ashlok ss'past is knocking on my door' pt 4

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anumol

@dazzles

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

Prologue

He lay there under the banyan tree ...he lost his soul. on this cold night of December,the smiling stars on the streets never give the lights to his soul...
"who are you?" The banyan tree ask to him...he doesn't have the answer...
He repeated that question again and again...and failed miserably...she walks back to his memories for searching the answers ...

Scroll down for the note and part one.

Edited by dazzles - 9 years ago

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anumol

@dazzles

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Posted: 9 years ago

Dears updated from my mobile plz ignore the mistakes

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anumol

@dazzles

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Posted: 9 years ago

PART ONE

ON that huge building he sat on his cabin...like always he is firing his subordinates...
"Anand I don't want any explanation.this project is my prestige issue...don't forget it..."
"sir ,if we need to go ahead we need some more papers."
"Anand I talked to minister...you can leave now.."
"thank you sir".he leave the cabin.

Shlok agnihothri,one of the most popular business man in Mumbai...IIT rank holder...double pg in civil engineering and business administration...
"sir someone is here to see you..."his peon inform him...
"who is that? Any. Clinets?"
"no sir..an old mam..."he looks through his glass cabin..there an old man is sitting...he sems lost in his thoughts..
"ask him to cone"

With a small smile that old man enter in to his cabin...on the moment he sees the old man the young man stands from his seat
"come sir,you can sit here"
"shlok,...i am happy now...you achieved a lot in your life...I am proud..."
"sir,you changed a lot"
"its a long"
He needs to talk so much things..but..
"sir,why you came here?"
"nothing shlok,just feels like seeing you."
He sees the tears forming on that young man's eyes...
"shlok,don't you come to that old orphanage..."
"sir,everything is ok with father?"
"oh you didn't forget him...that great man's luck...he is paralysed now.wish to see you.
.before his death...you need to complete a father:s last wish...remembering thisto you is my responsibility...it 's over ...now ii can leave..."
"sir I will drop you."
"no shlok I doesn't know the coldness of your AC " that old man walks away slowly...leaving behind an disturbed shlok agnihothri...

Edited by dazzles - 9 years ago

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soha013

@soha013

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Posted: 9 years ago

Great onee.😊..waiting for the next part..!!

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sashra

@sashra

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Posted: 9 years ago

Wr is aastha?nice start continue

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anumol

@dazzles

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

PART TWO
he sat back on his chair and walks through his memories...there he can see the old little flower orphanage,so many children like him,father jhon Varghese ,his school teacher vinayak and a special person an angel and she is his,astha kirslokar...
. After his parents niranjan agnihothri and Anjali agnihothri's death...shlok is stayed in that orphanage under the care of father jhon Varghese...first few days he can't able to accept the orphanage atmosphere...but slowly the cute and bubbly astha become his soul mate...oh god how much he love her...
She teach him how to laugh in small things...how to thank the god almighty...she is his strength his dream...his everything..
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And father jhon Varghese the god on earth...he love the orphans just like his own children...shlok doesn't know how he thank him...
When he got IIT admission...father's eyes speak the happiness...he hide for his child...
But leaving astha is something difficult for the two of them...they loved each other that words can't express...but they find time to talk each other...every day...and she waited for his return...

He startled from his thoughts...he just look around...first time after the long 7years he wants to go to theat old orphanage...he wants to see his loved one...his father...the one who give him the fatherly affection and his asthu...he look at the above sky through the window...

Do comment plz ignore mistakes...

Edited by dazzles - 9 years ago

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Saibhargav

@Saibhargav

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

More interesting it is

exciting to know wat happened to Aastha.

Update the last one tomorrow

waiting eagerly

Edited by Saibhargav - 9 years ago

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sathuraj

@sathuraj

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

Nice update. .do continue soon...

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ashima

@ashimamm91

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Posted: 9 years ago

a new ashlok story! wow thats wndrful . 1st i thought it 2 b an os. i didnt see its prologue. the updates r so butiful. r u gonna make it an ff. it really looks like one. sorry 4 cmndng so late. i was not well.nyway thanks 4 d update dear . nw waiting 4 ur nxt update.

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ashima

@ashimamm91

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Posted: 9 years ago

#10

please update dear. v r waiting

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