PREMA , ISHQ AUR KADAAL ( CHAPTER 9 / PAGE 40) 25 MAY - Page 8

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Posted: 9 years ago
#71
Awesome update loved it. Their teasing session n game was superb n manik becoming naughty holding nandus hand that scene was amazing
Waiting for their SR n maniks surprise.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#72
Awesome Update dear
love it
Update soon
Take care dear😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#73
Awesome update
Superb update

Fab update

Loved it

Loved the update

Waiting for the next part

Update the next part soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#74
Awesome update. Such an blissful one.waiting for next update thanks for pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#75
THAT WAS FULL OF TEASING... NANDINI IS GOING TO TEASE HIM!! INTERESTING... THANKS FOR THE UPDATE AND PM... LOVE YOU BOTH...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#76
Great start
Story line
Waiting for next part
Marriage n al r beautifully described
Lovely evry bit


Thanks for PM
Love you
Pravallika aka PraNi
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Posted: 9 years ago
#77
Hey dear awesome update all are happy manan were cute waiting for next update for manik suprise pls update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#78
very nice Update.
loved it.
thanks for pm.
waiting for next.
continue soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#79
awesome update...
loved it...
manan's frndshp ...
now their married lyf...
wtng 4r nxt part...
cont soon...


keep smiling!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#80
finally got a banner
really thanks to pari
a friend of eku here
who made this wonderful banner
we thank u a lot from the bottom of our hearts



part 3


Manik came near his room and opened the door and girl sitting on the bed covering his face with her saree. Manik took slow steps towards her and sat in front of her and kept his hand on her hand which was on her legs and was about to open the pallu from her face but she dint allow him and entwined their hands and manik smiled seeing her gestures. Manik kept his another hand on their hands.

M: wht happened nandini?? U r behaving differently

She just nodded her head in a no and manik came forward to open the pallu but she tried to stop him again but manik dint listen to her and opened the pallu to have a look at HIS girl but he received the biggest shock in his life.

He was numb to see the person there and he almost screamed the name of the person

M: MUKTIII

It was all mukti plans to sit there in place of nandini and to see how manik behaves with nandini. Nandini was totally un aware of their plan and was waiting for manik in their new room but mukti according to their plan bought manik to his old room which was just opposite to their new room.

M: wht r u doing here??? And where is nandu??????

Mu: wht r u doing matlab????

M: yeh toh mera room hey na and wht r u doing here??

Mu: don't behave ki I dint come to ur room at all kkk

M: haa u r my sis and u can come anytime

Mu: isiliye I came I want to spend some time here

M: wht??? That too today kya hua hey tujhe??

A: today u have decided to speak only wht??

Manik turned back and found all his friends cum family at the entrance. Manik was shocked to see all the members involved in this.

M: u all know about this??

C: do u think mukti can get this wonderful idea without my hand

M: really?? Just cut the crap and tell me where is nandu right now

Mu: u will get to know about nandu only when u will pay us

M:wht?? Y should I pay to meet my wife

A: kyu matlab??its a rasam

Na: yeah u have to

M: navya thumb hi

Na: mey kya karu its an imp rasam na

M: acha fine I will give

Manik gave an interesting amount to both his sisters and they told manik about his new room and nandini waiting for him there.

Manik felt happy and left for their new room.

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Nandini was sitting on the bed and was waiting for manik but there was no appearance of him and she was getting restless. At the same time the lights got off and nandini at sudden got afraid due to her past reasons. She heard a sounds and her fear increased more and she went and sat near the edge of the bed and bought her legs near her face and was on the verge of crying.

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Manik entered the room and saw it was dark and he immediately searched for nandini in the dark and found her on the edge of the bed. He went up to her and kept hand on her hands which was on her legs. Nandini with the sudden touch got afraid and jerked his hand from her hand. Manik was shocked but knowing her he spoke to her lovingly by cupping her face.

M: nandu its me ur manik

Nandini then realized his presence and hugged him tightly and manik too responded to her hug tightly. Manik was rubbing her back to calm her down. After some time manik broke the hug and cupped her face.

M: nandu u trust me na??

Nandini bobbed her head in a yes

M: then will u come with me

N: kaha??

M: come na it's a surprise for u

On listening the surprise nandini eyes widened and made big eyes with a cute expression on which manik could not resist and immediately kissed her on her cheeks which made nandini to blush immediately. Manik held her hand and came out and made her sit in the car and he took the driving seat and drove for his surprise to her.

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After a journey of nearly 45 mins manik halted the car in front of his so called surprise to her. On seeing nandini was out of words and was fully shocked on her place.

finally we are done with the third part
really we both are enjoying the response
thanks a lot guys
for the support
it means a lot
to us
do tell ur views about the part
we both will be waiting
this update is for pari as she is special to us
for the wonderful banner
once again we thank her
love u all
eku and prathyusha

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