|| His Fighter || An Akdha OS

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Posted: 9 years ago
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|| His Fighter ||

Tears are dried up in those beautiful doe shaped brown orbs... That orbs which once was a window to her soul, from which her every emotion can be clearly identified... Are now blank, a blank page... Which never had a drop of ink on it...



How much far you go into those soul piercing silent eyes, only darkness can be identified... Nothing can be found other than oblivion...



The shallow eyes which initially poured pain when its light got snatched away brutally, butchered with thousands of pointed sharp knives...



Her soul has cried... Her soul has wailed... Her soul has begged... But almighty doesn't showed even a bit of mercy on this poor woman...




The enchanting lips which once never stopped from curving up... The dazzling smile which never left that luscious lips... Are dried now... Dropped down in defeat... Utter defeat... Nothing is left in this hell called life because colors has left it long ago...



Darkness has engulfed her into him... Swallowing her deep inside it, from where she is now also finding way to get out but this blackness is pushing her hard in the depths of sorrows in it...




The beautiful face, adorned once with naughtiness, shyness, depicting happiness every moment in the hazard of conditions...



Now shows nothing but dullness... Pale it had become... The fuller cheeks are now had shrinked to their maximum... Emotionless and heartless are the words describing this mess of a girl who once lived her life with life...




How much he tries to make her cry... To weep... To laugh... At least even smile... But she simply showed no signs of life... Her hurt has reached to an extent that tears are now small to lessen it... The extent where a person attains a stage of death...




What she is a living dead corpse... Seems like the power to survive, the will to live, the touch to feel has died after that incident.. That inhuman incident... Which has killed her...




That day she has cried, she begged, she protested, she fought, she done everything she can do which is in her league...




But that devils of human beings just brutally butchered her... Snatched her away from herself... Took her most prized possession... Her dignity... The thing she cherish the most...


The contaminated water of their dirtiest of deeds have washed her pure soul... Contaminating it within itself...




He is desperately waiting for his jo... He is not liking the new lady in front of him... He has seen her sleep with open eyes, and jerkly waking up at night all drenched with her own tears of fears... Not letting him touch her, sooth her... Not even listening him...


Only a slight voice can scare the he'll out of her... The girl who is always ready to make friends, got scared of new unknown faces... She didn't even let doctors to touch her, only after giving her anesthesia, the doctors treated her...




Tears have even not stopped in his eyes... They too had shed his pearls with her... His soul has got crushed, when he comes to know that somebody else has touched her... His heart has painfully clenched, when he saw her in that distorted condition...



Bruises and scratches on her body, hardly covered torso, torn out clothes, tears stained cheeks, swollen bleeding lips...




Only he knew how he has controlled himself...




"Jalal..." His thoughts came to an halt with an sleepy voice...




"Yeah... Bacha..." he said caressing her hairs... Who is laying on bed just woke up from sleep...




"I want to go out..." she expressed her wish... After many therapies, treatment, encouragement, love... She has started to became normal...



She has bravely fought with all the odd mentalities of this society who are accusing her... But she is fighter... His fighter... Who has defeated those monsters in confines of the court and made sure they are behind the bars...




****




They were strolling in a park , nearby... He is protectively holding her in his embrace... Whispering sweet nothing into her ears...




They are getting married tomorrow...



****


So here is another os from me...
I wanna dedicate this os to my sush didu...
Didu m not getting something funny...
And this concept is eating my mind... so jotted it down...
M really very sorry... please mujhse baat krna mat band karna...
M sorry *holding ears*
Sorry if it's not worth reading!!

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Partner ... Do u have any personal dushmani wid joja ...😕
Coming to os .. Its heart wrenching ... Dil to kr rha h bhot pith tujhe .. Pr filhal mujhe teri raksha krni h bakio se ... 😆
Edited by Priyankaakdha - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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very nice OS monu...😳
loved jalal's unconditional support & love towards her , though he is helpless & couldn't change that horrible incident in her life , but he is trying his best in healing her wounds with his love & care...😃
Edited by cute.manasi - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It's very painful to see your loved once in that situation .with support of ja she became normal That's the best thing in victim girls life you write it very well. pen down her condition .
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very beautiful os thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Neetu I don't know how to comments in ur stories sorry🤪
So no view about ur os
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: paridhiloveu

Neetu I don't know how to comments in ur stories sorry🤪

So no view about ur os

m toh isko divorce de dungi sachi m ... 😡
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Oh its so painful..
vry emotional...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Neetu tu chati kya h 😡
Kis janam ki dushmani nikal rhi h tu jo ja se.
Jb dekho aise senti emotional os dele rulati rhti h .. 😡
Edited by deepa_chauhan - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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neetu nice story
u depicted a reality pic in front of us
thanks for sharing it

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