The Confrontation : Beginning

Promo :
Trisha : Chief ne humme ek case diya he handle karne ke liye
Raghav : Let me guess...Mumbai based businessman Gaurav Ajmera ka case...jo filhaal headlines me chaaye hue he...kyunki according to him usne murder hote hue dekha he
Trisha : But Raghav ...He's Unable to tell murder kiska hua he...I mean people that know him...sab uske baare me kya kya bol rahe he...i think we are going to waste our time
Raghav : No boss i think its going to be an interesting case...Chehre ke picche chehra... iss chehre ke picche kaun he ye to hum pata kar lenge (smirks) aakhir such mujhse chupta nahi


Is someone really murdered Or is it just someone's imagination ? how will Agent Raghav & CBI team going to solve this case ?

Stay Tuned
Thank you 😊

First part below 😊
Second part on Page 2 😊
Final part on page 3 and
Page 5 😊

Well first thing I felt after seeing this OS was pure ecstasy!!!
I am super duper happy that people are writing on RaTri and that after such a short time the show gas started!!! 😳
Urs is 7th story on the forum and I hope the number will jeep increasing... 😳
And coming to ur story well the promo is super interesting... can wait to know whether it's a murder or...!!!! ⭐️
Aakhir sach mere Raghav se chhipta kaha hain!!! ❤️
Loves 🤗
Amreen

Thank you. Its good to know promo of my OS being liked and yeah i too hope that the pankhas😆(i'm also one of them 😉 ) of Agent Raghav write lot of good OS and and all other stuff.

Originally posted by: Rine

Thank you. Its good to know promo of my OS being liked and yeah i too hope that the pankhas😆(i'm also one of them😉 ) of Agent Raghav write lot of good OS and and all other stuff.

Well pankho ki baat aayi hai toh lemme tell u am the biggest pankha of Ragahv n Sharad!!!! 😛 🤣
And I have already made a hat trick of OSs...😆 hope u have read those!!
Will soon pen all the numerous ideas that have been flooding my mind as soon as my exams finishes!!

Aage kya? Please update.

Sorry i'll update the whole story tomorrow and this OS will get its name changed too. Sorry for updating it late in advance 😊

Disclaimer : work of pure fiction nothing resembles anyone dead or living or any place

The Eye Witness

who saw everything but saw nothing

11: 30 pm Anand housing society Delhi

In an apartment a Man's voice can be heard calling out someone's name

Man : Mansi...Mansi(walking out of bedroom) Mansi...kaha chali gayi ye(looking at the wall clock) iss me to 12:30 am baj rahe he...par phir Mansi kaha gayi(searching whole apartment) Mansi kaha ho tum (holding his head) nicche...ha nicche jaake guard se puchta hu...shayad usne Mansi ko bahar jaate hue dekha ho(runs out)

Near Society gate

Man : Banwarilal...ab ye Banwarilal kaha chala gaya(looking here & there)

Banwarilal : Are Gaurav Sahab aap yahaa...wo bhi raat ke 11:45 pm baje

Gaurav : Tum society ke guard ho ?...to gate chhod kar kyu gaye...aur tumhari ghadi kharab he kyuki me jab nicche aaya tab 12:40 ho rahe the...Banwarilal kaha he ?

Banwarilal : kya sahab itne raat ko bhi pii rakhi he...me to pani lene gaya tha..me hi Banwarilal hu

Gaurav : Mene koi pii vii nahi rakhi...apni hadd me raho...aur mujhe ye batao tumne meri gaadi...yaa Mansi ko kahi aate jaate dekha

Banwarilal : nahi sahab...aapki gaadi to parking me hi khadi he...aur Mansi madam ko to aaj mene kahi aate jaate nahi dekha

Gaurav : par phir Mansi kaha he(thinking)

Banwarilal : Sahab aap ghar chale jaayiye...lagta he aaj Madam Ji nahi he to aapne zyaada pii li he...aur ab chadh bhi gayi he

Gaurav : i'm not drunk...you...tumhe to me society ki meeting me dekh lunga(walks away towards his apartment)

Banwarilal : jaayiye...jaayiye sahab...me bhi secretary sahab ko bol dunga ki...der raat aap daru pii ke tamasha kar rahe the...pata nahi kaise kaise log rehte he(murmuring)

Gaurav reached his apartment

Gaurav : Pata nahi kisse security guard banaya he(taking car keys from key stand) ye kya(hears clock strike 12) par ye kaise ho sakta he...mene jab dekha tha tab to 12:30 baje the to...(hears footsteps) kaun he(opens door and sees a shadow) kaun he waha par...

Mansi : Gaurav...Gaurav(putting hand on his shoulder) tum yaha darwaaze ke pass kya kar rahe ho

Gaurav : tum...tum kaun ho aur andar kaise aayi

Mansi : tum theek to ho...me Mansi hu

Gaurav : tum Mansi ho to wo kaun he...kaha gaya(looking out)

Mansi : tumhari tabiyet theek nahi he...tum andar chalo(taking him inside and closing the door)

Gaurav : haa thik he tum chalo me paani pii ke aata hu...ye ho kya raha he(sees balcony's door open) aur ye darwaaza khula kaise(walks in balcony) ye to wohi he jisse mene ghar ke bahar dekha(looking down) aur ye iske saath kaun he

Suddenly the Shadow man stabs that other person

Next day somewhere in outskirts of delhi 10:30 am

Inspector : Sir ye pichle 45 days me teesra murder he...murder weapon gayaab he

Raghav : tareeka bhi same he...bag bhi same he...infact sab kuch same he(looking keenly at the blood stained bag)...siwaay

Trisha : siwaay jagah ke...Raghav please don't open the bag here...its so gruesome...Bikram..Rajbir..iss bag ke baare me kisne inform kiya tha dekho zara...Swati send this bag to Dr. Aarti

Raghav : Boss waise bhi me ye bag yaha open nahi karne wala tha...i know you still haven't forgot the first bag

Trisha : right...iss liye tum uss bag ko itna gaur se dekh rahe the...excuse me (answering her phone) Jai Hind sir...yes sir...no sir...but sir...okay no problem sir (ending the call) chief ne bulaya he...i'll go and checkout...you stay here

Raghav : okay boss...waise boss me bag ka brand check kar raha tha...kaafi mazboot he...soch raha hu aisa bag khareed lu (smirks)

Trisha : okay see you in beauru(smiling)(nodding her head in dissappointment)(leaves)

Raghav : okay Boy 1...Boy 2 kissine kuch dekha (walking towards Bikram and Rajbir)

Rajbir : nahi kissine kuch nahi dekha...infact jissne humme inform kiya tha wo to bichara thela leke yaha se guzar raha tha jab usko ye bag dikha

Bikram : haa aur aas pass koi clue bhi nahi he...siwaay iske ki ye murder bhi pehle do murders jaisa hi he

Raghav : Inspector seal the crime scene...afterall there is no such thing as perfect crime...murderer koi na koi mistake zaroor karega ya ki hogi

Rajbir : but kya...yaha kuch bhi common nahi he...bus ye white bag khoon se saana hua...uske andar...body parts...aur bag par victims ke hi blood se likha hua I'm so Happy to be with you' aur wo flower bouqet...Mann to karta he ye jo bhi he...usse to me(banging fist on car bonet)

Raghav : Relax Rajbir..ye case ab hummare under he...Boss ka phone(answering the phone) yes boss...okay boss(ending the call) let's go...beauru jaana he...there's something important

At CBI Office

Raghav : yes Boss...at your service(smiling)(entering inside the conference hall and sitting followed by Rajbir and Bikram)

Trisha : Chief ne humme ek aur case diya he handle karne ke liye

Raghav : Let me guess...Mumbai based businessman Mr. Gaurav Ajmera ka

Trisha : yes you're right Raghav... Swati(Swati turning on the projector) thank you...ye he Gaurav Ajmera...kal raat inhone apni building ke nicche kisi ka murder hote hue dekha he...but kiska ye inhe nahi pata(pointing towards a 32 year old man's photo)

Raghav : aur Mr. Gaurav ne police station jaake inform kiya...apne society ke guard ko batane ke baad me...but society ke guard ka kehna he usne waha koi laash nahi dekhi ya...kisi ko nahi dekha ...police ko bhi waha kuch nahi mila...ulta unhone Mr. Ajmera ko hi arrest kar liya...am i right boss (looking at Trisha)

Trisha : yes Raghav...but how do you know ?

Raghav : my secret (winks and smirks) time to meet Mr. Ajmera(standing up) come on Trisha lets go

Trisha : No Raghav we are not taking this case...everyone's saying he's a drunkard...i'm not wasting our time when we have a serial killer to nab

Raghav : Trisha...pehle hum Gaurav se jaake mille than we will decide...i think this is going to be an interesting case...and about serial killer...How about Bikram & Rajbir follow that case and Swati...Swati yahaa reh kar sabko dono case ki intell aur progress deti reh

Trisha : But Raghav...okay fine this once i'm listening to you...Rajbir... Bikram tum log Dr. Aarti se jake milo aajke victim ke baare me sab pata karo...Swati...tum Mr. Gaurav Ajmera ki saari details nikalo

Swati : On it (leaves)

Bikram : don't worry Trisha we'll keep on updating you(leaves with Rajbir to Forensic Lab)

Trisha : Lets go

Raghav nods

Trisha and Raghav leave to meet Gaurav Ajmera

Thank you😊

First of all loved the title
Case is interesting
U have got the characters very aptly & presented in a wonderful way
Why do people I feel there is a connection between both the cases? Continue soon

Awesome start dear... I loved the cool Raghav here!!! Exactly as per the show... characters n case very nicely described... Keep it up n update soon!! 😊

When will u give the next update...