Swasan : Ik tu hi , tu hi , Two Shot (Completed)

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi Guys,

Today's Precap has made me so gloomy. I want my Furious, Fiery Sanskar back who can do anything for the love of his life. So I am letting all my frustrations go out through this two shot story . In part one they separate and in part 2 they meet again, forever. It's a short part , but second part would be longer.

Hope you enjoy it . Do leave comments

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MM , everyone gathered in DP's room

AP to Kavita " Beta , hume maaf kardo , humne tumhe us waqt apnane se mana kar diya , aur uski wajah se tumhe apni zindagi ke 5 saal koma mai bitane pade"

Sujata " Mhara beta thare jane ke bad bada udas ho gaya tha , swara ne sambhala use , par ab to unka bhi divorce ...

AP "Sujata , and she realizes Swasan was right there.

Kavita to Swara " Swara , tum Sanskar se divorce le rahi ho ? swara nods in yes kavita gets really happy and says " ek last ehsan kardo mujhpe , plz mujhe aur Sanskar ko ek kardo, tum karogi na"

Swara looked at Sanskar to ask for answers, he looked at her and turned away and left the room. He was feeling like he would faint and swara took it way too wrong , she thought , Sanskar want's her out of his life and so Han Kavita , I'll do it"

Everyone was shocked kavita and swara hugs

DP to Swara " Ye sab kya hai beta ? tumne kuch kaha kyu nahi , hum jante hai tum Sanskar se pyar karti ho "

Swarra " kis haq se bolti bade papa , ab to wo mera dost bhi nahi hai , aur patni banne ka haq maine kabhi use diya hi nahi. Wo kavita se pyar karta tha and aage bhi karega , mera aur uska sath yahi tak ka tha"

Sankar hears all this and gets very angry " how could you swara, tumhe mere pyar par yakin nahi hai , kya kami reh gayi mere izhar karne ke tarike mai ki tumhe ye lagta hai , ki mai kavita se aaj bhi pyar karta hu , his angry eyes were throwing tons of tears which blinds him in a while.

He angrily goes to Swara and drags her out of MM

Everybody is stopping him , but he is not listening , he throws swara out of MM " Nikal jao iss ghar se aur nikal jao meri zindagi se , mere khayalo se , mere dil se , mere sapno se aur mere zehen se. Nafrat karne laga hu mai tumhari in mason aankhon se . mere dil ke daarwaze tumhare liye kabhi nahi khulenege. Just get out.

Swara " Bas karo Sanskar , maine apne pyar mai tumhe itna dard bhi nahi diya Sanskar , ki tum meri rooh ko kharoch do, itni badi saja mat do mujhe "

Sanskar " Ye saza , tumhare lie bahut kam hai swara bose, meri jaban tumhara naam kabhi nahi legi"

Swara looks as an angry goddesses, uska swabhiman itna bhi kamjor nahi tha

"To thik hai Sanskar Maheshwari , ab tumhari maut bhi mujhe is ghar mai , tumhari zindagi mai wapas nahi la sakti"

And they both leave in opposite direction

BG Music

Tera shehar jo peechhe chhoot raha

Kuchh andar andar toot raha

Hairaan hain mere do naina

Yeh Jharna khaan se phoot raha

Jab jab chaha tune rajj ke rulaya

Jab jab chaha tune khul ke hansaaya

Jab jab chaha tune khud mein milaya

Ik tu hi tu hi... tu hi tu hi tu hi

Precap

6 months later

Edited by sansra1 - 10 years ago

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Very nice... At least there is some hope from them.. awaiting your next update...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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why do udo this with usu made me more gloomy where is the other part .plz update it soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi Guys ,

Here's part -2 for my two shot . Hope you like it

6 months later

After insulting swara and throwing her out of his house , Sanskar was once again back to being a rude , lonely , arrogant guy , who cares about nothing , he immersed himself fully in his work and thoughts of swara. Also he has started to drink a lot , every alternate day he comes home drunk

Kavita putting all her efforts to woo Sanskar and to convince him to get married , he is avoiding her to the fullest . His devotion to swara has made kavita more paranoid about him and she has resolved to get Sanskar at any cost

Swara , was back in her life , pursuing music , she now work for a music company but she lost all her charm , her bubbly eyes showed no emotions , she was hard as rock with no feelings, no emotions. Swara has a colleague, Daksh who likes her a lot and hence has proposed her , however for her i t's just a business deal . Their engagement has been announced.

They have buried all their belongings that remind them of each other's existence.

...

Ragini visits badi to meet swara , as she could not believe she agreed for engagement

Ragini " tum thik to ho , ye kya bachpana hai , hum jnate hai ki

Swara" tum kuch nahi janti , meri ek madad karogi , apne jeth ko jakar bata dena , ki swara bose apni zindagi mai aage badh chuki hai "

Ragini " tum dono ka ye ego bahut bhadi padega tum dono ko"

...

Sanskar's Room

One day sanskar came back from office and in his room and saw someone standing there , he had no feelings and was so blank that he went and hugged her from behind

"Mujhe pata tha tum mujhe ek din jarur apnaoge, he stunned to hear the voice and hell angry to find kavita in swara's dress.

Sanskar " How dare you kavita , what were you thinking "

Kavita" If I dress up like her, you would love me , and see it happened, you hugged me"

Sanskar " Just shut up , tum uski jagah kabhi nahi le sakti, aur koshsih bhi mat karna , Kavita starts crying

Kavita " Tum 5 saal tak pagal bane rahe , mere pyar mai , aur wo pyar khatm ho gaya , aisa nahi ho sakta, uski wajah se ho raha hai na ye sab. Maar dalungi mai use"

Sanakr holds neck of Kavita " Agar mai tumhare pyar mai apne pariwar ko taklif de sakta hu, to uske pyar mai main khudko barbad kar sakta hu , hath lagane ki sochna bhi mat , warna jaan le leunga"

Ragini enters and hence Kavita gets chance to leaver and she runs

Ragini claps , " ek ka dil dukhakar man nahi bhara to dusri ko bhi usi raste par dhakel rahe hai "chahte kya hai aap , kyu khudko sabse itna dur kar liya hai , ki aapke dil ka zakhm kisi ko mehsoos bhi nahi hi raha. Par pata hai kya , swara ne aapko bigad diya , jis shiddat se pyar karrte the aap wo ab aap nahi kar sakte , swara se nahi kar paye, tabhi to aaj wo yaah nahi hai

Ragini jao yaha se

Hum to ja rahe hai , waise bas ye batae aye the " Swara Bose getting engaged to Daksh Chatterjee tomorrow, acha Bengali ladka hai

Ragini knew she has hit the nail ryt , time to wait for the impact

...

Ragini's words were hitting him like arrows , the more he drank to forget it , the more he remembered

Sanskar entered MM and went to his room , everybody was dining but nobody had the courage to question him. He has cut everybody out from his life. Nobody had the idea how much pain he was going through , or if he even feels the pain

Suddenly they hear a bottle crashing and someone crying loud , they all rush to his room

They all shattered to see him sitting amidst the broken glasses , holding a piece of paper , it was piece from the note swara had left for him when she confessed her love , he burnt it but a small part was left with "S" written on it, he was clinging to it like a drowning man in the sea. His hands and legs were bruised from broken glass, but that did not bothered anybody what did was broken him. He never showed his pain in last 6 months , and today here he was sitting with his wounds bare open. The soldier has lost it tonight.

Sujata wanted to go and console him but DP stopped her saying that let him cry it out tonight , maybe that will bring a new life to him, everybody left but Laksh stood there, watching his brother break piece by piece .

"Tumne mujhe kyu nahi samjha , agar maine darwaze band kar liye the to tod ke ghus jati , waise to jsusi karne ka bahut shaukh hai , par meri dil ki bat nahi jan saki. Mai aaj bhi us darwaze ke isi par khada hu , tum ek par khakathi to sahi , par tumne to mud kar dekha bhi nahi . Aur ... aur ab to tum bahut dur ja rahi ho , mai rokna chahta tha , par kis muh se . jise pyar karta tha use hi zandagi bhar ka dard de diya. Par tum ye kyu nahi samajha payi , jitna dard mai tumhe deta hu , wo lautkar mere pas hi ata hai. Mere us gusse aur us harkat ne tumhe mujhse itna dur kar diya , ki ab to shayad meri parchai bhi mere pas nahi hai..Meri ek galti aur tumne mujhe mafi mange ka mauka bhi nahi diya. Par mai khush hu ,mujhe sab pata hai , your are back in your life , music and all Daksh sachem accha ladka hai , Sorry but I did a background check. Tumhe pyar karega aur izzat bhi dega aur samjhega bhi. Mai janat ahu maine hi kaha tha, ki maine tumhara naam apni juban se kabhi nahi lunga, par shayad Tum nahi janti , meri sansein sirf tumse chalti hai , (he tries to get up) aur ab inke chalne ka koi maksad nahi ... I love you , "Swara" and he faints.

Laksh who was crying at the door, gets worried and calls doctor

...

Doctor "Inhone bahut jyada pi li thi aur inki pulse rate bhi bahut kam hai , inke bruises bahut gehre hai , internal bleeding hai , agar ye fast recover hote to koi problem nahi thi ,but aisa lag raha hai inhone jine ki umeed hi chod di hai aap sab bhagwan se prarthna kijiye"

Swara was in her room and getting ready for her engagement

Laksh crashes in her room

Swara" Laksh , tum yaha?"

Laksh" Mujjhe tumse kuch kehna hai Swara Bose , or Should I say , swara Chatterjeee"

Swara " bas laksh , ab ek shabd nahi . I don't want to spoil my mood "

Laksh "han swara , enjoy your engagement , swara was about to leave "mai tumhe tumhara engagement gift dena chhata hu , apne man ka bojh halka karke

Swara " Ok , bolo"

Laksh " You know mai ek insan ko janta hu , pyar karna kya hota hai , use sikha hai maine . wo hamesha kehta hai " Pyar ko hasil nahi kiya jata , paya jata hai" , par wo bewakoof tha, mai to kehta hu use wo hasil kar lena chahiye tha"

Swara gets the hint that Laksh is talking about Sanskar

Swara " Tum jao yaha se Laksh , " She is about to leave when Laksh holds her hands he breaks in tears

Laksh " Tum jeet gayi Swara , aur mera bhai , wo har gaya. Wo apne pyar ke zid ke samne to bahut pehle har gay tha , par aaj apni zindagi se bhi har raha hai. Apna zindagi ka agla kadam tum uski maut ke upar se logi. Usne to tumhara naam le liya Swara , dekhna ye hai , tum uske marne ka intezar karti ho ya fir ...

And he leaves a tape recorder In her hand which has everything which Sanskar said before fainting

...

Everybody is in Sanksar;s room praying for him to get up , but his vital's showing no improvement . AP nad Sujata are crying rigorously even DP ad RP could not control their tears . His heart rate falling sharply

Suddenly they hear someone shouting in hall

Swara after hearing the tape, rushed to MM leaving everything behind , coz she wanted just one thing , one person , her Sanskar

"Sanskar Maheshwari , Samne aao mere, apne bhai se kya messages bhej rahe ho , agar himmat hai to khud aakar bolo, Khud aakar apni har manzoor karo , Lo mera naam apni jaban se kyunki maine to is ghar mai kadam rakh diya , ab tum bhi mujhe swara kehkar bulao" and she breaks in tears and falls on her knees"

Everybody is standing in hall

Kavita enters' You killed him , he's dead. To ab tum jikar kya karogi swara , tumhe mar jana chahiye na , ad she takes knife out

Everybody gets conscnoius but swara she dint move an inch as if she could not hear anything

Laksh tries to come forward

Kavita " ek kadam bhi age mat rakhna , warna garden uda dungi iski", tumhare marne ka waqt aa gaya hai

Kavita is about to stab knife in swara's heart when somebody falls on his knees and stops the knife in mid-air

It's Sanskar

Sanskar " kaha tha , ye mat karna warna jaan le lunga, he takes the knife foem kavita and is going to stab her , when police enter s and stops him, they take kavita away

Now Swara and Sanskar are sitting in front of each other

Swara " Agar tumhari saan mujhse chalti hai , to meri saansein tumhari sassnson se judi hai , Aa gayi mai aaj sare darwaze dodkar , han thodi late ho gayi , but galti tumhari hai. Marne ki kya jarurat thi , ek phone karte to bhi aa jati. Agar tumhe kuch ho jata to mai bhi zainda nahi...

Sanakr puts fingers on her lips and says I love you Swara" and "I love you Sanskar" continued swara

They both hug Each other and everybody is happy

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Posted: 10 years ago
#5
Loved it very nice.
Do write more and i am sending you buddy request please add me. And pm me next time
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Posted: 10 years ago
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this one was too intense. well done n well written. enjoyed it but i cant see swasan in dis pain for six months at least not in the show but u wrote beautifully
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Posted: 10 years ago
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u really made me cry dear.. I could really feel the pain. u r a terrific writer .
I really liked it . just one thing in the serial i would never tolerate a 6 month leap but the story is just painful
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Posted: 10 years ago
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im literally crying..tears are flowing through my eyes... u are a very good writer.. im a newbie
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Posted: 10 years ago
#9
Hi , Guys ,thank you so much for reading my stories and liking it . Your comments make me to write more :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Grt ts.
Dono jiddi hain toh yeh clash to hona hi tha.
Chalo all is well at the end.

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