OS: Swara's Ordeal (5) : Mellifluous Quatrain

Originally posted by: -Ros-

This is amazing. 👏

When I heard the news of Kavita's entry, I had hoped she'd be positive. That would've been so much more interesting and heart breaking, but heyho this is Indian T.V... everything will be dramatised to an extend where normalcy cease to exist. 🤔

Although in my mind, I'd wanted Sanskaar to pluck up the courage and tell Kavita after she makes her entry that he's hopelessly in love with Swara & can only see her future with her, I liked this version better. Knowing Sanskaar, he would be in turmoil at the thought of turning down his first & faultless lover but not doing that would bring heartbreak to the person whom his whole world around. So it'd make much more sense for Kavita to step down and leave SwaSan. She's so right, any sane soul can see the love these two have for each other.

Kavita, Sanskaar and Swara are all equally helpless, shattered and anguished. If CVs had created a Kavita like yours, she truly could've been a beautiful soul and remain a beautiful memory for Swasan.

I loved how you unpicked their names... ⭐️⭐️

Kavita's pain was wonderfully penned out.. she was being so realistic saying that she loves him but she'll get over it. This is what people do..they move on..

Originally posted by: Monica_Suhasini

its really very beautiful...

how nice if cvs have shown kavitha in this way...

👏u penned it perfectly

loved it...

Could you guys please get your act together? Even a blind person can see that the two of you are hopelessly in love with each other, so please stop this silent moping around and start talking to each other. Do acknowledge and accept your love for each other. Truly, if I were stronger and if Sanskaar was not so stubborn (please, Sanskaar, we both know you can be a real stubborn mule) I would have whacked your heads together in the hope of knocking some sense into you.

superb lines...

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

hey Monica - glad you liked these lines - well I felt both Swara and Sanskar did need to be forced to acknowledge their feelings and felt that Kavita would really be the best person to do so.

Nyna

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

Thank you so much for your words - they mean a lot to me. And yes, I did think it would be putting Sanskaar through turmoil asking him to choose. As he himself said, there is a huge difference between loving someone and obtaining So it makes sense that both the persons he loved / loves would understand and the logical solution would be Kavita leaving.

By the way, could you let me know your name? I am Nyna.

Originally posted by: Monica_Suhasini

nyna she is rose😊

Originally posted by: sneharay

Nice.. 😊

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

Thank you so much for your words - they mean a lot to me. And yes, I did think it would be putting Sanskaar through turmoil asking him to choose. As he himself said, there is a huge difference between loving someone and obtaining So it makes sense that both the persons he loved / loves would understand and the logical solution would be Kavita leaving.

By the way, could you let me know your name? I am Nyna.

Hey Nyna 😳,

You're welcome! I will always comment on your work 😆, I can see how insightful you are from them-- I read your take on Swara when she didn't trust Sanskaar. When the whole fandom was on a bashing spree, you were one of the very few people who tried to understand her (not defend, I don't think Swara can be defended for what she did there). I absolutely loved how you unpicked her. I had similar thoughts about her & you penned it out in a concise yet effective manner.

My name is Sneha, but my pet name is Rose, which is what everyone calls me here.. you can call either, idm. Suhu's already told you! 😆