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tamoha(tora)

@..tora.tangled.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#111

Originally posted by: meerubzara
very beautifully written
fabulous

thank you😊

Originally posted by: arwakantawala
Awesome updates and abhiya are progressing slowly loved it

glad you enjoyed reading😊

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tamoha(tora)

@..tora.tangled.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#112

Originally posted by: cuteariya
I don't like pia risa & tora at all
they just stupid peoples
abhay hurt them very badly still they forgive him just like that haha, but it's not always stupid to forgive dear😊
most with pia she broke the record of being stupid 🤪
she bear every humiliate by abhay & his so called girlfriend 😡
still madly in love with abhay that's why she always get hurt for being emotional fool
but even after that its not enough for her I guess their situation is a little complicated...they can't really go to extremes of loving and hating always😳...let's just say, she knows abhay better than anyone else...and rest assured, she won't let him take her for granted..
continue soon

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Indu

@Paint.It.BlacK.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#113

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tamoha(tora)

@..tora.tangled.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#114

Yay!!! Finally an update😆.. right, first of all, i know i am kind of responsible for the delayed update of this story...but i am lucky you are sweet enough to understand and forgive😳...

now coming to the update...oh,oh before that..about those four lines you wrote..i already told you, i'll be waiting to read more such lines from you..and i won't take a no😛...it was brilliant👏

ok ok now coming to the update...it was awesome and beautifully written!!! You have a way with words fairy, and i'm not kidding... the way you give importance to each detail in your updates make the updates come more to life and seem more vivid👏👏...

abhay is finally starting to let go of his denial...finally...phewww😆... and he kept her earring, that was so so sweet..this gesture means a lot and reveals a lot😳...

i loved loved their talk about the perfume😳😳...it was so sweet, perfect and so well...so ...them😳...the undercurrent of longing and love always lingers and you bring that out perfectly..⭐️..

and i have always admired the way you write those parts about the newspapers(and once you wrote about forum reactions)- i can never write reports and stuff with such precision..kudos to you😃👏...

awesome writing...and well i won't say continue soon, because i'll be the one to update next😆

Edited by ..tora.tangled. - 9 years ago

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--geny--

@--geny--

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Posted: 9 years ago

#115

Res May I?
kr diyaaa!!
@Tora-I love ur dp...intense abhiya..n their noses actually touched... <3 Any scene just like that in this...

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bookworm-ALS--

@bookworm-ALS--

Stunner

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Posted: 9 years ago

#116

Uh oh. I guess Abhiya will have their hands full now thanks to media and those leaked gossip articles. Waiting to see what happens next.

P. S. If I'm not mistaken, cerulean refers to the colour blue while hazel refers to the green-brown colour, with respect to eyes. How can Abhay's eyes be both?

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Indu

@Paint.It.BlacK.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#117

@Shreya Unquestionably u are right but hazel my dear is used often to depict lightness of irises as well which can be brown/green brown / blue brown-- anything...! So in that regard it's both as eye shade varies from person to person ! which also means a mixture of both brown n blue color ! ;)

And for more check out the different shades of eye color! :)

Edited by Paint.It.BlacK. - 9 years ago

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Tulishikha Biswas

@Dark-Beauty

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Posted: 9 years ago

#118

Wow finally update yipii

Coming back to the update

Mind blowing update

So finally Abhay is sure about what he wants

Hope he'll confess soon

Who was that lady at last??? Abhay's ex???

Thanks for pm

Please continue soon

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Aaniya

@EVIL_ANGEL

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Posted: 9 years ago

#119

lovely updt...!!! Abhay's mind is working in right direction.. He kept pia's earing.. & pia as usual lovely girl.. Hope both will confess soon..:)) thanks for pm...😊

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megha sharma

@MS-meghasharma

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Posted: 9 years ago

#120

wonderful update

this time both abhay and pia are trying to understand their own feelings. abhay though is more close in realizing then pia as when he was remembering his time spent with her he did concluded in end that she is more then a friend for him. it seems quite clear he has accepted that too and the only thing he is waiting for is to see if pia too feels the same. his long drive was written very well ..u can actually visualise it.

pia knows what she feels for him is more then friendship but she is not ready to accept it. she lightens up when she sees his msg or hear his voice but is low when she doesn't. their msg interaction was sweet . abhay kept pia's earring..that was cute.

it looks like kate is back in action. she is the one spreading all this gossip about them. abhay can still tackle that but pia is a bit more soft hearted and sensitive and it will definitely be upsetting for her to read all of this.

it was written beautifully indu specially abhay and pia's thoughts regarding each other. it was just brilliantly beautiful.

loved it

Edited by MS-meghasharma - 9 years ago