Surprise Surprise Surprise-Chapter 5 updated on pg 36- Feb 14th 2016

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The voice of the phone woke Nandini up from her sleep. Nandini looked at the clock and its 2.30 a.m.

Itni der raat ko kaun bulaa raha hai?' Nandini murmured a bit angrily and picked up the call and its Navya.

Nanduuu...main marr gayi Nanduuu, main marr gayi'

Kya hua? Aise kyon bol rahi hai?'

Cabir aaj subah ko aa raha hai'

Tho ismein kya hai?' Nandini asked in a confused voice.

Tune suna nahiii? Cabir aa raha hai' Navya repeated once again in a shivering tone.

Haan..tho tu usse jaake mil na!' Nandini said casually.

Tu aise bol rahi hai? Tujhe meri koi fikar nahi?' Navya asked in a bit frustrated tone.

Mujhe fikar haina..isliye tho bol rahi hoon..tu jaake Cabir se mil' Nandini said with a little smirk on her face.

Tujhe na..bilkul meri fikar nahi hai. Tujhe nahi pata? Cabir NRI hai..aur mere parents ko NRI ladke bilkul pasand nahi!' Navya said sitting down nervously on her bed.

Haan tho? Tu tho Cabir se pyaar karti haina? Aur Cabir tujhse bhi! Phir kya problem hai?' Nandini said sitting up on her bed.

Nanduuu tu samajh nahi rahi hai...Cabir Fab 5 ke drummer hai aur unke yahan pe performance honge. Kuch din hi rahega aur phir lautke U.S. chala jaayega'

Haan tho tu usse mil le na'

Nahi mil sakti na...pehle mujhe mere parents ko sab kuch bataa dene padenge ke main Cabir se pyaar karti hoon'

Arre...tune ab tak apne parents ko bataaya nahi?' Nandini asked with a shock in her voice.

Tujhe mujhe marvaane hai?'

Arre tu pyaar karti hai..tho apne parents ko bataane main kya problem hai? Aaj nahi tho kal tho pata lagna hi haina..'

Haan tu tho yehi bolegi..tere paas tho Aryaman haina'

Aryaman ko mujh main koi interest nahi..Aryaman Alya ko chahta hai. We are just friends' Nandini said casually.

Arre tho kya hua? Koi bhi problem aaye Aryaman...Alya se pehle tujhe hi tho call karta hai.' Navya said with a smile on her face.

That's coz we are really good friends. Tu wo sab chod abhi ye bata..ke tu kya karnewaali hai?'

Main..pata nahi ke main kya karoongi...mujhe mere parents ko samjhaane padenge..before Cabir arrives aur Cabir se milvaane bhi hai. Cabir ke saath maine internet pe chat kiye hai tho mere address ke baare main tho Cabir kuch nahi jaanta...mujhe tho Cabir ne apne bachpan ke photo hi dikhaaye hai aur bola hai ke milenge tho face to face milenge.'

Arre aaj aanewala hai aur aaj bhi photo nahi dikhaya?' Nandini asked in a perplexed tone. Kuch tho bola hoga na apne baare main?'

Haan bola haina..bola ke lamba hai, aur chehre pe ek til hai' Navya said trying to remember more details.

Tho tu airport jab Cabir se milne aayegi tho usko pehchaanegi kaise?'

Cabir ne bola hai..ke black colour shirt, blue colour jeans aur uspe brown colour blazer pehnega...' Navya said with a smile on her face.

Achcha..tho phir tu jaake mil na Cabir se..ghar main koi bhi bahaana bana'

Nahi yaar..kal mujhe koi ladki dekhne aayega'

Kya? Tujhe koi ladki dekhne aa raha hai..tho tujhe bataa dene chahiye the na...ke tu Cabir se pyaar karti hai' Nandini said with a frown on her face.

Nandu papa bahut ziddi hai..aur tujhe tho pata hi haina...mere zindagi main koi boyfriend bhi nahi the aur internet pe chat kiye tho wo bhi chupke chupaake' Navya said a bit nervously.

Tho tu kya karegi Navya?' Nandini asked in a confused tone.

Yaar..actually Cabir ne two days pehle hi message daale the ke aaj subah ko India aayenge. Magar project ke wajah se mujhe time hi nahi mile...tho maine wo message abhi thodi der pehle hi dekhe...aur Cabir ne bola hai..ke airport pe receive karne jaaoon' Navya said nervously biting her nails.

Tho...abhi tu kya karegi?' Nandini asked with a questioning look on her face.

Nanduu please tu meri help kar na..tu jaake mil Cabir se!'

Main? Main kyon jaaoon? Aur Cabir tho mujhe pehchaanta bhi nahi' Nandini said nervously.

Tu na..kisi bhi tarah kal poore din Cabir ko rokke rakh...kisi bhi tarah se koi bahaana banaa aur rok le. Ladki dekhnewaale aake jaane ke baad..main kisi bhi tarah se bataa doongi unko' Navya pleaded with Nandini.

Nahi...main ye nahi kar sakti..arre yaar main kaise bahaana banaaoon? Kya bolke ek complete ajnabi ko rokke rakhoon?' Nandini asked in a confused tone.

Tu please help kar na...tujhe pata haina..mere ghar ke situation. Agar main Cabir se na mili..tho Cabir naraaz ho jaayega aur shayad mujhse mile bina chala jayega. Aur main kal Cabir se milne bhi nahi jaa sakti. Main Cabir ko khona nahi chahti...aur tu hi meri help kar sakti hai' Navya said in a pleading tone and Navya started sobbing.

Achcha achcha..tu ro mat...main jaaoongi kal' Nandini said in a confused tone.

Thanks Nanduuu tu sach main pari hai! Tujhe na bas Cabir ko dhoond nikalne hai..aur koi bhi bahaana banaake uske saath rehne hai..main jab tujhe message doongi..tab tu Cabir ko apne saath ghar leke aana..main kaise bhi karke Cabir ko manaa loongi'

Tho mujhe tab tak jhoot bolne padenge?' Nandini asked a bit nervously.

Haan please..mere liye kar na' Navya pleaded with her.

Haan..koshish karoongi. Aur agar Cabir nahi ruka tho?' Nandini asked confused.

Tujhe kuch bhi karne hai..aur Cabir ko rokke rakhne hai...Cabir 8.a.m ke flight se aayega. please help yaar' Navya said once again.

Achcha tere liye main poori koshish karoongi'

Nandini cut the call and looked at the clock..she just had a few hours more to sleep. Nandini once again kept the alarm at 7.a.m and went back to sleep.

Should I continue this?? Do U find this interesting?😛

So I updated the next chapter

Chapter 2- page 4

Chapter 3- page 16

Chapter 4- page 27

Chapter 5- page 36

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charanyaaj thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Aww new story...
Interesting! i thk nandu is going to meet manik thkg...
Lets see. Pls cont...
Edited by charanyaaj - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: charanyaaj

Aww new story...
Interesting! i thk nandu is going to meet manik thkg...
Lets see. Pls cont...


Thanks yaar...I'm trying to think of keeping this in a few shots..than making it into an FF. This story cannot be too long..😆😆😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting di... I think cabir intentionally give navya manik's description.. But he never knows that navya sent nandu there as navya...
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Amazing amazing amazing...
Do continue!! 😃
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Originally posted by: etuu

Interesting di... I think cabir intentionally give navya manik's description.. But he never knows that navya sent nandu there as navya...


Hmm...the description felt like Manik's na?😆😆😆 Magar Cabir tho lamba haina..quite😉😛😆
Haan... Nandu jaayegi receive karne😈
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Originally posted by: Dhingli44

Amazing amazing amazing...
Do continue!! 😃


Thanks a lot, my dear..yes I will😉😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Aaing chehra nahi dekha ek dusre ka 😕
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Originally posted by: lovePANI

Aaing chehra nahi dekha ek dusre ka 😕


Nahi yaar..chehra nahi dekha ab tak...Cabir wants it to be surprise😈😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Ouieee...what a surprise 😲 😆
Poor Navya 😆
Btw PriYa.. Navya ko ladki dekhne aa rhi 😕 arey nahi baba..ladka dekhne aega 😆

Why Cabir gave Manik ka description 😕 sab golmaal 😃

Plz do continue naa .. And ayyo ayyappa bhi 😳 😆

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