MANAN SS OUR LOVE WILL COMPLETE US(chapter 01 pg 02)

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character sketch
Nandini Moorthy: 23 year old girl ,psychiatrist by profession .a happy girl full f life parents died long back have a grand mother who is in mnglore , works in life care hospital , lovely but doesnot fully believes in love
Navya neveli :psychiatrist by profession works with nandini her best friend her ssole sisiter
Manik Malhotra:a 26 year ola man hot sinfully a greek god/(his rest details as story progresses
fab4 is not same
it is broken completely
mukti ,dhruv ,aliya and cabir are busy in their lives
mukti and aliya handles a fashion house
dhruv runs a music company
cabir handles dhawan industries
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice prologue
Loved it
Continue soon
Do pm me
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Originally posted by: angellovemanan

Nice prologue

Loved it
Continue soon
Do pm me

thanku dear
will surely pm u
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...PROLOGUE...
it was a bright new morning when a girl in a simple house sleeping peacefully when her beauty sleep gets disturbed by her alarm she wakes up and goes to have a bath she then gets ready in a pink top with white jeans she is none other than NANADINI MOORTHY she taes her coat and leaves to hospital
nandini was in taxi heading to hospital when she is lost in thoughts of yesterday night
nandinis POV
aaiyaapa why you test people haan...whu ..u know how difficult it is fo them ...yesterday when before I was abut to come home I met him he walking on the road like a lifeless person ...his eyes depicted pain they stated that he need someone by his side his eyes were saying that he was alone ...lonely then when I talked to him he was talking insane I really thought he needed a treatment but not that mental patients get he needed treatment of love care aand attention but before I could do something he vanished ...he just disappeared I looked for him but couldn't find him I don't know why but I really want to meet him again lkn on a good note ...I toh don't even know his name aayappa apko maza ata hai mujhey saatane men ,logon ko saaatane men but seriously ayyiappa aj tak mene apse jo bhi maanga wo aapne lia kunk mere pass koi nahi jis k liye men aapse kuch maangon lkn aaj men maangna chahti hun usk liye pata nahi kun lkn bas mangana chahtihun ...plz grant my this wish
PLEASE GRANT PEACE TO THAT STRANGER
plzz use dher sariii khushiyaan de do...
with this alone tear escaped her eyes as if realizing that strangers pain...
pata nahi kesa likha hai aur kia likha hai
pasand aya to batadena na aye to bhi ...
bakkki aplogon ki marzi...😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Continue soon...
Nice prologue and cs
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CHAPTER 01

Nandini was in her thoughts when the taxi haulted infront of the hospital she got out of the car and then after paying to the taxidriver she came inside she met he collegues and greeted her seniors

Her day was going pretty well it was almost late afternoon nandini was siting in her cabin when she heard loud voices coming from outside she went out to check what happened

She came out to see a middle age young girl standing with a man who is playing with her duppatta and the girl is making irritated faces and shouting

G:urghhh...koi leke jao ise plz yeh pagal hai pagal ise leke jao koi...ise treatment ki sakhat zaroorat hai

Hearing the word pagal and treatment the boy got hell angry which his facial expressions clearly tell and then jerking her duppatta which he was holding he held her shoulders tightly and said in loud and angry voice

Guy:men pagal nahi hun samjhi...pagal hogi tum men nahi hun aur nahi mujhey kisi treatment ki zaroorat hai ...haan...

Saying so the guy showed his tongue to the girl like a 3 year old kid

All this while nandini was just looking at the scenario admiring the guy who was a kid in actual and was showing tantrums too ...though she could not see his face aut with side glance sshe could see his childy pouts and cute expressions

Nandini was also listening to the young girl firstly she was very angry but then seeing the cute exprsssions of the guy she was smiling wholeheartedly

Nandini pov

Ayyiappa he is so sweet and cute just like a child ...look at his pout aww...he is ver very cute

Nandini was in her thoughts when the young girls statement made her hell angry

The gys childerly tantrums made the young girl hell angry so she said

G:tum pagal hi ho samjhe tum aur haan tumhain treatment ki bhi zaroorat hai balke tumhain treatment ki nahi pagal khane men jaane ki zaroorat hai ...pagal khane hi men tumhari sahi jagah hai

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CHAPTER 01 B

This was it for nandini so she shouts ENOUGH

Nandini then comes infront of the lady and shouts

N:dr sakshi how could you even say something like that haan ...you are a doctor kai yeh baat aap bhool rahi hoo haan hum psyactrist zaroor hain lkn use pehle doctor hain and as a doctor hum oath lete hain never to say no to anyone agar ap itni chooti se baat nahi samajh sakti hain to u don't deserve to work here get that clealy...

Dr sakshi heads her head down and gets scared she mumbles a sorry softly and then leaves

The guy all this while was just looking at nandini where as after sakshi left nandini turns to look at the guy and is shocked to see it's the same guy whom she met yesterday nandini was shocked and so was the guy as if he has also recognized her they both at the same time said

Both in union :YOU

Nandini recovers first from the shock and then says

N:I ...I am dr nandini moorthy...your name??

The guy thinks for a while and stares at nandini and then says

Guy:Manik...MANIK MALHOTRA

Sometimes we don't know what is coming for us next but then also we should be prepared for this

A journey of manan where they both are incomplete in some way or the other and the only weaon they have is love which will complete them

OUR LOVE WILL COMPLETE US ...
kesa hai do tell
should I continue...???
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update now nandu will treat him n I think u should make them stay together waiting when they will fall in love
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update. Seems to be different and interesting story. Continue soon.thanks for pm.
Keep writing.
Stay blessed😊

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