The Best of Things - FF (RagYa, SwaSan) +16 Part 44 on Pg 145 - Page 35

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: bloomnskyrules

I know I have been AWOL but I loved all the updates! Lakshya is being an absolute sweetheart (never thought I would ever say that) and a saint with the way he is dealing with Ragini. Ragini has some issues and I am wondering if Lakshya alone can deal with them. Would she need professional help? Maybe it's just the doctor in me but she sound like she needs a couple of therapy sessions to deal with the scars that her upbringing left on her psyche!

I love the pace at which SwaSan are progressing. Not too fast but not too slow! I hope nothing will disrupt this progress!
I wonder, is Debo going to make an entry in the story in the future?
Again, I loved all the updates and am looking forward to the future updates.


Yeah, I wondered too if I should send her to a therapist 😆😆 but then decided it was more romantic this way 🤣
Yeah, she has issues but the thing is that he's able to devote that much attention and also intelligence to her problems, I guess it's ok

I don't know about Debo myself 🤔 - probably not

Thanks a lot for your response 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
The Best of Things
(RagLak, SwaSan) Fan Fiction Series
By Bubble

Chapter 20

Swara stood at the window, a riot of conflicting emotions running across her face. Her eyes were wide, her lips pink and full, and her chest heaved as if she had just run a mile. Confusion, arousal, anger... all seething inside her. She fell back on anger - it was a safe choice!

She took a deep breath and turned. Sanskaar was sitting sideways in the sofa, one arm against the back, watching her through his lashes, both guarded and amused. She walked up to him, pulled the table and perched herself on its edge, facing him. "What was that?"

He moved to put both feet on the ground and leaned forward. "Excuse me!?"

"Yes, you heard me," she said, "what just happened... over there?" she waved her hand indicating the spot they had been standing at before she pushed him away a few minutes ago.

"It's called a kiss, Swara," he said, on a half-smile.

"Yes!" she retorted. "And what I want to know is: how dare you?!"

"Mmm..." he stroked his chin, "It's not a question of daring..."
His tone became very academic, "Ok, let me explain. You should understand that when two people are close, as we are close... and when emotions between them become sweet and tender, as they became between you and me some time ago... a kiss is a very natural outcome. Humans hug, they embrace... and Swara, they kiss."

She put her hands on her hips and narrowed her eyes. "So it was just a sweet affectionate kiss, was it? A friendly, platonic one?"

"Erm.. " he pursed his lips as if pondering the question, "it started out like that... the first kiss was like that.. and I'd say, the second one also... a little!"

"And after that?" she tilted her head dangerously.

"Yeah," he nodded, remembering with a little smile, "the third kiss became a little..." he waved his hands in wobble-y gesture.

"I see. What about the next one, Sanskaar?" Swara asked sweetly.

"After the fourth, I sort of lost count, Swara... the whole thing just sort of moved into what is known as a long smooch."

"And you think this... smooching is acceptable between friends?" she asked, fixing a glare on his face.

"No! no," he admitted, shaking his head, "it was definitely not friend territory. But!" he said raising a finger, "since I'm in love with you... it comes naturally to me, you know? I mean, there you were, standing so close, looking so pretty... badi badi ankhen... your lips were just there! there was nothing else I could do!" he finished with a gallic shrug.

"Oh!" She blushed, and then rallied, "Then what about me?"

"Yes, Swara, what about you?" he looked back at her, "We must ask, because at the risk of being ungentlemanly, I should remind you that, from somewhere halfway through the second kiss onwards... you kissed me back!" He waited a moment for that to sink in, and then murmured " ...and how!"

She sat back with a huff and folded her arms, face scrunched in a sulky pout. She tried to say something and couldn't. Then, she managed, "That's... that's because I didn't realise what was happening!"

"Do my kisses confuse you, Swara?" There was a laugh in his voice.
She glared at him.
He said, with a glimmer of a smile, "Are you trying to make me apologise for kissing you?"
"Yes!" she stormed back.
He shook his head emphatically. "No way."
"Kameena!" she scolded.
He grinned back.

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Posted: 9 years ago
Please please make your updates a little longer. I love your work. Keep it up! 👍🏼
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Posted: 9 years ago
That is so friendly and free. Loved it!😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
haha...cute and hilarious conversation between swasan..omg 4 kisses and still counting...aha how friendly they are...plz update soon... 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
Its awesome...so adorable 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Whow, hold on...half way through the story even I was wondering how many kisses were there...I like this Sanskaar!
His explanation about 'what is a kiss' was hilarious. And swara kissing him back...she's such a cute confused soul.
Lovely update dear, pls continue soon!
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Posted: 9 years ago
My sweeti pies brainstorming on auch a romantic topic - what is a kiss.. OMG!! 1,2,3,4 and many more.. *faints
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update
Swasan are cute together
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Posted: 9 years ago
So lovely n well written just love sanskar n swara amazing the way both handle the situation waiting update soon

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