SWASAN ff- coz you r the only one#updated page 2#

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whiteMagic

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Posted: 10 years ago

Hi guys I am new to this forum and you can call me manna. I am going to write an ff on swasan. This is my first. Any kind of feedback is welcome😊
Here goes the story except SWASAN all characters are different
My hands were shaking as I typed "OK" in my mobileTears were rolling down my cheeks before I could stop them. I put the mobile down on the side and laid down on the bed. I knew I won't sleep tonight. I don't exactly remember when I fell in love with sanskar. We were in the same school, he was an year senior. He was my first crush. His face was enough to make my whole day, I used to do stupid things to get a glimpse of him and he was hardly aware of my existance.
The day he passed out from school I cried the whole day. But life goes on, I did good in my studies. And I tried my best to know whereabouts of sanskar but all in vain. I joined my college and it was in this last year of college that I met Mrs. Sujata maheshwari in engagement of my college friend . She was clearly smitten by me
Destiny played a cruel joke with me. Few days after this meeting she was at my home asking for my hand in marriage to her Son. My mother was as shocked as l was."mene apne bete ko b bol diya hai. Office me fas gya hoga,aata he hoga "she smiled
"What nonsense is this"I said to my mom when we were preparing snacks in the kitchen"Family acchi hai waise"she said trying to cover her laugh at my reaction"seriously"I looked at my mother in disbelief
suddenly the door bell rang.
My mother said-"tu ja, mai dekhti hu yeh sab"

I opened the door and I was blown away. he was standing right infront of me smiling at me. I felt dizzy

"hello, I am sanskar"

I don't remember much after that. All I remember was that he was sitting infront of me, my first love. My heart was not in my control. I felt lost. Lost in him. And in the end when he was leaving he turned towards me and
"can I have your contact number"
"huh??"
"contact number?"
"ohh. . sure"
I felt at the top of the world. It felt like a dream and it indeed was a dream. I checked time it was 3 a.m. Opened my inbox and read his messege again.
"Heyy swara, this is Sanskar here. Sorry to get you in this awkward situation but I will make everything normal. I can't marry you. I want to meet you tomorrow in the park near your college.

Edited by whiteMagic - 10 years ago

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Posted: 10 years ago

Superb amazing Manna please continue. Waiting for more😊

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Ananna Islam

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Posted: 10 years ago

very niceee..but last one the message just felt so bad..

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Posted: 10 years ago

Please update today itself Manna😊

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whiteMagic

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Posted: 10 years ago

Hii guys!! Im up with the first chapter of COZ YOU R THE ONE.
The story will be a little slow in the beginning. I will try my best to make it lively...
Here goes the 1st chapter...Please do read and comment!!!

PART 1
It has been 15 minutes since I am waiting for swara in the park. I took out mobile from my pocket in order to make a call. As I looked at the gate she was there in a light green suit,with her hair untied she looked beautiful but still not my type. "Hello" I smiled but she did not return my smile. "Hello" she said while sitting on a bench. We both sat on the bench for odd 10 minutes, she didn't uttered a word. Neither she looked at me and then I thought of breaking the awkward silence.
"I am sorry"
"For..?"
"This whole marriage thing" I thought she would say something but when she didn't I continued "the way parents behave at times is very embarrassing. My mother approached you for marriage in the most nonsensical way possible" l chuckled "so I am asking sorry on her behalf. You have no idea the whole emotional drama thing she is doing with me"
I looked at her again for response but she didn't even nodded. "are you listening?" I enquired.
"What do you want me to do" she said in a low voice, still not looking at me.
"I want you to say NO for this marriage, because I can't do that apparently" I said what I came here for.
Her eyes turned towards me, her expressions were difficult to read "are you ok?" I said. She nodded and moved her face in the opposite direction. "My mother will get hurt real bad if I'll say NO to this marriage so I am asking you to do me this favour. After demise of my father last year I am the only one she have. I hope you will understand " I really hoped she does. Fingers crossed I waited for her response. After sometime she turned her face towards me, to my disbelief she was smiling-" I do understand. I will say NO for this marriage" she stood up "wait,let's have coffee" I have no idea why I said that but I could feel I have hurt her, and she was sad though she was smiling. "No thanks I would rather go" "OK then, bye" "bye" she ran away as if it was difficult for her to stay here any longer. And I sat there on the bench for a while. She looked like a good girl but you need to be more than good to be sanskar's wife.

"Aa gyi ghar beta" my mother was standing at the door when I reached home "late ho gya aaj thoda tumhe, swara mai tumse baat kar ri hu" and I couldn't hold myself anymore. I started crying like never before. "Kya ho gya" she said cupping my face in her hands. I hugged her and she got busy consoling me. "Mai abhi pani layi" she brought a glass of water for me. "Kya hua h swara bata mujhe, kuch mat chupana" "Sanskar se shadi nahi krni mujhe" I said. My mother looked at me for a whole one minute before she could utter something," kal tumhe dekh kar mujhe lga tumhe wo kafi pasand hai" her voice was very low. She lifted my face from my chin and said "Lekin isme rone ki kya baat has swara, tum jo kahogi wo hi hoga,ok" she smiled. "Hmmm.."
later at dinner she informed me that the marriage was officially cancelled now. You can't force anyone to love you. I have cried enough it's time to move on now. It will pain, maybe forever but I have to be strong

AFTER A WEEK
It was at my friends wedding where we met again. It was the same friend at whose engagement party I had met Mrs. Sujata maheshwari. And there she was again, standing with her son. Who looked extremely handsome. I don't care about them I was telling myself continuously. And then I saw both of them walking towards me. I lowered my head and started pretending as if I have not seen them "Hello beta" I knew whose voice that was. " Hello aunty, namaste" I said looking at her. She sat in the chair near me while sanskar kept standing. Meanwhile my mother came searching for me. She looked quiet shocked. I gave my chair to my mother and both the women greeted each other formally. They soon started conversing, after some worldly conversations sujata aunty just said" swara beta?" "Jii" "tumne iss rishte ko mana kyu kia?" this is the question she wanted to ask so long. My mother too was looking at me because she also had no idea about what went wrong. She was also waiting for my answer. I looked at sanskar who was looking at me. What am I supposed to say now?