MG-SS~Ehsaas~Updated...UPDATED...PART 2...16 JAN 2016... - Page 7

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Posted: 9 years ago
#61


Very nice part

Adi bumped to pinky nd she pour cold water on him..hehe..😆
Maan nd his bros wr injured ,, hhmmm it cd be their enemy ..
arjun helped them ..
still i m confused nd waiting to unfold d mystery ...may be in coming parts i cn get d ans ...

waiting ...

Love it 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#62
Nice update. Bit of confusion on who is who here but looks like Khuranas have come to stay with Arjun's family. waiting for the story to unravel.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#63
Awesome update. Pinki dashed with Adi and got her dress spoiled. She put a jug of water on Adi and left without a single word. Maan saw his condition and laughed.
Arjun brought Khuranas to his house. At midnight, Maan heard a song in a painful female voice. Arjun came to her and console her.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#64
sorry for late comment


pro

ehsaas with few line u covered all emotions of

human being

anger ,love ,fustration ,dosti ,dusmani almost

all things

that few line

just touch to my heart

👏👏👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
#65
two family facing different situation
one is happy and satisfied
teasing each other and enjoying life with
each other
full with love affection .



and other family facing gadari ,hurtfulness
with closed one who
is trying to save their self respect ,
now they could not trust
on their sever also
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Posted: 9 years ago
#66
Hey nice start loved the way you portrayed the chracters...The you introduced after the sword fight is geet now the whole family of maan will stay with geet's family is it??
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Posted: 9 years ago
#67
Part 2
wow the meeting of adi and pinky is superb..🤣..

arjun has 2 sisters Geet and Priyanka...but Geet Rathod??😕 my asumption of pinky being Geet wrong hehe Maan injured😲 Feels protective for Geet😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
#68


concept seems nice..
First part is quite nice..Loved the family scene.. care between siblings and love between parents and kids but the second part made me confused
Maan was laughing seeing his friend Adi drenched in water but Arjun called his family doctor as Maan was injurd..What happened to him and his brothers?
I will be more happy if you make things clear for me.. I m not able to connect with the second part..
I m sorry if i have said something wrong but but i need the clearity to get connected with the story..
Who attacked Maan and his bro..Arjun was taking khuranas to meet his parents then why they are injurd?
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Posted: 9 years ago
#69
adi ..poor boygot what he did in return
he is embarrassed as all laughed at him
maan n friends met with accident
n arjun called the dr. to treat them
maan heard a painful song which attracted him
he feels j seeing arjun with that girl
is it geet
n y she is in pain
nice part
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow very interesting and yummy fav of my maaneet from u..very interesting and all te cs was lovely..now my maaneet meeting,is my maan was lost in geet who was unknown lady?..

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