ISHRA SS: Bohat Pyaar Karty Hain #2 chapter 16 : pg 117 dec/26 - Page 59

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Posted: 10 years ago
congratulations dr!! many more to come...
& pls update soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
are ye kya hua!!!!!
shocked..
waiting fr d full update nd Ishra milan
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: --abha--

Update super emotionsl.

Poor ishu😭...
I dont know what to say...Raman was not wrong in thought...
Mr bhalla overreacted...
This can be solved by talking...
But all went wrong...

and teaser😲...
Their is something more with toshiji behaviour...
U teases us with teaser...

Update next part soon...

p.s. congrats for 100 pages..
Thread 3 on the way🥳



thanks dear😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
Kya baat hai Diii
Is story KO toh aap alag hi height pe pahuncha diya
Kitna cute n loving hai donom
Raman toh bus maanlo ki mera hero ban gaya
Kitna pyaar karta hai
N ha he is daring to accept that 👏👏
I just love them both
N exam nite ke din toh 😳😳😳
Kitna romantic hai mera 😳😳 Raman
Ab ishu bhi pregnant hai 👏
I understand Jo Raman bol raha hai
He is right as well
But is Mr bhalla 😡
Bahut jyada ho gaya iska Raman KO bahar nikal diya
Jaldi use is story sent nikal do dii 😡😡
N ha mai teaser nahi padunga varna mai apne aap KO control nahi kar paungi
P.S: u can understand how much I loved this by the smilies 😉😉 😉 as I very rarely use them

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Ishradivani

Kya baat hai Diii

Is story KO toh aap alag hi height pe pahuncha diya
Kitna cute n loving hai donom
Raman toh bus maanlo ki mera hero ban gaya
Kitna pyaar karta hai
N ha he is daring to accept that 👏👏
I just love them both
N exam nite ke din toh 😳😳😳
Kitna romantic hai mera 😳😳 Raman
Ab ishu bhi pregnant hai 👏
I understand Jo Raman bol raha hai
He is right as well
But is Mr bhalla 😡
Bahut jyada ho gaya iska Raman KO bahar nikal diya
Jaldi use is story sent nikal do dii 😡😡
N ha mai teaser nahi padunga varna mai apne aap KO control nahi kar paungi
P.S: u can understand how much I loved this by the smilies 😉😉 😉 as I very rarely use them



glad chotto you like this story also...
yes raman and ishita are right at thtier place...
will try to update soon dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
shoking tesar toshi ji toh
sachhi main pagal ho gayi hai
hope raman sab thik kar de
wating for update
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Posted: 10 years ago

Bohat pyaar karty hain

Chapter 16

NEXT DAY:

Ishita was waiting for raman to come.. but raman was not coming.. she thinks that raman will come to college so she goes to college but raman was also not there... she indirectly ask about raman from the gang but no one know where is raman.. she gets worried for him... she scolds herself for getting to much hyper on her... She should have listened him... she should have talked once with him...

She return home dejectedly and thinks about raman... toshi jee sees her and throws her bag outside.. ishita was shocked...

Ishita: maa...

Toshi jee: get out of my house...

Ishita: mein kahan joangi maa...

Toshi jee gives her the key of her flat and says: jab mery bety ko nikala tha tab socha tha...

Ishita: maa...

Mr bhalla also reaches there and gets shocked to see toshi jee throwing ishita out of the house he tries to interfere but toshi jee shows him her palm...

Mr bhalla: are you gone mad toshi jee...

Toshi jee: haan pagal hogayi hoon... I don't want to see her face... due to her today raman is not In his house... ishita cries...

Toshi jee pushes ishita outside and closes the door on her face... while ishita distraughtly collapses on ground and cries... she screams...: maa please open the door... maa... I promise I will bring raman back maa open the door... she bangs the door but toshi jee does not open the door... Ishita leaves the place ...

Mr bhalla scolds toshi jee for being too rude with ishita and not considered her state and thrown her... toshi jee was adamant on her decision and stops mr bhalla from going by emotionally blackmailing...

Ishita was walking on foot path aimlessly... she goes to their flat... sees all the photos of their hang on the wall... she reminisces all the good moments she and raman spend there...

TIME PASSES:

Its been one week... ishita in their flat crying and waiting for raman to come while mr bhalla helps indirectly by sending helps... raman number was off.. they all tries to contact him but no one be able to contact him... gang also notices that something is fishy...

Ishita health get worse due to continuous stress.. she faints... the helper tries to call mr bhalla but his phone was not reachable... he calls raman and this time he receives the call...

Raman: hello...

Helper: raman baba... ishita bahu...

Listening her name, he gets worried for ishita... raman: ishita... wo theek hai???

Helper: baba... she is not well from one week.. she faints I have called doc... please come to your flat...

Raman: I am coming...

Raman comes there hurriedly and gets worried to see ishita unconscious... he sits beside her and kisses her forehead... doctor checks up and ask raman to take extra care of her... and visit tomorrow for complete check up... raman nods...

Raman: bua... ishita yahan???

Helper: baba... bahu ko madam ne ghar say nikaal diya tha jab ap gusse mein ghar choor kar gaye thy...

Raman was shocked... his blood boils due to anger...

Helper: sahib ne muje bahu kay liye yahan bheja tha...

Raman nods and ask her to leave...helper leaves...

Raman kisses ishita forehead and slid beside her caresses her head and cries... says: sorry ishi... I am sorry for leaving you... but I was angry at that time and even you did not stopped me...

Sensing that raman is near her, she opens her eyes and hugs him... and cries... while raman consoles her...

Ishita: don't leave me raman... I will do what ever you want... You don't want this baby.. okay we will not have this she says this stammering and her voice choked... raman was seeing her... she continues: I love you raman... I cant live without you... where were you??

Raman hugs her tightly and says: I will not leave you ishi... And don't say this... I am ashamed of myself that I reacted that way...

Ishita sees him.. raman cups her face and kisses her tears and says: I want my baby too... and he should went on me not on her mumma who is a cry baby...

Ishita smiles and hugs him...

Raman: really sorry ishi... I should have not reacted that way... But you have not stopped me...

Ishita: sorry raman... I should have listened you once...

Raman touches his forehad with hers and says: so score level...

Ishita: lets go to maa.. she was very worried for you... why you were not taking our calls???

Raman: actually my mobile get damage.. and I was struck in outskirts of dehli there a family was in need so I helped them and I messaged you also...haven't you got???

Ishita: no... let me call to maa she will be very happy.

Raman: no... we will not go there...

Ishita looks on...

Raman: why maa throw you out???

Ishita: rehne do raman...

Raman: How can she do this... how can she punish you when I was at fault...

Ishita: raman...

Raman: no ishita... maa will have to answer my questions...

Ishita: raman she was angry

Raman: then she get license to do whatever she want.. she havent thought if something happens to you or to baby... mien apne app ko kabhi maaf nahe karta...

Ishita hugs him...

Raman: you know ishita this its not like that I don't want to be father... I was worried... we are too young... You are too young... I don't want to burden you... I was just could not understand... and then papa interferes and thorws me out... I was waiting for you to stop me... but I understand that you also were not in state to think rationally... ishi I does not mean those word in real sense... I was just ...

Ishita: raman..

Raman: let me speak ishita... answer me one thing... if I really means those word what would be your reaction...

Ishita: I don't know raman...

Raman and ishita hugs each other...

That's it friends... sorry dear friends... I lost the story... therefore I ends it up abruptly with open end... I know you all will be disappointed sorry for it... but I am not feeling to write it... right now... That's why I am putting this story on hold... If I get some idea I will continue it or not then will give you an epilogue and finishes it... sorry again dears... I don't know what happen but its not connecting ... feeling sad... And I am not feeling to write anything right now so pardon me if I got delay in updating other stories also...


story on hold

Edited by ishrasoul - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Last chapter. Seriously?

Well I want an epilogue.

I was disappointed. But its ok.

Update was superb yaar.


Still It is open ended, but jab aap aapki saare problems se bahar aa jaogina. tab mujhe ek badi si update dena padega aapko.

Till then no worries. Keep Smiling Ridda😊😉

Aur yeh aapko meri taraf se iss superb update keliye Tight huggie🤗

Lv U
Edited by AshmiShahul - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: AshmiShahul

Last chapter. Seriously?

Well I want an epilogue.


Res for comment


yes last part till when i get my mind in right place and able to write stories...
then i shall continue this one also
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Posted: 10 years ago
What was happening ridoo.
lots of elements left in the story,and you decide to end this.

i will pinch you hard if you not continue this.till that,i wont give my comment in your work.

kpkg...story..i thought you end that,but you continuing that ,then what hapn to this.

bye ram ram ridoo.
Edited by janani_divan - 10 years ago

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