What if this happens today...

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Farhan, Isha, Samrat and Abhi are seated in the airbase cafeteria when Tanvi walks in and has a seat.
Abhi is about to ask Tanvi something when Samrat asks her "Sam kaha hein?"
Tanvi says " kal raat ko uske pate mein darde ho raaha tha is liye use neend nahi aa rahi thi" this catches Abhi's attention and he becomes all alert Tanvi continues " Par Abhi ne jo jadi bootie bhaji thi use khane ka baad uske aankh lag gaye aur woh so gaye. kal raat ko badi mushkil se soye thi is liye mera maan nahin kiya use jagane ka" Abhi feels a little guilty at this point and lowers his eyes. Tanvi ends saying "baas ab aati hi hogi"

Farhan then turns to Samrat and asks " waisa tum loga ko itni dare ho kyu gayi thi" Abhi doesn't say anything but Looks at Samrat asking the same question with his all absorbing gaze. Samrat then looks towards Frahan frowning slightly and says " Mirchi khane se Sam ki tabyat kharab ho gaye thi aur mein use sahara de raha tha lekin phir woh ruk gaye aur usne mujhe jaane ko kehdiya aur mein chala bhi gaya tha but then i realised i couldn't leave her like this and went back. Hum chal rahe the ke achanak Sam ko chakkar aaya aur woh khai mein gir gaye" Abhi looks shocked at this point of time Samrat continues saying " I managed to bring her to safety somehow and we started walking towards the base camp time was running out but i was worried about her and asked her if i should carry her but she refused saying hamare paas waqt bahut kam hein if we want to reach the base camp on time i will have to run" All the people sitting on the table are all ears Samrat with his voice and face shining with pride
continues "and boy did she run all the way to the base camp" All sitting at the table look relieved. An officer then comes up to Samrat saying that he has a call for him and Samrat excuses himself from the table. Isha then with a thoughtful look on her face says " Mujhe lagta hein Sam and Sam ke beech mein kuch chal rahe hein" Abhi throws a side glance towards her and Tanvi lightly tells her " you are imagining things they are just friends" Isha rolls her eyes and in a sarcastic tone says " ya right didn't you see the way he left all of us and risked his career by not going back to the base camp at once only to help Sam" Tanvi then in a defending tone says " He did it because they are friends had there been either you or me Isha Samrat would have done the same thing"

Isha then hold up her hands and shrugging her shoulders says "whatever" All are quiet at the table with Abhi lost in his thoughts

What do you guys think???


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Posted: 17 years ago
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hehe cuteeee...i luv how u show abhiz emotionz 4 sam 😳 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow! sounds quite realistic. Now I actually want this scene to take place :D
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Posted: 17 years ago
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👏 👏 iwas actually thinking bout the same thing to happen ....n it will b luvely to watch this as abhi dont talk anything juss expresses himself thru expressions ...so it will fun to watch his diff expressions on the whole story!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thank you guys for your reply i am considering Starting an FF for choona hai aasman soon but am currently busy with exams but once i am done with them i will start a little something. Thanks once again
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Posted: 17 years ago
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yayyyy..........i think i'll like a ff by you!!

i love the "what if" for today!!
lol/

ur a good writer!! i could actually see the characters and their acting to the script!!
NICE 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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That was excellent!!!

In fact seems like Veer has given all of them some party kind of a thing and all are seated in his house. Maybe this situation will happen in house instead of the cafeteria.

I am also thinking of writing an FF. But not right now. I want the story to develop a bit before I start off.

But I am definitely looking forward for yours, whenever you start it.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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i think abhi has awesome expressions without a dialogue he can make us feel each and everything 😉

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