: sujata_patil

Mahishee

Jai Hind!!

Like Garima said it is really good. The emotions are placed right and and are invoked correctly as well.

And the team was completely in sync.

Thanks for the OS on this very day.


Sujata di!
I am so glad you liked it
Thanks a lot

Jai Hind!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: SweetSau

Hi Mahishee

How are you?
Thanks for writing such a beautiful os. It was perfectly written!
Loved all of the action.
I hate traitors!! Aur as you mentioned many a times the traitors turn out to be the person one trusts the most and that person most of the times is on a higher post!
Loved the os. Loved the emotions that you portrayed!
And the last scene was from the akshay Kumar starrer Holiday-A soldier is never of duty naa! I love that movie!
Love the os!
Love
Sayli


Hey Sayli!
Am absolutely fine dear

Hope you are good now😃

Thanks a lot dear!
Am happy you loved it

Yes that was of Holiday and it was a really fantastic film... Totally gripping

Thanks again

Love😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hats off to you Mahishee!!
LOvely OS..
I am speechles

Jai Hind!!

Happy Republic Day!!

Lots of Love
Tijil
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Originally posted by: PrAjalover

Hats off to you Mahishee!!

LOvely OS..
I am speechles

Jai Hind!!

Happy Republic Day!!

Lots of Love
Tijil


Hey Tijil!
Thanks yaar

Glad you loved it😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I have no words! Just 👏 👏
Kamal kar diya. ⭐️ Hats off!
Vaise those last lines, kahin suna hua lag raha hai? 😕

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