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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: 1973deepak

Sorry for late reply I hope that you will give each a good ratri scene in the last update and update the last part soon. 😳



Thank you 😊 there is a RaTri scene but its upto readers to like it 😊
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Even after searching for long hour they were unable to find Trisha in the middle of the night

Somewhere a person stopped dragging an unconcious Trisha and gets her into car and drives away

Raghav : Rajbir subah tak ka intezaar karna hoga...agar koi clue hoga to bhi wo humme itni raat ko nahi milega...Rajbir saare naako pe police checking karne ko kaho

Rajbir : me karta hu phone...tum pehle apni chot pe dhyan do...hum Trisha ko doondh lenge

Raghav : humme Trisha ko jald se jald doondhna hoga...me Gaurav ko usske ghar chhod kar aata hu...aur Bikram aur Swati ko usske saath rehne ke liye bolta hu...tum yehi ruko aur dhyaan rakhna

Raghav and Gaurav leave the safe house

In car

Gaurav : where did Miss Trisha go ?(while driving)...i know she means lot to you

Raghav: she got kidnapped...humpe humla karke ussne Trisha ko agwa kar liya...tumhe usska chehra yaad he(pressing his wound with his handkerchief)

Gaurav : haa abhi yaad he par kal aap mese kisika bhi chehra yaad nahi rahega...kitna ajeeb he...ek pal aapki zindagi kuch aur rahti he aur dusre hi pal everything changes...jaiase hi mujhe koi clinic dikhta he me aapko waha leke chalta hu(looking at Raghav) aap dressing karwa lejiyega phir hum aage chalenge

Raghav : Thik he...nahi to Boss se daant padegi(thinks)...you got a wife right ? wo bhi accident ke time tumhare saath thi

Gaurav : Mansi...i told you about her earlier remember...me bhagwan ka shukraguzar hu ki Mansi ko uss accident me kuch nahi hua

Raghav : aap logo ke saath kya uss din aur koi tha

Gaurav : haa Mansi ki chhoti behen Snehal thi...meri aur Mansi ki best friend thi wo...par wo(sad) ab sochta hu to mujhe Mansi aur Snehal ka chehra ek sa lagta he...aur wo dikhti bhi ek jaisi hi thi...jab tak koi dono ko gaur se na dekhe...ya koi unhe jaanta na ho(sees the clinic) Mr. Raghav clinic aagaya(showing him the clinic)

Raghav : Thanks me aataa hu(gets down from car and goes inside Clinic)

Inside Clinic

Raghav : strange itni raat ko ye konsa doc. he jo Delhi ke bahar clinic khol ke betha he(looking here and there) Excuse me (sees a man 60's)

Person : yes...ohh aap ko to chot lagi he(sees Raghav's wound)

Raghav : kya aap yaha ke Doc. he ?(sees person nods in yes) Isn't it strange for you to be available at this hour of night (looking at wall clock which is showing 2 am)

Doctor : aap pehle yaha aake bethiye(Raghav sits on bed) Bullet wound he(checking the wound)

Raghav : kahi aapke pass criminals apni dressing karwane to nahi aate(sarcastically)...nahi wo kya he sirf dekh ke aapko pata chal gaya ki chot kaisi lagi he

Doc. : Kahi aap criminal to nahi(smiling) Relax Raghav...me yaha apne Patient ki file bhul gaya tha jiska kal morning me operation he...anyways dressing hogayi he...aapko ye week dressing karwana padegi than it'll be fine

Raghav : Thank you...and how you know my name ?(surprised and walking towards the door)

Doc. : Ab CBI ke Agent Raghav ko kaun nahi jaanta...kher me bhi nikal hi raha hu...chaliye(closes door and locks it) waise Raghav aap kisi...kuch doondh rahe he...kayi baar roshni se andhere me doondhna behtar hota he...you'll find her(murmur)...bye

Raghav : Gaurav chalo chalte he(looks at clinic and sees a CCTV camera)...ye case khatam hone ke baad iss clinic ke Doc. se milna padega(thinking)

After about 30 min Gaurav and Raghav reached Anand housing society

Raghav : Gaurav tumhare society me guard nahi he kya...nahi me isske pehele bhi Trisha ke saath aaya tha tab bhi guard nahi tha...aur abhi bhi jab use yaaha hona chahiye to nahi he(looking at a chair near main gate of society)

Gaurav : pata nahi...mujhe to usska chehra bhi yaad nahi haa ye bata sakta hu ki wo shayad pan khata h kyunki usse paan ki smell aati he(moving towards flat) aap upper aa rahe he

Bikram and Swati come down from Gaurav Ajmera's flat

Bikram : Raghav tum thik ho(looking at bandage)...Trisha ka kuch pata chala

Raghav : Gaurav tum upper chalo...me thik hu...goli sirf chu ke nikal gayi he...dressing karwa li he mene...Swati teeno victims ki last mobile location kya thi...kya koi specific point he jo same ho...Bikram Safe house se yaaha aane ka jo raasta he waha ki naake pe checking me koi gadbad nahi mili he ab tak...dekho jo dusra naaka he waha se kuch pata chalta he kya

Swati : teeno victims ki last location koi public place hi thi...

Bikram : Raghav...dusre naake pe bhi kuch gadbad nahi pata padi he

Raghav : thik he me waapis safe house ke liye nikalta hu...lets see what can we find in morning ?

Bikram : okay Raghav...Don't worry we'll find her

Swati : Haa Raghav hum Trisha ko doondh lenge...she must be alright

Raghav : Right...bye(walking towards main gate as he had parked car outside Society)

Outside Society

Person : aye tum kaun ho aur itni raat ko society me kya kar rahe the

Raghav who's almost in car gets out of it

Raghav : pehle aap batayiye aap kaun he...shaqal se to guard lagte ho aur itni raat ko apni post chhod kar pata nahi kaha ghum rahe ho...Gaurav ne kaha tha guard se paan ki smell aati he(thinks)

Person : me yaha ka guard hu Banwarilal...society ka chakkar maarne gaya tha

Raghav : me CBI se hu...society ka chakkar marne gaye the ya sone gaye the

Banwarilal : maaf karna sahab...waise sahab ek baat puchu...kya shaher me sach me koi sanki ladkiyo ko maar raha he

Raghav : are waah tum to khabar rakhte ho

Banwarilal : kya sahab(embarassed)...waise sahab mere dost log bol rahe the aise sanki log...akele kisi sunsaan jagah le jaake sabko maarte he...jaise iss raaste par aage jaake khandar he na waisi jagah pe(pointing towards road from where Raghav came)

Raghav : agar wo murderer dono naako tak nahi pohacha he to(thinking)...(taking out his phone and calling Rajbir)...Hello Rajbir...NH se jo road divert hota he waha ke khandhar me shayaad Trisha he(rushing towards car and drives away)

Rajbir : Raghav but tumhe kaise pata...thik he me aata hu...mujhe 40 min lagenge...hello Raghav (Raghav had already ended the call)...Ye Raghav bhi(exits Safe house and rides on his bike)

At Ruin

Raghav reached at Ruins in 10 mins as its almost 3 am and place is near from Anand society. He had parked his car little away from that place...taking out his gun he's about to enter when he hears sobbing sound...and near the broken door of the ruin he found a girl sobbing hiding her face

Raghav : hey why are you crying ? tumhe bhi kidnap kiya he

the girl just nodded in yes

Raghav : where's he ? (sees girl pointing ahead Raghav turns) Thik he tum yehi ruko me dekhta hu(Raghav's vision darkens and falls unconcious)

After almost 10 mins Raghav regains conciousness and finds himself restrained to chair

Raghav : to tum ho iss sabke picche(sees his gun kept on a table infront of him) ...Trisha kaha he(trying to cut through ropes with the piece of glass he picked before getting unconcious)

Murderer : how nice of you ? to help a poor girl in distress(laughing madly) haa me hu sabke pichhe (taking away his wig)...aur ye rahi tumhari Trisha (moving a veil away to unreveal Trisha tied up)

Raghav : Trisha tum thik ho...don't worry tumhe kuch nahi hoga(assuring tone)

Murder : tum zyada confident nahi hu yaha se bahar nikalne ke liye (piercing the butcher's knife in Raghav's left shoulder)

Raghav : why ? tum aisa kyu kar rahe ho(painful voice)...kya tumne sirf teen logo ko hi maara he

Murder : tch..tch tum police wale...marte marte bhi interogation karne se baaz nahi aate...ye...ye bhi musase aise hi question kar rahi thi...mene issi liye usska muh band kar diya...dekho ab kitne aaram se bethi he(walking towards Trisha and touching her cheek)...maine apni wife ko bhi maara he...(laughing madly)...bohot bolti thi...isliye humesha ke liye chup karwa diya...jaise tumhe karne wala hu(turns towards Raghav to kill him)

Raghav pushes back the murderer which makes him fall near Trisha and in meantime Raghav gets his gun back

Murderer : aage mat badhna...nahi to iska bhi wahi haal hoga jo sabka hua(holding Trisha hostage and placing Knife on her neck)

Raghav : usse chhod do...tum yaha se bachke nahi jaa sakte(pointing gun towards him) tumne sabko kyu maara

Rajbir : Raghav tum thik ho (pointing gun towards Murderer)...to ye he sbke picche

Murderer : aye issko bolo ki yaha se jaye...nahi to me issko kaat dunga(pressing Knife against Trisha's neck)...mujhe unhe maarna accha laga iss liye maine maar diya(laughing)...tumlogo ko bhi maar dunga

Raghav : you're insane...Trisha ko chhod do or else i'll shoot you

Murderer : tumhe usne bataya na...usane bataya...ussi ne bataya hoga me yaha hu

Rajbir : kisne bataya ?

Murderer : wohi jisse pata tha...ussne kaha tha ye mujhe doondh lega (pointing towards Raghav) aur me kuch nahi kapaunga...Joker...Joker tha wo...me isse marunga to usse bohot dard hoga...ye kaha tha(looking at Trisha)...maar hi daalta hu(pressing the knife little harder which makes a small cut on Trisha's neck)

Raghav shoots the murderer. The Bullet hits him on head thus Killing him in an instant. Rajbir frees Trisha whereas Raghav stands still.

Trisha : Raghav...tum(looking in Raghav's eyes) never mind...chalo yaha se(holding his wrist and taking him away) Rajbir i'm leaving this crime scene for you to look at...forensic aur police ko inform karo...Bikram and Swati ko bhi bulalo...i'll inform Chief in the morning...ek kaam karo yaha police security lagwa do aur sirf inform karke...tum bhi ghar nikal jaana...you people too need rest...bye(exiting the ruins)

Rajbir : yes Boss(shouting) nodding head disappointedly

walking towards car

Trisha : Raghav car keys...mujhe do(getting car keys from Raghav's hand)...get in the car

Raghav : let me drive...me thik hu...tumhe chot lagi he

Trisha : maine pucha nahi...gaadi me betho(angry)...aur mujhe sirf kuch kharoche aayi...apni taraf dekha he

Raghav : thik he...(raising his hand to give up)...tumse jitna impossible he(smiling)... chalo(getting in the car)

Trisha : that's better(getting in the car and drives away)

whole journey from Ruins to hospital ended in silence

Raghav got few good stiches for his shoulder injury...Trisha on other hand got a butterfly bandage on her forhead as she got a cut there too when she got kidnapped as for the cut on her neck...it wasn't deep so there too she ended up with bandage

Raghav : why do i need to stay here ?(looking at the hospital room)

Trisha : kyunki Doc. ka kehna he...blood loss hua he(sitting on couch in Raghav's room)

Raghav : Trisha...tum janana nahi chahogi

Trisha : kis baare me ? Raghav...tumhe jab thik lage tab bata dena(lying on couch)good night Raghav

Raghav : its good morning Trisha(smirking and looking at Trisha)

Trisha : oh stop it Raghav(smiles)

In morning at Beauru Raghav received a Bouqet and a get well soon card

Raghav : to tumne doondh hi liya apni jaan ko(looks at Trisha who's busy talking to team)...manna padega ek hint se tum uss tak pohach gaye...maine kaha tha Anant se ki tumhe kuch na kare...tumhe sirf me maarunga...jaise tumhare dad ko maara tha(remembers his dad's murder)...afsos hum saamne the par tum kuch nahi kar paye...phir milenge Raghu(reading the card)

Rajbir : Raghav kiska card he ? dikhao

Raghav : ek shubhchintak ka...rehne do kuch khas nahi he(folding the card and putting it in pocket)

Bikram: Raghav tumne jin do logo ka pata karne ke liye bola tha waha kuch haath nahi laga...par aisa kya tha waha jo tumhe jaan na tha

Raghav : kuch nahi bus curiosity thi...Trisha tum sahi thi

Trisha : kis baare me...Gaurav Ajmera ke baareme...oh god

Raghav : haa wo case tha par case nahi tha

Everyone : matlab

Raghav : matlab maine uski wife Mansi aka Snehal se baat ki aur uska kehna tha ki Gaurav ke neurologist ne usse ek sedative prescribe kiya he jiske reaction ke taur pe wo kai baar hallucinate karta he

Trisha : so i was right(smiling)

Raghav : you're always right(smiles)


THE END


Hope you people like it 😊

If there are any questions i would love to answer them regarding this fan fiction

Thank you😳

Edited by Rine - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33
Lovely story loved the way it developed
Trisha in danger every one consoling Raghav that was the excellent part
One query who was the well wisher?
Raghav to Trisha U r always correct! Really Raghav?
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Az07

Lovely story loved the way it developed
Trisha in danger every one consoling Raghav that was the excellent part
One query who was the well wisher?
Raghav to Trisha U r always correct! Really Raghav?



The well wisher was Joker. it was sarcastic comment from Raghav so that no one knew where it came from(the card)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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In morning at Beauru Raghav received a Bouqet and a get well soon card

Raghav : to tumne doondh hi liya apni jaan ko(looks at Trisha who's busy talking to team).

I just love this line although it was send by his subhchintak but then also he knews about feeling of raghav towards trisha. I also love the part where trisha shows care and concern for raghav when he was injured and stayed in the hospital. The story shows the care and love which raghav has in his heart for trisha and the last part when raghav says you're always right was a like a cherry topping on this delicious story . 😉. I hope that you will pen down many stories on agent raghav with such cute ratri scenes which will bring them more and more closure to each other.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: 1973deepak

In morning at Beauru Raghav received a Bouqet and a get well soon card

Raghav : to tumne doondh hi liya apni jaan ko(looks at Trisha who's busy talking to team).

I just love this line although it was send by his subhchintak but then also he knews about feeling of raghav towards trisha. I also love the part where trisha shows care and concern for raghav when he was injured and stayed in the hospital. The story shows the care and love which raghav has in his heart for trisha and the last part when raghav says you're always right was a like a cherry topping on this delicious story . 😉. I hope that you will pen down many stories on agent raghav with such cute ratri scenes which will bring them more and more closure to each other.



Thank you and yeah i'll pen down some more stories.😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I am extremely sorry Rine for being so late..
actually exams ke kaaran I was waiting for u to finish this one n then I will read... and then apni story likhne k chakkar me I couldn't comment...

But anyway the story was amazing... Wah re wah witness hi qaatil tha...I especially lobe psychological thrillers n hence this story was lovely.. The care n concern Trisha showed for Raghav was just so heart touching. And the actions scenes n investigations were really good!!
Loved d full concept really...
I think u should write more n not to mention don't forget to add more and more RaTri 😃
Love ya
Amreen...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: Amreen...

I am extremely sorry Rine for being so late..
actually exams ke kaaran I was waiting for u to finish this one n then I will read... and then apni story likhne k chakkar me I couldn't comment...

But anyway the story was amazing... Wah re wah witness hi qaatil tha...I especially lobe psychological thrillers n hence this story was lovely.. The care n concern Trisha showed for Raghav was just so heart touching. And the actions scenes n investigations were really good!!
Loved d full concept really...
I think u should write more n not to mention don't forget to add more and more RaTri 😃
Love ya
Amreen...



Thank you and i didn't knew you had exams. Hope you score well and glad you read it.

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