New Arshi SS ~ Hey Angel! ~ 15/01/16

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Hey Angel!




{Prologue}

It was cold. And it was dark.

He felt as if he was in a void succumbing to darkness quicker than falling asleep.

Where was he?

Suddenly a blinding white light flashed before his eyes. A falling sensation took over his body. It was like skydiving but more permanent.

He finally hit the ground after the freefall and sat up straight, gasping.

But something was not right.

He looked around himself and saw white.

White was everywhere!

"What?" he asked himself perplexed.

"Hello Arnav." The sweetest voice greeted him.

He turned around to the source of voice and was awestruck. She was a beauty he had never ever fathomed!

"What is happening? Where am I?" He asked, still in a daze.

"You're dead Arnav. And you're passing, from earth to wherever you deserve. Heaven or hell." She smiled calmly.

"I'm DEAD?" Arnav exclaimed. He could not understand how. Last he remembers, he was driving to office and then...

And then his car toppled and it crashed!!

He really was dead!!

But who is she? And what is she doing here? Was she dead too?

"Are you dead too?" He spoke his thought aloud.

She giggled and shook her head in denial.

"NO. I'm here to stay with you until you go where you belong."

"Like a guardian Angel? But for dead?" Arnav asked confusedly.

"Yes! Exactly!" She exclaimed happily that her point came across fine.

"What's your name?"

"I don't have one."

"Is this your first time guiding' someone?" he asked putting emphasis on guiding'.

"Yup." She said popping the p'.

"Why don't you have a name?"

"Who would even give me a name?" She laughed.

"May I?" He charmed.

"You will?" She asked with excitement clear in his eyes.

"Sure. Let me think." He smiled thoughtfully.

While he was thinking, she was practically bouncing on her feet in joy of finally having a name.

"Oh, I know." Arnav smirked.

"Tel meee." She was impatient.

"Khuhsi." He smiled softly. "You are happiness in flesh and bones."

"I like it." She said happily.

"Let me introduce myself. Hello, I'm Arnav and I'm dead." He smirked, kissing her hand.

"Hello Arnav from the dead. I'm Khushi." She bowed charmed.

She turned to walk ahead. She was 10 meters away when Arnav called for her.

"Hey Angel!"

She faced him.

"What now?"

She just smiled in reply.

"We now find out if you are to go to heaven or hell."

See, simple.

~


Hello Munchkins!!

Here is a new story 😆

And it is very superficial 😆. But I had this crazy idea and I wanted to write about it.


Please do tell me how the story is 😃


I will only continue if I get a HUMONGOUS response 😃




Love you, always.




~Mrs.HarryStyles~



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Posted: 9 years ago
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superb start
would love to read it further

and she how it progresses
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Very different nd interesting...
Simply amazing!
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Different concept
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Its beautiful <3
loooved it
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Superb concept Arnav is dead and khushi Is angle I just can't wait to read further
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Superb start
Well written
Loved it
Plz continue soon
Thanks for the pm
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Wow.. thats really something new n exciting concept:) loved it
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Different concept
Looking forward to read this
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Very dffrnt nd intrstng plot
Plz continue

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