||A cute tussle|| - A MaNan drabble

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hello all - those who know me and those who don't too .

I'm here with a drabble as one of my friend requested me to and she is shy to get revealed, so I'm abiding her 😳

Before that -I have got my MaNan HEA way back in episode 265,so the plot will be basically of the after math of that .

Nidsy - This one is for you too Embarrassed

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The clouds clashed with a thunderbolt signaling an upcoming pouring that was yet to begin on the stealthy noon of winter peak. Winds too advanced like a marathon runner with some icy feels into it. Mumbai was a moderate place though, but the sudden alarm of rain brought in a fresh zeal all along. Birds trying to move into their nest and protect their off springs. Butterflies trying to get a place to escape rain, flowers ready to feel the drizzle on the cool noon. Things were like a perfect dream on earth. The bushes that were cut into decorative shapes, the grasses, the branches of the tree -all were dancing to the rhythm breeze moving shaking their bodies readily as if they loved it.

The view was that of an exalted college, which had many students with their instruments along with them .From it's exit came out five young folks. A tall one in the middle with a guitar bag behind, along a shady glasses giving out a classy aura ; two others were walking on his either side , one with a cool cap and jacket suit and the other with a west and a jumper along a speedy glasses walking out like a chilled man . Beside them were two girls -ladies; one girly and the other opposite of a girly girl. All of them walking with a trendy style .

All of them seemed jocund, one of them joking, one glaring and the rest laughing their lungs out . Everyone had a humongous satisfaction, most of them were written on that tall one's eyes . There was content, joy, confidence, spirit , prayers -everything that could define a healthy living . His companions were gleeful too, a happy couple, rest awing them, and one pulling each of their leg with his PJ's .

The thunder struck again, and the five some hurried to their vehicle like fast rabbits . " Looks like a new season in up bro ,that too for new found loves " one winked . " Right "the tall one replied mindlessly as if he was looking for someone. The someone without whom his life stops, without whom his every step fails .

Searching and waiting like an impatient soul , understanding his situation the man out there threw up his PJ " Manik uncle ...If you are waiting for her ,Then please tell us directly ,we won't mind moving out .I mean escaping from getting wet " Wide eyed by his not so funny joke , also by his stupid sense of humour at the wrong time , "shut up " he squeaked glaring like a dragon . Smiling at his impatience , yet loving it deep inside , he teased him again .

"Owh ! Now that's a signal for us to move guys . Malhotra boy is hungry .Only his lover deer can help him " Cabir giggled . Hearing him, he smiled sarcastically gritting his teeth telling them indirectly to move if they really want to. " Stop pulling his leg Cabir ! Manik , you take your time , we'll party our success later " the girl nearby him ensured smilingly . " Alya ..." Cabir shot up with the feeling of his sarcasm getting trashed. " Okay guys ..lets make a move then " the other girl made her way . " Bye Mukti , Cabir and Dhruv " Manik bid them adieu . " We aren't going away from you Baba ji ...don't be so formal " Cabir chaffed him . Giving a whatever look , he went away from the car and soon they made their departure .

The sky seemed to be grayish with clouds flocking together and winds moving even faster . Waiting like for like a quarter of thirty minutes, he found no sign of her, except for her crazy friend who teased him like his ever joker best friend and went ; not before getting warnings from him and she running away like a scared crow .

Calling her for like twenty times in that umpteenth minute, none of them were answered which added fuel to his impatient mind. Swearing some nothings under his breath, he decided to search for her when she came out side like an angel walking with dolled steps . She herself was a tiny little doll for him. Her thick hair which flied along the wind , also did her shawl play with the galling breeze . Staring as if he saw her for the first time in his life , he watched her walking having a gemmed smile , her deer eyes looking like stars . Playing with the wind , setting her hand open , hugging the wind , she came happily . His furiousness evaporated in the air seeing her proceed so prettily.

Grin replacing his frowns, merriness replacing his anxiety, he folded his hands awing that the tiny little love of his smiling at him . But he was supposed to be angry , hiding them in the mask of anger , he gave her a peer . " Hi " her sugary voice melted in his ears slowly breaking the rigidity of his fakeness . He eyed and started walking away. "Hello ?? " she called him again on not getting his attention rightfully . " Aren't you supposed you say that on call ? wait a minute ..do you have a thing called phone ? If yes , then are you feeding it to Navya of yours ? " he questioned mindlessly pouring out all his pseudo-worminess which was an actual few minutes ago . "No! ..did you call me ? " she asked innocently and took her mobile out from her bag . Seeing the number of calls that were dropped, she bit her tongue and closed her eyes shouting at herself in her mind. "Aiyappa ..Itne missed calls ! " she mumbled childishly , gawking at her eyes growing wide like that of Disney characters, an involuntary smile cropped up his face , but he made sure that ,it would live lesser at the moment . With a want to pull her leg more , he walked away and she ran behind him like a kid . " Manik ,I'm sorry ! " she came behind running , trying to match his speedy movements . Swallowing the laughter that was throwing up inside , he speeded more towards his car . " Manik I'm sorry ! " she came behind pouting . " I'll forgive you ..when you will get your driving license " trying to be rough toned , he mocked her cheekily . Last time he taught her driving, his car went for repair. Making an O at his mockery, she glared at him .

" Well in that case , don't forgive me for this too " she warned . Getting aware of something cooking in her mind he turned to face her.

*Splash*

His dress turned brown , covered with mud. The doll turning into a lioness , turned the lion cum monster inside him . " What the hell Nandu ! " he stared . " Well now you don't need to forgive me ! " she gave a satirical answer . Smile , turned into giggles , watching him stare furiously . His stare turned into a smirk , seeing the smirk on his face , she knew the upcoming danger . " Manik no " she moved behind watching him step towards her . " Who said I won't forgive you ? You are forgiven already , now I'll seek my revenge Nandu ! " he winked wickedly coming closer and before she could run or even turn away , he colored her milky arms with the mud . Ever so slowly, igniting her insides , he brushed her neck later . Stunned , she turned to him staring getting reminded of their first mud fight . And there goes , he filled her face too . That could be no less than charging a bull for fight.

The fight turned into a mud war between them, half smiling half giggling. Having him completely filled, she gave a victorious smiling . Knowing her weakness , he held her , tickling the heavens out of her .

"Manik stop ...I'm sorry ! " she asked for the last time . " As I said , you are forgiven already Miss Murthy ..I was tricking you " he said tongue in cheek . Realising his prank , she lightly slapped his chest . " Don't you think you are trying to be smarter now a days ? " Nandini asked frowning at his kamina behavior . " Don't you know Manik Malhotra is already smart ! " he replied carefree . " That's my dialog you monkey ! " Nandini squeaked . " You only say ..your everything is mine " he came closer making her cheeks rush with tints of red . The rain poured down like a winsome moment for both of them , cleaning out their mess .

Excited by the light squalling , Nandini smiled even more like a shining gem making his heart flutter with joy . "What's the plan for today Ms Murthy? He asked with ardent desire pulping up seeing her playing with the droplets that were tinnier than her . " ..Hmm ..walking , then ice-cream , then chachi's Kada ..then Fab-5's success launch party ..then sleepy " Nandini briefed the schedule . " What ? No ! stupid plan ...walking and chachi's kada -not at all!! ..I'm not coming ! " he said , sulking gawking with whammy at her ideas . " Of course your coming ! cause you can't go by car either ..." she showed up his car key . " No ! ..Nandu no ! " he behaved like a stubborn kid as she tried to pull the mountain him before the rain settled .

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Cooldude101 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#2
And I was so scared I wouldn't be the first to reply
I am so amazed by the way you write abz! Totally mesmerising it is😳
Manik's reactions, cabir's jokes, Nandini <3
Everything was so perfect.
I suck at long comments so please forgive me if I am not able to satisfy you with the length.
The mud fight, memories and nostalgia all running wild in my mind!
You are so right about the serial right now, with season one, KYY had ended and this is only my prolonged version for the HEA we were supposed to get but were robbed of😭
I am waiting for more. Much more.
Edited by Cooldude101 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Aww!
That felt so good to refresh the old memories of the legendary mud fight!

Loved it!

Do pm me whenever you write next
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Aww! what a cute piece of writing.. My Manan pheels after sooo long... *sigh* u brought the Manan essence.. n Thank u for that..
loved it

Do write more
Take care
Pankhuri
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Posted: 9 years ago
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aww;!! i just loved it... 😊
it was so cute...
right now i m getting nostalgic remembering their mud fight nd i really dont think i can ever get out of those memories..
u hve really penned it down beautifully...
a perfect update...
well done... 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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amazing and beautiful

write more if possible
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Cooldude101

And I was so scared I wouldn't be the first to reply

I am so amazed by the way you write abz! Totally mesmerising it is😳
Manik's reactions, cabir's jokes, Nandini <3
Everything was so perfect.
I suck at long comments so please forgive me if I am not able to satisfy you with the length.
The mud fight, memories and nostalgia all running wild in my mind!
You are so right about the serial right now, with season one, KYY had ended and this is only my prolonged version for the HEA we were supposed to get but were robbed of😭
I am waiting for more. Much more.

thank you so much Smriti !
I'm glad that you liked it
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: urvisaini

Aww!

That felt so good to refresh the old memories of the legendary mud fight!

Loved it!

Do pm me whenever you write next
Continue soon

Sure ...
Thank you 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: riddhima11

Aww! what a cute piece of writing.. My Manan pheels after sooo long... *sigh* u brought the Manan essence.. n Thank u for that..

loved it

Do write more
Take care
Pankhuri

Thank you ...I'm glad that you got your MaNan feels 😳

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