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Hey guys...here i am with a new one shot on swasan considering the upcoming track in the show.this os is based on the aftrevents of swara's accident on the day of makarsankranti...As i mentioned in group that i am lil bit worried about sanskar's reaction as something similar to this happened to him many years ago i,e he already experienced the fear and pain of loosing someone u madly in love with.I really donno hw cvs gonna shw the entire sequence but this was my take on the entire scenario how it should be like:-
Do share ur criticism and comments..here i go
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Everyone is on their way back to home.while shomi is still whiping thinking about what just happened all of a sudden.They came all happy happy in the morning but in a moment all of their hapiness shuttered.Time is really mercyless.
Shekhar notices her and gives a hopeless try to cheer her up by saying "shona vaha thik rahegi,uska kheyal rakhne k liye sanskar he na.tum chinta mat karo"though she nodded her head in positive response bt in her mind she thought its nt swara she is only thinking about bt its also her and sanskar's happiness which they got after a lot hurdle bt time is still nt showing mercy on this kids.
In MM :-
"thik he doctor,use hosh aatehi main apko call kar dunga,ji...haan main uska kheyal rakhunga...i will nt leave her alone", he cuts the call...looking with teary eyes at swara's state he feels like someone is stabbing his heart with a knife.He remembered it was just the morning when she came all happy with her family.Basically today he used to be so much happy coz actually its their first makar sankranti post mrg ya they r re-marrying bt its just a mere formality for him cz he knows They r already married.When swara called her up in the morning and reminds him to wear her fav blue color kurta in teasing note "dekho sanskar, usdin tumne mujhse blue pehen ne ko bola maine pehen liya ab tumhari baari he samjhe"...and like an obidient guy he rplied, "as ur wish my princess".
She is literally glowing in happiness when he comes at entrance gate to see her prince in royal blue kurta with folded sleeves and a messy hair and bearded look makes him more dashing, more manly.She winged her eyes at him in a manner to compliment him and he relied it with a flying kiss.
Sanskar just cant accept the guilt of let her go to follow maasi.He is really not willing to do it bt he always became helpless infront of her sweet innocent ways of request.But this was the biggest mistake he did today.Even after getting swara home he slappped himself couple of times for nt being with her when she needed him the most.
It was the fraction of seconds that he reached the place on time otherwise the thought of the consequenes gives him goosebumps.her closed eyes, her stopped heartbeats all panicked him to the core and what he is keep on saying to her unconscious body "please dnt go away, dnt leave me alone...i cant live without you"
End of part one
Do share ur criticism and comments..here i go
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Everyone is on their way back to home.while shomi is still whiping thinking about what just happened all of a sudden.They came all happy happy in the morning but in a moment all of their hapiness shuttered.Time is really mercyless.
Shekhar notices her and gives a hopeless try to cheer her up by saying "shona vaha thik rahegi,uska kheyal rakhne k liye sanskar he na.tum chinta mat karo"though she nodded her head in positive response bt in her mind she thought its nt swara she is only thinking about bt its also her and sanskar's happiness which they got after a lot hurdle bt time is still nt showing mercy on this kids.
In MM :-
"thik he doctor,use hosh aatehi main apko call kar dunga,ji...haan main uska kheyal rakhunga...i will nt leave her alone", he cuts the call...looking with teary eyes at swara's state he feels like someone is stabbing his heart with a knife.He remembered it was just the morning when she came all happy with her family.Basically today he used to be so much happy coz actually its their first makar sankranti post mrg ya they r re-marrying bt its just a mere formality for him cz he knows They r already married.When swara called her up in the morning and reminds him to wear her fav blue color kurta in teasing note "dekho sanskar, usdin tumne mujhse blue pehen ne ko bola maine pehen liya ab tumhari baari he samjhe"...and like an obidient guy he rplied, "as ur wish my princess".
She is literally glowing in happiness when he comes at entrance gate to see her prince in royal blue kurta with folded sleeves and a messy hair and bearded look makes him more dashing, more manly.She winged her eyes at him in a manner to compliment him and he relied it with a flying kiss.
Sanskar just cant accept the guilt of let her go to follow maasi.He is really not willing to do it bt he always became helpless infront of her sweet innocent ways of request.But this was the biggest mistake he did today.Even after getting swara home he slappped himself couple of times for nt being with her when she needed him the most.
It was the fraction of seconds that he reached the place on time otherwise the thought of the consequenes gives him goosebumps.her closed eyes, her stopped heartbeats all panicked him to the core and what he is keep on saying to her unconscious body "please dnt go away, dnt leave me alone...i cant live without you"
End of part one
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PART - 2
She is still in unconscious state...sanskar sits besides her and slowly touches her wounds around neck...there is a deep cut in the throat... "thora aur cut ho jata to sayed main bhi kuch nahi kar sakta tha", claims doctor after seeing her today...he whips...just cant see his princess in such pain...he is thinking in his mind how much swara is feeling when she is straingled by that kite thread?????
He slowly take her palm in his hand...it got some reddish mark from that thread as well...may be when she is trying to save herself...When sanskar reached to her she was almost out of hope...her last words is till haunting him..."lag raha tha tumhe dekhe bina hi jaana parega...par tum aa gaye ab jaana thora asaan ho jayeg"...without complete her full sentence she faints in his arms as lifeless...He tried to wake her up but she didn't respond...the shadows of his past incident haunts him the whole way of carrying her to MM...he called her a number of time, infact says ILU so many tymes too bt she remained silent and she is still silent...He thinks in his mind..."bas ye last tym he swara,ekbar tum thik ho jao...main tumhe khud se durr kahin nahi jaane dunga...tum yahi rahogi mere pass...kismat mere saath firse dhoka nahi kar sakti...u r mine...i wont let u go anywhere"...murmuring this words he grab her body in his tight embrace...and closes his eyes.
"S-A-N-S-K-A-R"...uttered in a very low and broken voice by her...Sanskar just couldn't believe his ears...bt no her lips are moving bt eyes are still closed...yes she is calling him in her subconscious mind...he holds her head in his palm...and she slowly opens her eyes...it is all blurred images she can see at that moment but later on she realised it's her room where she belongs to...and she is in sanskar's safe embarce...after realising the sitaution she hugs him tightly all shaking and fearing...she grabs his shirt in her feast...infact her nails are hurting him but he doesn't care...her princess is back in sense...what more he will ask for?????
"Voh...voh usne...mera gala dabake...maine churane ki koshish ki...mu mujhe bohot darr:... "ssshhh" , sanskar clams her down placing his hand on her lips...to make her realise there is nothing to worry as he is here for her and he will never ever leave her along no matter what...She breaks into tears and all she could say in her attitudes and appreviations are she is relly terrified by that incident...she dnt wanna go anywhere and she want to live her life...she wants to be alive with her prince...
Sanskar hugs her again bt this time hides her in his chest and makes her feel like she is in the most safest zone of the world..."maine bhi tumhare saath bura hona chahta hoon...apni har saas me tumhara ahsaas pana chahta hoon...I love u swara...aur main tumhe nahi kho sakta...i just can't...meri jaan tum main basti he...tumne tab aise kaise kehe diya ki jaana assan hoga?????mujhe chodke jana itna asaan he tumhare liye?????main janta hoon mujhe tumhe akela nahi chodna chahiye tha.par uske liye itni badi sazaa dene waali thi mujhe??dobara aisa kiya to mujhse bura koi nahi hoga...samjhi?????Mujhe chodke kahin mat jana swara.kabhi mat jana...I love u so much...nahi jee paunga tumhare bina"...Both break down in tears.The day is signing off with the clock strikes at 12 am... but he had discovered a new sunshine as her princess is again smiling and talking to him...ya she keeps her promise...she will never ever leave him alone.
THE END
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Anupamaa
