MaNan TS: A Run Away Bride [final part/pg-17] 21/12/15 - Page 9

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Posted: 9 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: angellovemanan

hawww yeh kya ho gaya

jo bhi hua bahut entertaining tha
loved it
continue soon
and haan do pm me



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Posted: 9 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: a.pari68

Amazing+shocking update


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Edited by Angel_manan - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: Cooki

Cliffhanger!!
But it was wonderful update...
Nandini ran away from her marriage & married to an unknown person totally..
That's Incredible!! 😆
Thnxx for the pm...
Continue soon...
Looking forward to read further parts..


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Posted: 9 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: lovePANI

Meri SRK ke faniesss
Beautiful update...n funny too..

Lovely banner..
liked their expression
on banner..

what a twist update..
Eee ...khana list was sounding delicious
butter chicken ..pizza..muh mai
PANI aagiya ...hahaha ..

Hoo what reason was that..
coz he don't allowed her to wear jeans hahaha..


Naman .. 😆

ooo..like that her pallu unpinned..

oing..their romance suddenly
but loved it...
Hormones loocha ..haha
bhar mai jaye ajnabi n all that..
abhi toh bas... hihi..

suddenly suddenly they got their senses back...aisa na ho..

oyeee...aise thoughts na diya kare ..
pehle sai pyaar karte n all that..
Agra nahi hua na..
sad...
mai expect kar rahi hun ...Aap.. thodo na dil mera...

thanx for pm

keep smiling n take care.



Thank you so much for ur precious comments.
I love it.
and hope next Update pe tum aur acchi lage.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: sri_valli


<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">cliffhanger yaar...

</div>plz continue with their make out and make them realise after they woke up...Nandu character was too funny...alyas parents R too understanding..<div>
Waiting fir next chapter...</font>



Thanks, next part pe dekho kya surprise hai.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: 591994

fantastic dear...I just hope they knew each other already...whatever it is...I'm just waiting fr next desperately...though the update was ultimate shocking fr me...bt then too I loved it😉😉


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waiting fr next...cont. soon...


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byee...tc...



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Posted: 9 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: abhutani0311

This is actually hilarious...so filmy and what a cliffhanger man! Please continue soon!


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Posted: 9 years ago
#88
Nice update...
Too filmy...
And a cliffhanger...
Thnx for pm...
Update soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#89


So hare is final part
Enjoy Reading

suddenly
nandu eyes fell on chocolates which were lying on side bed table
she was trying to take it

manik:Nandu yaar dont spoil this moment
finally we got each other

nandu grabbed the chocolates and start munching them
nandu:ohhhoho m spoiling the moment
aur woh kon tha jisne kha tha
what we are feeling is not love
i want more time
you idiot being obedient son chal diye arrange marriage karne huh :-/

manik:m woh shaadi ni krnachahta tha baby
nandu:toh who was that jisne kha tha
now when we are married I want this marriage to work

manik:uff this look nandu
yhi dekhna chahta tha m
nandini:what do you mean haa

manik:mandap mein apna manan bracelet phen ke alya ayegi naa

nandu:hawww manik tumhe pta tha
ki m he bride hoon

manik:Mrs malhotra I knew ki meri nandu apna challenge jarur pura karegi
he kissed her lips
nandini:manik malhotra m tumse shaadi krne ke liye apni shaadi se bhaagi
police se jaan bachakar bhaagi
sharma uncle ke sath hide n seek aamna saamna kheli
aur toh aur
woh pizza mein extra cheese bhi ni tha
tumhe pta h na how much i loved extra cheese pizza
and tum mere sath games khel rhe naa

manik:nandu 1st ngt pe pizza kon dscs krta hai
we are WORK ON PROGRESS moment and here you are eating chocolate extra cheese pizza hadd h bilkul
now lts continue where we stopped
atleast MISSON ACCOMPLISHED toh ho jane dijiye

nandu:you really dont love me naa manik

manik:no baby I love you and i realized this on our 1st date its just I was confused with the feelings
usse phle wherevr i saw you na
i felt different feelings like
nandu:scchi agar esa hai toh tumne esa q bola ki
its not love i need time m confused
you knw how much i was hurt

manik:baby i said that coz i knew ki you will not loose hope on us
you will surely do something
and mujhe yh bhi pta lg jta that you love me more than your FOOD

nandu:arrrggg manik you know naa food is my first love
but I love you alot you knw naa

manik:I knw my baby lvs me so much
now cn we continue warna kapde utarne ka kya faeda
nandu you had your first lovefrom morning so much now hv your second love too

Saans me teri saans mili toh mujhe saans aayi
Mujhe saans aayi, Mujhe saans aayi

manik without warning slammed his lips on her
kissing vigoursly
xploring each others mouth
manik biting her upper lip while nandu busy with his lower lip

Rooh ne chhu li jism ki khushboo tu jo paas aayi
Tu jo paas aayi, tu jo paas aayi

manik worshipped each and everypart of her body with smooth kisses
hickeys and lick it to soothe it
nandu too did the same

Saans me teri saans mili toh mujhe saans aayi
Mujhe saans aayi, Mujhe saans aayi

finally after teasings
manik claimed her
she moans a loud moan
manik captured her lips one more time
finally after hot maket out session
manik gathered her in his arms

nandini:manik kal kya hoga

manik:dont worry nandu
kl hum sbke saamne jaake kahenge
BADE BADE DESHO MEIN ESI CHOTI CHOTI BAATEIN HTI RHTI HAI SENORITA'S parents
hihihi :p
nandu:manik be serious

manik:dont worry shona now we are together naa
we will sort it together
now you sleep you are tired naa

he ruffles her hairs slowly
finaly she dozzed off

manik pov
dont worry baby you id so much for us naa
tomorrow morning everyone will accpt you

he kisses her hair and dozzed off

writer pov
warning:during make out dont do such stupid things
warna god only knws what your husband will do
yha toh manik tha n bandi nandu
wha pta kya kon hga
hihihi chocolates and xtra cheese pizza :D :p ;)

malhotra mansion

everybody war sitting in hall
malhotra's saxena's and murthy's

till time saxena's explained evrything to malhotra's and murthy's

meanwhile manan entered the mansion
as seeing evryone
nandini gets afraid and hid behind manik

alya came forward and asks for forgiveness

alya:M sorry nandini for my own selfishness I used you but that time mujhe kuch smj ni aa rha tha
m sorry

amms:nandu tu theek h na

nandu:haa ammu m ok inhone mera khoob dhyan rakha kl raat (:p)
raat mein mangal hua tha
both remembered their hot intimacy
aur mujhe khoob khana bhi khilaya n chocolates bhi

both the families started thinking what to do next

tbhi a man in pandit disguise enters into mansion
actually malhotra's called him but instead of asli pandit
manik called cabir and that very pandit was cabir
nyonika:pandit ji btaiye ab hum kya kare

pandit:yh balika iss balak ke liye appropriate mtlb badi shubh hai
inke stars aasmaan mein alag se shine kar rhe hai
agar yh log sath rhnge toh apke
apke ghar mein hmsha sukh shaanti banegi rahegi
samriddhi ayegi
yh kanya apke kanye ke liye bahot shubh hai

raj:agr esa hai toh humme iss shaadi se koi aitraaj ni h
n wse bhi hme arrange marriage karni thi but yh toh koi aur he type ki shaadi h
but I hope baccho you ppl will work on this marriage

mr malhotra and mr murthy hugs each others so as their wife and ammd

after bidding rothru bye murthy's left from their

MANAN ROOM

manik:finally we are together
I love you so so much baby

nandini:I love too mani
ab pls nvr evr lose trust on our love
manik:no bby it was my mistake I knw
nandini:acha manii tell me when you first saw me
you nvr told me

manik:I first saw you on beach
when you are argueing with pani puri vendor for extra puri
You became my crush baby
then 2nd time
I saw you in a mall when you were busy with your exta large pizza
I thought its infactuation
3td time
I saw you fighting with a boy for chocolate
phr hmari meetings
and on our date I realized i love you
but nxt i thought that you love your food too tbhi you wasted so much time on our first ngt with eating chocolate and chatting

nandu:manii esa ni h
but i love food
but we did naa what others also do

manik:but we could hv done 2-3 more sessions
but dont worry now we will do
and manik pulled her over him
finally without any food stuff

Janam janam janam sath chalna yuhi
kasam tumhe kasam aake milna yuhi

finally this TS is over
Shocked laga yaha Surprised comments karke bola zaroor...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#90
I just love it..
Itsss soo awesome ..
So amazing. .just love to the core. ..

Soo .fantastic. ...

u r such a nice writer. .

.
Thanks for pm too. ..

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