ONCE UPON A TIME IN WONDERLAND (SS)||Complete - Page 23

Created

Last reply

Replies

567

Views

47649

Users

35

Likes

704

Frequent Posters

TINAMONI thumbnail
Anniversary 11 Thumbnail Group Promotion 3 Thumbnail Commentator 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
That was such an intense and romantic update..
Loved reading  it..
What an unique way to kiss.
Can it really happen that way????..,););); (:(:(
Thanks for the pm..
Update soon..
AartShefa thumbnail
Anniversary 13 Thumbnail Group Promotion 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
hi dr this is Arthishefali..read all the parts in one go..amazing yaar..I must say u r an excellent writer. .Please continue n pm me..loves n hugs
Greys_Anatomy thumbnail
Anniversary 10 Thumbnail Group Promotion 4 Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update !!!!!
Great work Doll !!!!!

Eagerly waiting for the next part !!!!*
Archi21 thumbnail
Anniversary 10 Thumbnail Group Promotion 6 Thumbnail Commentator 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

The practice sessions were not only improving Tara's skills but also Mrityunjay and her understanding!!!!😊 πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ
Yes πŸ˜ƒ

It is so cute that Mrityunjay keeps remembering her when she is not there!!!!😊 πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³


Kala is now misleading Nandu to keep her away from the Prince but that way she is also away from Tara!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š
yes, but Kala ko nahi pata πŸ˜‰

Too bad she realized what Kala was up to and went after the Prince again!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”

Tara is very smart and on seeing Prince Adi's camp went away as she didn't want her mother to find out about her escapades in the forest!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ
warna piya se milne kaise jaa payegi πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Mrityunjay is testing Tara and she is defending herself very well!!!!πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘
Teacher ne bahut achaa sikhaya haiπŸ˜ƒ

Though he tried a few tricks with her but he didn't let Tara get hurt!!!!😊 πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š

What a wish Mrityunjay and it got fulfilled as well!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ β˜ΊοΈ β˜ΊοΈ β˜ΊοΈ β˜ΊοΈ
aao wish kare πŸ˜‰

Tara fell and she dragged him down with her and he accidentally kissed her!!!!😊 πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³
yes ⭐️

Their first kiss was beautifully described!!!!😊 πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘
Thank U ⭐️

Even between all this Mrityunjay noticed the mole on her neckline!!!!😊 πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š    


Tara was so angry and attacked him with her sword and tore his shirt into pieces!!!!😑 πŸ˜‘ πŸ˜‘ πŸ˜‘ πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
haan πŸ˜†
Mrityunjay was so shocked and then smiled at himself!!!!😲 πŸ˜² πŸ˜² πŸ˜²

It reminded me a little of the scene from The Mask Of Zorro!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š
Inspiration wahi se li hai 😳

The conversation between Guruji and Tara was emotional!!!!😭 πŸ˜­ πŸ˜­ πŸ˜­

It is sad that he couldn't tell her that he is her father!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”

Their ride on Maria waa funny and obviously Maria was pissed off over the constant loosening and tightening of the reins!!!!πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
Bechari MariaπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

The two brothers met and they discussed about the vampire!!!!😊 πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š

Though they didn't know each other or the relationship they share, still they quickly became friends!!!!    πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š

It was nice to see them bond so well!!!!😊 πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘
Yes πŸ˜ƒ

Aditya told Mrityunjay about love and made him realize that he has fallen in love!!!!😊 πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š β€οΈ β€οΈ β€οΈ β€οΈ
Experienced person hai Adi πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

Akhir Adi uska bhai hai aur samajh hi jayega apne bhai ke dil ki halat!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›
hahahaπŸ˜†πŸ˜†

The after effects of that kiss was very interesting!!!!😊 πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³
hehehe😳😳

Tara is angry and restless and keeps trying to explain to herself about the incident!!!!πŸ€” πŸ€” πŸ€” πŸ€”

The chapter was fantastic!!!!!πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

Thank U πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ


Archi21 thumbnail
Anniversary 10 Thumbnail Group Promotion 6 Thumbnail Commentator 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: mon.sayan17.com

Beautiful update!!! 

MJ's wish...& their first kiss...!!!! β˜ΊοΈ  β˜ΊοΈ
So beautifully described...
I loved the way Tara torn his shirt... 
Bechari Maria...πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
The conversation between Guruji & Tara was a bit emotional!!!
The two brothers met but but they didn't know each other but still they became friends it was nice to see them sharing a good bond.πŸ˜ƒ
Aditya told him about love and made him realized that he must have fallen in love!!!!😳
Akhir bhai hai nah...samaj jayega hi!!! πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
The more interesting scene was the after- effects of that kiss!!!
Tara was angry and was explaining herself about the incidents... 
I loved that part!!! πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³ 
Update soon
*Waiting*



Thanks for loving it πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

achhi wish hai naa MJ ki πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

Gustakhi ki thi MJ ne too saza mili πŸ˜†

yes bechari Maria  πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Bhai hain😊

maza aaya naa after effects read karke πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Updating soon 😳
Archi21 thumbnail
Anniversary 10 Thumbnail Group Promotion 6 Thumbnail Commentator 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Khadeja

Wonderful Update πŸ‘

With increasing Tara's skill, their understanding also improving 😊
How MJ remember her
MJ was taking test but he didn't let hurt Tara πŸ˜ƒ
What a wish MJ !!! 😳 😳 😳
But fallen and their first Kiss ☺️ ☺️ ☺️
Angry Tara torn MJ's shirt πŸ˜†
Guruji and Tara talking was emotional, it is sad he couldn't tell he is her father πŸ˜”
Maria riding was funny, in between two she pissed off πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
MJ meet his younger brother πŸ˜›
They became friends so quick, after all they are brothers πŸ˜ƒ
Adi realized MJ that he is in love πŸ˜ƒ
Tara loves MJ but she is angry the kiss happened without her permission πŸ˜‰

Love this part, Update soon πŸ˜ƒ



Thanks for loving it dear πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

har update mein MJ aisi hi wish kare πŸ˜‰

MJ ke gusthaki ki saza shirt ko mili πŸ˜†

Poor Maria πŸ˜›

Yes, they are Brothers πŸ˜ƒ

hehehe...yes without permission kaise kiss kiya πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Updating Soon πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰
Archi21 thumbnail
Anniversary 10 Thumbnail Group Promotion 6 Thumbnail Commentator 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: TINAMONI

That was such an intense and romantic update..

Loved reading  it..
What an unique way to kiss.
Can it really happen that way????..,););); (:(:(
Thanks for the pm..
Update soon..



Thanks Dear πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

MriAra ki story mein kiss kisi bhi tarah se ho sakta hai πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

Updating Soon πŸ˜‰
Archi21 thumbnail
Anniversary 10 Thumbnail Group Promotion 6 Thumbnail Commentator 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: AartShefa

hi dr this is Arthishefali..read all the parts in one go..amazing yaar..I must say u r an excellent writer. .Please continue n pm me..loves n hugs


Hi dear!!!πŸ˜ƒ

U read all parts in one go!!!😲😲

Great πŸ‘

Thank u for loving it πŸ˜³
Archi21 thumbnail
Anniversary 10 Thumbnail Group Promotion 6 Thumbnail Commentator 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Greys_Anatomy

Awesome update !!!!!

Great work Doll !!!!!

Eagerly waiting for the next part !!!!*


Thank u DearπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

Updating 2 parts today πŸ˜‰
Archi21 thumbnail
Anniversary 10 Thumbnail Group Promotion 6 Thumbnail Commentator 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago

Previous Update on Page 29



The Thing You Love Most


 

Next day, Tara was at the palace to inform Princess Meethi about the Prince returning. 

"My Princess," she bowed.


"Oh...Tara...I am sooo...happy..." Meethi hugged Tara.


"The Prince is returning." said Tara.


"Yes" said the Princess, "But how do you know?" 

Meethi was confused as the Prince arriving news was known to very few people yesterday and it was going to be public today but Tara knew it already.


"I have my sources." She winked.


Princess Meethi was talking non-stop about her plans but Tara was not responding to it. She was still immersed in yesterday's short accidental kiss.


 

 "Tara is everything fine with you?" asked Meethi shaking Tara." U... H.. Everything is fine princess."


 

"Princess what is love?" 


Meethi was surprised to hear a question like this from Tara. 

"It can't be explained, it can be felt.  When you are in his arms you will know what love is.  Nothing is more powerful than love. Nothing is purer than love." 

Tara was silently listening to her. 


Seeing Tara silent, Meethi asked, "Is there anything that you are hiding from me?"


"No there is nothing like that what you are thinking." said Tara.


"If there is anything, then tell me," she said pinching her.


 

She was confused whether she should go back to Mrityunjay and forgive him or punish him for his act the day before. Thinking this again and again, she didn't remember when she reached Mrityunjay's place.



 

Here Mrityunjay was sitting near Maria thinking, 

"Will she come today or not? What if she is still angry at me?" 

He was getting more confused thinking why he was so bothered about what she thinks about him?

Suddenly the prince's words came to his mind, "What if I am in love!"





After two to three rejections, he concluded it's not love, as always his mind won. But when his eyes caught Tara coming, his mind lost and heart won without any doubt.






As soon as Tara saw him once again, she was angry at him. She was so angry that she took her sword and attacked an unarmed Mrityunjay. He hopped back to protect himself from her anger.


 "Tara... Tara..."  


He was trying to explain what happened yesterday was accidental but Tara was not giving him any chance to say a word and was continuously attacking him just to satisfy herself. Seeing it's not working, he too grabbed his sword. 




"Tara, stop this and listen to me." 


He said preventing her attack on him. She took her sword back only to attack again. Now Mrityunjay understood she was not going to stop until he told her the truth. So he forcefully took her sword.  Even after taking the sword she was not ready to stop, she punched him.  Now he held her hand and dragged her to himself. He dragged her back close to his chest and said, 


"Listen Tara, what happened yesterday was an accident, I didn't mean that."






"Then what did you meant by that?" she interrupted him. 


Seeing she would not listen now, he turned her to face him and then holding her by his one hand and closing her mouth by putting his other hand on it, he said, 


"Tara I am saying what the truth is. And there is one more truth that you should know." 


Tara was struggling to free herself and was also listening to him but there were thousands of questions in her mind, "What truth does he want to say?"

Edited by Archi21 - 7 years ago