Akdha OS: Race Updated

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So here r come with another os
hope u like it


A 9years girl on cycle trying to catch her 11years best friend or should I say competitor To win the RACE and boths parents r cheering them
Jodha:Wait jalal I will not leave u ;said while catching her breaths
Jalal:Come on Jo U gave up so easily
Jodha Singh ! Is backing off from challenge
Jodha:I will beat u jalal
Jalal:For that u have to catch me Jo
u r surely loosing this RACE
jodha:No I will win for sure
Jalal:In ur dreams Jo
as u know no one can beat jalal khan
Hearing this jodha confidence gets down and her glowing face started turning sad
seeing his bestie face like this jalal felt bad and to make her happy he started decrease his speed in such a way that no one could notice it and with this jodha wins the race
Jodha jumping in excitement :Yipee I won the RACE
I beated jalal
yaeee
Seeing jodha Boths parents become happy but Jalal was the one who was most happy
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The little girl is crying profoundly as her best friend is leaving for Europe for further studies
Hamida:He will come soon beta
Jodha:No ammi *sop* he can't *sop* go
with whom *sop* I will play And with whom *sop* I will fight
Maina:But studies r also important na
Jodha:No mom *sop* I don't want *sop* to listen anything
*sop* he is not going *sop* anywhere And thats final *sop*
Maina very well knows its waste of time to talk with her stubborn daughter shaking her head she left the room only to find jalal on the door
Jalal:How's Jo maa
Maina:U know her na she is so stubborn
she is not listening to us
Jalal:I will talk with her
With this maina and hamida left both bestz alone
Moving towards the crying girl
Jalal:Jo
Jodha:I will not *sop* talk with u *sop*
Seeing her best friend crying jalals heart pricked
Jalal:U won't talk with ur jalal
Jodha:Noo
bcoz u r leaving me
Jalal:I am not leaving u its just a matter of few years then I will be back ;Turning her towards him And weeping her tears
And ya since u defeated me so now I have to practice a lot na to win The RACE back
On this jodha chuckle a little and hugged her best friend
Jodha:U will come soon na
Jalal:yup and When I will come we will RACE again and that time u will surely lose Jo
On this giggle
Jodha:No I will win the RACE again
Seeing her smile jalal felt relieved
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After 10 years a handsome boy entered in car after stepping out of airport towards his home in this 10 years the only thing he has in his mind was his childhood friend
in this years although they did chatting and talking but the boy is excited to meet His bestie sorry his secret love
Jalal:I can't wait to MEET u Jo and to confess my feelings but what if she found somebody else;He thought
But his chain of thought broken by sudden break of car
Jalal:what happen Suraj chacha(driver)
Suraj Chacha:We reach jalal baba
Jalal::Bu where we r chacha its a some kind of ground
Chacha:Jodha baby said to take u here
Hearing Her Jo's name jalals face enlightened and he stepped out of car only to find all his friends,parents and jos parents giving her weird smiles but his eyes were only searching for her love
Jalal:Hi abbu what's all this and what r we doing here
with this he started heading towards them but suddenly a bike comes in his tracks
Jalal:What the can't u see and who r u
On this the bike driver takes off her halmet revealing her beautiful face to angry man and on seeing her loves face
Jalal:Jo!
Jodha:Hi jalal
Jalal:what's all this and what r u doing on bike
Jodha:Remember our RACE
u said na we will RACE again when u will come
so here I come to defeat u again
Hearing her beautiful and confidence voice plus her beautiful and innocent face jalal felt like to take her in his embrace
Jalal:K Jo let's RACE and this time u won't win
as nobody I can beat me
Jodha:Oh really we will see
With this both bestz settled on their bikes and started their RACE
as usually jalal is again winning over Jodha and Here jodha is trying to catch her
Jalal:U will loose this time Jo
just admit it
Jodha:No I won't
Knowing very well that her Jo doesn't like defeat this will make her sad jalal again slow down his speed in the end to make her Jo win the RACE
And at the end jodha win the RACE
Jalal:Congrs Jo u win again
On this jodha started crying
seeing her love crying jalal took her in his embrace like always to calm her down
Jalal:What happen Jo u won then why r u crying
Breaking the hug
Jodha:How many times u will loose jalal for me
On hearing this jalal gets shock
Jalal:What r u saying Jo
Jodha:What do u think I can't understand And see that u always loose for me why and how many times u will lose the RACE
Jalal:Every time I will do that Jo
Jodha:And why
On this
jalal:Woh I...I
jodha:Forget it u can't say that
but I can
Jodha:I love u jalal
Jalal without wasting a second: I love u too jo
Taking her on born crushing hug but their romantic moment got disturbed bcoz of unwanted audience and by their parents teasing
But jalals next step really shocked jodha
Kneeling before jodha
Jalal:Will u jodha singh will accampony me in the rest RACE of my life
Hearing this jodha too kneel in front of him and screamed aloud:Yes
with this both kiss each other turning everyone's face into red
The End

This one was all my special friends especially tanu as she want a happy ending os
I know bohat bakwas thii
tomatoes and chappals r welcome
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Update kaha hai.. Jaldi update karo na
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Main bhi ress 🤣
Like update ke baad milega😎
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Originally posted by: swriter

Main bhi ress 🤣
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acha GI 🤣
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Originally posted by: ANJIJHA

Update kaha hai.. Jaldi update karo na

I will update soon 😉
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Arre update kaha hain😲

konsa update 😃
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Originally posted by: sho123

I will update soon 😉


Soch lo Di.. Jitna late update utna late comment 😉 😆
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Oye update kr jldi se...updateee
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Originally posted by: ANJIJHA


Soch lo Di.. Jitna late update utna late comment 😉 😆

KR toh dia 😉
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Originally posted by: sonali96

Oye update kr jldi se...updateee

de toh dia 😃

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