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Love Found in Heaven



After a long journey from banglore to delhi in flight and then the endless journey in train from delhi to jammu and the most annoying journey from jammu to kashmir in bus, what geet expected to get was a warm welcome by her family members but as they say expect the unexpected and here she got the same, a big lock on the door of her house. her college was going for a trip, firstly she had a plan to go with them , she informed her family the same but later her mind changed and she thought to celebrate the new year with her family instead of going on college trip but this time she didn't inform her family about her changed plans as she thought to give them surprise but the irony of the situation is now she herself is surprised !
where the hell is my family?? but by god's grace she was saved from frosting in winter outside as she already had a spare keys of her home so it was not a big problem for her..using the spare keys she entered inside, settled her luggage in her room and freshned up...it passed 3 hours in all this but still there was no clue of her family , this worried her and so she called her mother to know about their hereabouts..Hello mom..
Geet's mom(GM)-hello my baccha..how r u?? everything ready for trip??
Geet-mom ye sab baad mei..first tell me where r u all??
GM- woh actually beta as u were going on trip so raji(geet's younger sister) was upset about it and was cribbing that di is gonna celebrate her new year at new place i too want to celebrate it somewhere else ..so we decided to spend new year with ur massi..so right now we are in delhi..
Geet(shocked)- WHAT!!
GM- hai..but why r u overreacting??
Geet- mom can't u inform me about ur plans, what will i do here now and that too all alone..
GM- here.. where??
Geet- at our home in kashmir!
GM- what!..but u were going on trip na..
Geet- hai..but later i changed my plan and thought to surprise u all..
GM- geet ..ye kya kiya..now what..
Geet- what..what now u all come back here!
GM- geet..i already promised ur massi that we will celebrate new year with her and her family and it is yesterday only when we arrived here ab aise acchanak..accha nahi lagega..
Geet was frustrated hearing this Mom! r u coming back or not??
GM- Geet..try to understand dear..
Geet- that means u r not coming back..okay then bye! in anger she blurted out and cut the call..
She grabbed her pillow and dipped her head in it and started crying..it is her habit whenever she gets angry..first she will shout on that person and will say whatever nonsense which comes in her mind and then she will start crying..few hours later her cries subsided when her phone rang again..to no surprise it was her mom again ..having no other option she picked up her call..
Geet- hai bolo..
GM- geet baccha..r u angry on my still??
Geet- nahi..i'm okay now..sorry i shouted on u..
GM- its okay..accha tell me will u come here or we come there..
Geet- no mom..don't spoil ur plans because of me..looks like babaji wants me to celebrate this new year all alone..
GM- aww..my baccha is sounding mature..
pampering voice of her mom made geet to smile a bit..kya mom aap bhi..after 6 months ur baccha is going to become a doctor maturity toh aaye gi hi na..
GM- hmm..bhot mature ho rahi ho..by the way ur massi has a found a match for u here.. the boy is really good.. but geet cut her in between..
Geet-mom!i'm not in mood to talk about all this right now!
GM- arre sunn toh boy has a construction company and..
Geet- mom bas! instead of consoling me, you are giving me details of a guy..i don't want to listen to it..
GM- aacha thik hai nahi boleti..accha sunn as u r alone there..take proper care of urself, have food on right time..u need something go to gupta uncle's shop..
Geet- itni durr ..who will go..its 2 km away from here.. cribbed geet..
GM- chup! no laziness.. or hai ..its scheduled area so don't allow any stranger inside the house , got it??and don't go outside the house after sunset its not safe there aur hai..
Geet- bas mom aapki toh list over hi nahi ho rahi.. i will take care of myself ..bye now! with that geet cut the call
chal geet get ready to spend ur holidays and new year all alone..suddenly her stomach made a sound indicating her that its time to feed him.. so she started preparing lunch for herself..she was having her lunch while watching tv when her phone again ranged..ye mom kitna call karegi! hai mom..
GM- beta i called u to inform that, that boy..
Geet- mom i said na i'm not in a mood we will talk about this later..now don't disturb me..bye!
GM- uff this girl! she didn't even let me complete my sentence..
rano leave it..he will surprise geet there..geet's massi said
GM- hmm..looks like babaji wants them to meet each other like this only...

It was evening , geet came outside wrap in her woolens to enjoy the weather outside..babaji its so cold here and looks like it will snow today too..and as if hearing her babaji thought to make her words come true and it started snowing..omg! its snowing already..enjoying the snowfall for few minutes geet decided to go inside as its getting heavy with each passing second..

wrapped in her thick blanket geet was surfing through various channels of her idiot box..nothing interesting to see..suddenly tv's remote got struck on one news channel ..uff! this remote! geet tried to press buttons but it didn't worked..but soon the news grabbed her attention , she heard the reporter..
It's highly disappointing to see that cease fire on the border is again n again getting broken..our soilders are too firing back to answer them back..but till when we will handle this..till when we will be quiet and bear all this..why our government is not taking any action against this..are terrorists trying to benefit from this situation and entering in our country then, who is responsible for the safety of the innocent lives who stay near the borders..we kindly request all the people who live in kashmir and around the borders to not give any shelter to any stranger..its for the safety of yours and for the safety of the country too..
Soo much violence in this world, what they.. but she was halted in between her sentence due to the loud bang on her door..poor geet got scared hearing it.. someone was trying to break her door she thought.. who is there..in meek voice she asked but she didn't got any reply , this scared her more.. the banging continued for 3-4 minutes but later it stopped.. it made geet wonder who can be here at this time.. slowly slowly she got down from her sofa and went to close to door..with shaking hands she opened the door little bit..the coldness outside hit her with full force.. so cold it is... she peeked her head outside to see but to her surprise there was no one.. she tried to look here and there but the mist all around and snow didn't help her either...coming to conclusion that nobody is here she decided to close the door but as she brought her hands inside to lock the door she was shocked to see her own hand cover in blood ... her insides shook up due to fear.. soon her eyes located blood on the floor too which was flowing inside .. her eyes followed the path of the blood and she saw what she never imagined to see.. a man was sitting conscious there..his forehead was badly bleeding due to which his face was almost cover in blood not only this his hands too have some deep bruises ..was he is one who was banging my door?? does he needed her help??..but who is he?? should i bring him inside..but he is a stranger to me and its not safe.. her mind told her to stay away from him as he can be danger in future , at a point geet too agreed with her mind and decided to close the door but as she closed the door she remembered her profession..no its wrong how can i..if can help him i should help him.. with this thought she again opened the door and this time she stepped outside and went close to him it was not that her whole fear has disappeared , she still fear him but its her duty to check him too..with shaking hands she held his hand but due to fear she was not able to concentrate so she closed her eyes first and tried to shove away her fear.. now she is much clear in mind..she tried to find his pulse and luckily she found it too..but it was not that clear..his hands were so cold..putting all the rational thoughts aside she decided to treat him , with all her mighty force she dragged him inside..she brought him near the fireplace..she left his body on support of the nearby wall , then she brought a mat , a mattress and few blanket one by one she spread them in front of fireplace then she decided to make him lye on it..but when she touched him again she remembered he's clothes are wet and if she made him lye like this then he will not get full warmth , so she decided to remove his clothes but how..thinking for few minutes she got an idea..first she went close to him..and started unbuttoning his overcoat with great difficulty she was successful in removing it..now its was turn to remove his shirt..with shaking hands she started unbuttoning his shirt while doing this her eyes were all time down casted only ,she didn't dared to look at his face.. after removing the clothes from upper body part now it was time to remove clothes from lower part..but before doing so she have to shift him on that bed which she prepared.. moving him from one place to another was the most difficult part for her to do.. he was tall and well built man but however she brought him there and placed him on bed.. the she covered him fully with blanket ...babaji what all u make me do..she complained to her babaji first and then proceeded further her hands went inside the blanket and soon come in contact with naked skin of his abdomen..feeling his hard skin under her soft hands did activated her female hormones but her main focus was something else this time..her hands moved in downward direction and soon found the belt ..soon she unbuckled his belt and opened the button..immediately after doing this she ran towards his feet and from inside she pulled his pants down without removing the blanket! getting successful in doing this she left a sigh as if she have done some major surgery successful! after doing this she thought to cover him with another blanket but as she got up to bring another blanket her feet got tangled with his feet and she fell down on him ouch!..thank god he was unconscious or else the situation would have been so embarrassing..but due to this fall she got a chance to look at his face carefully,though his face was covered in blood which was dried now..but still she was able to make out his sharp features.. for few minutes she lost in him but soon she came out of her trance and remembered that she have to treat him too.. so she got up but her eyes landed on the wound on his leg ,due to fall the blanket was slightly shifted from its place and exposed his leg..she was shocked to see the wound she bent down and carefully examined it..the cut was deep as if it was done by some sharp thing.. after examining the wound , she quickly brought the first aid box and put the water to get warm.. she brought the warm water put a 2-3 caps of dettol in it and then she dipped cotton in that water and cleaned all the blood from his face , she cleaned the wound on his forehead , after cleaning his face she moved to his leg.. the wound was so deep that she herself was scared to treat it..with one hand she held the wounded portion and with other she dipped new cotton in water and brought it close to his wound..as soon as she touched his wound a moan escaped from her mouth ahh..as if she is the one who is in pain.. however she cleaned that wound , applied the medicine on it and then bandaged it ..she did same with his forehead wound and then she cleaned the wounds of his hands and applied antiseptic cream on them... after doing all this she checked his body temperature unfortunately he was still cold , she thought to increase the heat so she burned more woods in fire and then went close to him and she started rubbing his hands and feet one by one.. her whole night went in taking care of him only.. after hours she found him normal..making sure that he is properly wrapped in blankets she moved from there and settled on sofa with her blanket..she kept looking at him until her eyes on her own closed..




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Next morning...
the chipping of birds broke her sleep..rubbing her eyes she got up but the sight in front of her made her realize what all happened last night..the stranger was still in sleep .. she went close to check him.. his condition was better than last night , she checked his pulse it has become normal now.. after checking him she thought to fresh up and to make breakfast from them...
By the time she got ready and came down stairs she saw some movements in him..he was going to wake up..geet quickly climbed down and waited for him open his eyes.. getting disturbed by the sunrays he tried to face other side but the pain which he felt while turning broke his sleep fully..ahh.. and he opened his eyes... the first thing he saw was a lean girl , dressed in loose track and t-shirt was standing in front of him having a curious expression on her face.. the stranger tried to set his vision properly ..the girl was still looking at him curiously but when he looked at her with same expression she diverted her eyes from him.. the man then looked here and there to guess where is he?? to break his thoughts and to break the awkward silence geet took the initiative.. hey... her sweet voice grabbed his attention and he looked at her..hi..he too replied in his baritone voice.. woh..last night i found u outside my house..ur condition was... so i brought u inside.. that's when the man looked at himself he was properly clean and..where are my clothes?? that was the first sentence that came out of his mouth..woh..i changed them..i.. the expressions which he gave her forced her to clear every doubt from his mind..woh..i swear i didn't see..anything..i ..i mean i wrapped u in blanket first then... but the stranger cut her in between..its okay ..u don't have to give my explanation i'm grateful to u for saving my life or else u could left me to die too.. and with that he passed a smile to her , she too reciprocated his gesture..then the man tried to stand up but while doing so the blanket almost slipped from his body , seeing this geet immediately turned her back to him and the man caught the blanket on right time!..mm..i..,but geet cut him in between and said.. wait i will bring a track pants for u..it will comfortable..with that she ran up and brought one of her track pants and give it to him ..thank u.. , the man with difficultly wore it ..
Where is washroom ..i need to use it..
that way..geet pointed towards her left.. the man tried to walk but the wound was so deep and it gave him immense pain whenever he moves his that leg..but still he tried to walk ..geet was not able to see him like this she have developed a soft corner in her heart for him unknown to herself and seeing him in pain was not liked by her ..so she moved to him and said..don't stress ur that leg.. the wound is fresh if u will move it this much..then it will again start bleeding.. her voice full of concern forced the stranger to look at her and admire her care for him.. but i need to.. i will help u.. with that she supported him from one side , with her support ..she made him walk till washroom ..take the support of this wall i'm coming.. the man followed her instructions.. within a minute geet came their with a wooden chair and placed it in front wash basin..
u don't have to stand , sit here and brush ur teethes..she handed him a new brush which she brought with her.. the man did what she asked him to do.. brush ur teethes when u r done call me..okay.. hmm.. geet moved from there but was stopped again when he called sunno..hai..woh..i need to take bath too.. in this condition..u r not allowed ..but.. don't worry i will give u sponge bath ..u will feel fresh..hmm..by the way thank u again..at this it was geet who smiled back at him and he reciprocated her gesture.. both have developed an understanding towards each other in this short span of time..
Geet left him there and moved to prepare coffee for both as the milk boiled she turned off the gas..she poured milk in her coffee mug but as she was going to pour it in another mug a thought strike her..she took a glass and poured the milk in it and then she added turmeric in it and mixed it well.. side by side she prepared her coffee too..geet came out of kitchen and was going to check on him when she saw him coming in hall.. she ran to him ..aap ye kya rahe hai..i told u to call me when u r done.. i thought why to disturb u again and again.. leave it! come here..she dragged him to sofa and made him sit there , then she went in kitchen and brought his turmeric milk and few packets of biscuits.. looking at the yellow colored liquid the man asked ..what's this?? its turmeric milk..turmeric helps in healing wounds quickly it will good for u... the man gave a weird look to that glass.. don't make faces u have to drink it no excuses allowed! geet bossed on him , the man looked at her that's when geet realized what she blurted out in flow..woh..i..i'm ur doctor right now..doctor?? yes..i'm doctor by profession ..i mean soon going to be..so u should follow my instructions... for the time being .. yes why don't, the man said in teasing manner...now don't waste time here eat these biscuits...woh actually i'm not fast in cooking and u must be hungry right..so have it for time being..i'am sorry because of me u r..nahi its okay u don't have to be sorry..now be fast.. on one condition u too have to share these biscuits with me...hmm..with that both had their breakfast together..
after breakfast geet gave him some pain killers to have.. so that his pain can get reduced..
Geet- here have them ..they will lower down ur pain..
Man- what r they??
Geet- pain killers..u can trust me i will not give anything that will harm u..
Man(intensely looking at her)- i trust u ! with that he took that medicines from her hand and gulped them with water..
Geet loved the fact that he trusted her!
After that geet came to him with warm water and soft cloth ..
Geet- remove ur blanket..its time for ur sponge bath..
he obliged to her and remove it , geet dipped the cloth in warm water took it out and squeezed the cloth to remove the excessive water..she started with his face..making sure not to hurt his wound..she wiped his whole face carefully, both were lost in each other at that time either of them blinked his/her eye for a second..an unknown feeling has started growing between them.. both were feeling a kind of magnetic pull towards each other and neither of them want to resist it too.. words were not important between them now ..its their eyes which were enough to talk and understand each other..
like this geet completed her task.. and left to do other chores while the man tried to read some magazine but the pain killers started showing its effect and he started feeling drowsy.. geet saw that and asked him to rest..first he tried to deny but geet came in her doc mode and ordered him and he without any option followed her..in between all these geet also asked him to stay here till he gets better..the man didn't argue with her on this..
Like this 3 days passed..geet never asked him who is he , from where he came from and neither the man asked her anything.. both are leaving together but talked very less , in these 3 days geet has taken a proper care of his every need ..she gave him sponge bath for next two days and other day he asked that he needs to take shower she allowed but with list of precautions then..she cooked for him..changed his bandages everything a family member could have done she did..without any questions..the bond and understanding increased day by day within them..the man was much better now his wounds have 80% healed ..now he have even started helping her in kitchen and other stuffs though geet denied to take his help but he never listened..
it was 4th day , geet was coming out of her room when she saw the man dressing in his old clothes.. he was buttoning his overcoat when geet interrupted him..
Geet- hey..r u going somewhere??
Man- hai..woh actually.one of my important work is left.. i need to complete...
Geet- when will u return..
Man- in an hour or two.. ,he turned to her and smiled at her and said bye..
Geet- hmm..bye..
with that the man left her house...
An hour have passed geet completed her stuffs and looked outside the window to see whether he has come or not..but he didn't outside whole area was covered in snow.. sighing geet went and turn on the radio to hear some songs and pass her time.. nice old songs were being played by the RJ when suddenly it stopped and RJ- dear listener..a breaking news has came..according to our sources few days our bsf soldiers have caught a group of three terrorists but that time one of time escaped from their grip, they tried to search but were not getting any success but today they saw him alive.. in xyz area and police have announced curfew in xyz area if u stay there its our humble request don't come out of ur house and don't allow any stranger in ur house..
Xyz area, was same area were geet house was situated hearing it geet got worried but more than her safety what worried her was the safety of that strange.. oh know he is outside..what should i do.. geet panicked..she didn't understand what to do his safety worried her.. so without thinking anything she left her house to search him.. she didn't even cared to wear her woolens like an insane person she ran outside..
she started searching him in every lane ,but didn't found him the only place left to search was jungle area..her brain have already stopped working so without giving it a thought she ran towards jungle.. her eyes were full of tears , her vision has blurred but still she didn't stopped ...suddenly she collided with something hard she was going to fall when suddenly someone grabbed her..
geet..hearing that voice made geet breathe in relief its him her heart said.. with her tearful eyes she looked at him.. her hands cupped his face..
with heavy breaths ..finally i found u!.. geet..what is this..and..he noticed that she is not wearing any warm clothes , he immediately removed his overcoat and made her wear it.. geet what is this madness..and why the hell u came here and that too like this..kuch ho jaata toh..do u even know this area is under curfew..u r mad ! the man shouted on her.. geet didn't like his shouting..for u i came here ! do u even realize how worried i was for u when i heard that news.. u don't even care about me.. i don't care about u! the man angrily pulled her towards him..in u r madness do u even realize where u were going! no i don't! she pushed him back but it didn't effected him rather made him more angry on her..geet!
angrily he said, his angry eyes brought tears in her eyes..
seeing tears in his eyes he realized what crap he did, he shouted on her! geet..i'm..no ..u don't care about me..if u have, u would have not shouted on me..leave me... she tried to get out of his grip.. but it didn't help , the man brought her more close to him..his one hand automatically moved to her face and tried to wipe her tears ..but geet didn't allowed him to do so..she cutely cribbed to him about his insensitiveness ..which made the man to chuckle a bit.. do u know geet..i usually stay away from crying girls but seeing u cry i feel like..kissing u.. huskily he said..hearing him geet stopped struggling..and looked at him and both were lost each other for few minutes and soon the distance between their lips reduced , the man captured her soft petals in his rough..one by one he licked both upper and lower portions of her lips..geet too didn't resisted the feel ...she willingly surrendered herself to him , her hands automatically went around his neck and threaded his hairs bringing him more close , soon the kiss which started to assure her turned into battle of tongues resulting into a passionate one.. they don't realize what they were doing until he felt geet going out breath ..he stopped kissing and separated his lips from her..geet's eyes were still close her breaths were heavy.. the man looked at he and without asking anything..he picked her up and start moving towards her house..geet didn't said anything she wrapped her hands around his neck to make herself comfortable..soon they reached inside her house , he locked the door first, then made geet stand her feet..
geet..he called her..i want to confess something..ji..woh..i think..i'm falling in love with u..hearing his confession geet's looked at him with her big brown eyes..i..but he was not able to continue as his phone ranged..he checked the caller id and excused himself from her..
here geet was all blushy blushy..she thought to clean her face which was spoiled due to crying.. as she moved to ran upstairs she collided with man's backpack , due to collision his back pack fell and few things came out from it.. uff geet tu bhi..she bent down to arrange it but as she lifted the bag.. what she saw shocked her a gun was lying on floor..
gun... but..what's ,her mind clouded with various doubts , her radio was still on..RJ's voice grabbed her attention..according to our sources..police have suspect that escaped terrorist might be staying in someone's house...few minutes back they have tracked him near jungle but then he ran away into it... police /army is still on search mission , the terrorist is tall, fair and well built if u any strange like this..kindly inform us on this number 6788...
terrorist..jungle...suddenly geet's mind started working in some another direction seeing gun with him has changed her perspective now..she found this man 3-4 days back..they found the group of terrorists too at that time ..one of them escaped..and..is he..nahi..but..today too i found him near jungle..and he is tall..and.. situation was forcing geet to think and came to conclusion but her heart was not allowing her to accept the logical thing.. that when's she heard her name..geet.. he called..wait how he knows my name..i didn't told him my name..not i asked him.. how stupid i'm..i..now she realized what grave mistake she did.. his footsteps were nearing and it was scaring her.. without any option she grabbed the gun tightly in her hand..
he reached near her..geet..but he was shocked when he saw geet turned to him while pointing gun in his direction.. geet what's this??
Geet- who r u???
Man- geet!
Geet- i said who r u , she was scared but still she tried to face the situation bravely..
Man- geet put the gun down its loaded..
Geet-no first tell me how r u??
Man-u know me geet..don't u..
Geet- no don't lie..i don't know u !
Man-geet!! frustrated with her he closed his eyes.. geet was still pointing the gun towards him when her phone ranged which was kept on nearby table , the man picked it up and was relief to see the caller id..
Man- u don't want to listen to me ..but u will listen to ur mom right?? talk to ur mother.. the man passed mobile to her..geet take it nahi toh cut ho jaye ga... but she didn't ..the man himself answered her phone hello aunty..hai..yahi hai..wait..
this shocked geet how calmly he talked to her mother how is it possible??
Man- geet..he moved closed to her but due to fear she stepped back.. geet i will not do anything..just talk to ur mom he put the phone on loud speaker.. geet..how r u my baccha..missed me??
hearing her mom's voice mom, a choked whisper escaped from her throat..
kya hua geet..u sounding low?? didn't maan took good care of u??
Maan?? seeing her confused expression, the man guessed something..
u didn't listen me fully that day..i wanted to tell u that maan the guy which ur massi selected for u is coming to pick u up..but u didn't hear me..
hearing geet's mom and seeing geet's expression the man was sure what he guessed was right...
geet looked at him with many questions.. the man had just one sentence to reply
hey i'm Maan..Maan Singh Khurana.. at the same time the RJ from radio updated the current situation its good news guys ..the terrorist has been captured by the police..curfew is over..all are safe!hearing this the gun from geet's hand dropped and she too broke down and fall on the floor and started crying.. maan immediately cut the call saying he will call later and went close to her to console her and hugged her..sshh..geet everything is okay..u don't need to cry..sshh..but she didn't stopped she let her tears fall.. few minutes later her cries subsided.. in chocked voice she said..i'm sorry..seeing the gun..i thought..shh geet i can understand what u might have felt..its okay he rubbed her shoulders to relax her..
but if u r maan..then how come u were injured and..
Maan- actually geet i was in srinagar doing some office related work that's when i got a call from my dadima to pick u up from kashmir..
Geet- u know me??
Maan- yes..from last month ur massi and my dadima were talking about fixing our relation , they even showed me ur photo..dadima and i decided to meet u after ur exam but later i came to know that u have reached ur home without informing anyone so my dadima called me to pick u up..i too agreed thinking that we will get time with each other without any family interruption but while coming here ..the weather became worse i tried to make it fast but due to heavy snowfall my car slipped i met with an accident luckily i was not that far from here that's why i reached to ur home ,i even banged ur door but u didn't opened..after that may be i have lost conscious because after that i found myself in ur house...
seeing ur care towards me i thought u already know me that's why i never introduced myself and neither u asked me anything..
Geet- i'm sorry it was all because of my foolishness sorry..pata nahi but it was but whenever i looked at u..i used to forget everything.. geet openly confessed her feeling to him..
Maan-oh so now my charm is over..u mean to say..
Geet- nahi when i said that..
Maan- oh so u still forget everything when u looked at me.. maan tried to tease her..
Geet- maan..geet playfully hit his shoulder..
Maan- u know few minutes back i said i'm falling for u..actually i'm already in love with u... i found my love in heaven..
Geet- me too!



phew! done with it..just a random story came in my mind and i penned it down..
so how was it???
nervous about it..
waiting for all reviews, do comment guys!

Edited by ..Maroon.. - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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congrats on the OS! will wait u 2 post entire OS b4 commenting
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awsm updt...Geet and one and maan being her would be...lives Geets care...maan already knw abt Geet. ...really love in heaven
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice OS di!!
I was worried when i saw the title😆
when i saw the word heaven i was afraid of sad ending
and in that maan too was injured and terrorits attack..was really worried
but loved the story
My maaneet and safe and sound
poor maan injured!!
so Maan was the guy about whom Geet's mom was saying!!
Lovig blossoming between Maaneet😳
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beautiful os dear...&&& thanks for the pm...😊
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hi thanks 4 da pm n fab superb OS! wonderfully written! Geet cancelled her trip 2 b home bt her family went 2 Delhi! Geet all alone n upset! her mom calls to tell her abt a guy n b4 she can complete Geet interrupts! she is unable 2 tell her abt Maan coming there! there is a curfew cos of terrorists! Maan at her doorstep injured! She takes care of him! he stays for 3 days! he is fine n goes out! Geet worried as she hears abt the curfew n terrorists! she finds him! he confesses he falling 4 her! intense kiss! she finds a gun in his bag! she hears abt the terrorists! she assumes he is one! she is tensed! he makes her speak 2 her mom n clears the confusion! he then explains! he is the guy he aunt saw 4 her! he came 2 fetch her! they confess! lovely end!
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Awesome
loved it😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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That Was Brilliant Story
Geet comes home to surprise her family but when she arrives they are out visiting too
her mum tries and tell her about the boy her Maasi selected for her but she is not
interested to hear anything
while been alone at home she hears the news of the terrorists and soon after that a stranger
lays outside her home injured she than with fear takes him in and treats him
both build this understanding towards each other but the stranger knows her while she had no clue
again when she hears the news that a terrorists is on the lose she worries about the stranger
and goes and look for him only for both to share a passionate kiss and he brings her home
telling her he is falling for her
accidently she finds a gun in his bag and thinks he is the terrorists that escaped but than he also
speaks to her mother on phone and later he introduce himself to her telling her that her
Maasi and his Daadima has arranged for their wedding to be fixed and he is there to
take her with him .
both now realize that they love each other and their confess in a very unique way
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Posted: 9 years ago
#10
thanks for giving us this beautiful OS...happy new year 2016 yaar..have a blessed year.

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