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PART 3

Ab Maan ki haalat aisi hai ki chotti behen se shaadi ho rahi h jisse pyaar nahi, badi behen se pyaar hai to usse shaadi nahi ho rahi

Maan samaj na apaaye kya kare kaise kare, khush ho nahi paa raha aur kuch keh nahi paa raha

Udhar Kiara chipke jaaye

Maan to sar ke beel khinchle

Udhar Geet bhao naa de, kareeb jaana chahe, baat karna chahe to jiju kehke bhaga de; ghar ke bahar khada hua to Geet khidki band karke chali jaye. Kareeb to door shakal bhi kam dekhne ko millti hai

Udhar Kiara bole idhar milo udhar milo

At last milne aaya to he was royally drunk in broad day light

Kiara was pissed beyond measures

Udhar ladki chaye-chaye..jaake Maan ke parents ko complaint kar di

Ab Maan ke parents bhi chaye-chaye

Ab Maan ne finally Kiara se kaha tu mil

Udhar Kiara ke ghar pe bhi phone kar diya

Maa ne ph uthaya

Maan ne keh diya ki chotti ladki se nahi badi ko phone do, Geet se baat karni hai

Geet ne phone uthaya to, style se hakk se keh diya ki

M- Hill top pe mujhe aake milna, jahan ek baar mile the. Bohot zaruri baat hai

Geet puchti reh gai

G-Kya hua? Kya hai? Mujhe kyun phone kiya?

Maan ne phone kaat diya

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Ab Geet pohonchi uss jagah aur wahan pohonchi uski behen, Kiara

Both the sisters are surprised at each other's prescence

Maan aaya

G-emm..mujhe chalna chahie

Maan ne haath pakda...

M-Ruko

G-Maan...

M-shhh...I need to say this...let me say this

He says gazing at Geet

M-I just...I am sorry...mujhe maa kar do...kyun?...tum jaanti ho...want to punish me? punish me

Behen shrieks ki ye ho kya raha hai

M-Here's something for you

He whispers near Geet's ear and hands her a paper

Its scribbled in braille

Maan turns to Kiara par Geet ka haath nahi choda

M-I am sorry...I am really sorry...I am so messed up...I was so messed up...I ended up..I am a jerk...but just think ..think for a while, being in a loveless marriage all our lives...I am not abandoning my child...the ball is in your court. I...just want to confess that...that...I love Geet

G-Nahi..wo..aisa nahi...Kiara...

M-Shhh galat mauke pe galat baat karne se mana kiya hai naa maine. Mujhe jo kehna tha keh diya; aur haan ek aur baat , kal LA se eye doctor aa rahe hain checkup karne...gaadi thik 10.30 baje aa jayegi

Ab Maan zara peeche khada ho jaata hai...arms fold karke

Ab Kiara, Geet pe chaye chaye chaye

Kiara-How come you were with him??? Mujhe bataya nahi! How can you do this to your sister? I was getting married to him

Geet has had enough...naa suna jaa raha aur

One side of her is wanting to spill the beans over her lies and other side is trying to think about her little sister's future

Geet samajh nahi paa rahi ki kya kare

She just squeaks

G-I ..I..also..love..Maan

Maan looks at her with shock surprise and happiness all mixed up

Kiara cuts in saying

Kiara-Ye tumhara bachcha hai Maan! Think about the baby. Marry me

Geet is frowning not able to digest Kiara's lies

Maan sadly sighs. Socha tha Kiara samajh jayegi.

Maan kya bole jab Kiara hi raazi nahi, she wants to be tied in a loveless marriage

But he feels ki baby ke taraf uski responsibility hai

G-Main tumse kuch puchon, Kiara? Dil se jawab dena. Socho, aaj agar Saurabh tumhare paas wapas aa jaye to tum kya karogi?

Kiara chup, looking down, emotional si ho gai

Maan bhi chup ho gaya. Ye move to usne bhi nahi socha tha

Maan ne kuch socha hi kahan tha Kiara ke bare mein...Geet ke ilawa kuch socha hota to itna naa paglaa raha hota..

Abhi bhi Maan ko beech mein Geet ko kiss karne ka hi khayal aaya; kiss her feet, kiss her hand, her head and maybe lips if the lady permits and the lady is oh so intelligent too...totally in love with the lady!

Maan ki to wo stupid wali smile chipak jaati hai Geet ko dekhte hi; mesmerized wali...main tera tail wagging puppy wali smile

Kiara ko laga Maan iss avatar mein kaise

Geet checks her watch, touches it and says that its late and she has to leave

M-Geet, kaise jaogi taxi hai?

G-I will manage

M-I will drop

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Maan car chala raha hai, bagal mein Kiara aur peeche Geet baithi hai

Par koi nahi...rearview mirror backseat par araam se focus kiya jaa sakta hai

Agli subah ache naye kapde pehenke drive ke saath Geet ko doctor ke paas le jaane aa gaya Maan

Pehle to sab Maan ko dekhke hairaan...suit boot mein chamak ke aaya hai...bright and shiny as a new penny

Everyone jaw dropped ki isko kya ho gaya, chamak kyun raha hai

Geet bhi wahin thi

M-Chalo Geet

Geet chup

M-Kya hua? Chalo doctir ke paas. Bhul gai kya kal kaha tha naa

Maan ne pakad liya haath

M-Arre chal naa

G-Kyun jau main? Main andhi hoon naa...basket banane wali...tum logon jaisi nahi hoon...kuch aata bhi nahi hai mujhe. Par main apni duniya mein khush hoon; nahi banna mujhe tumhari duniya...tumhari zindagi ka hissa

M-Geet abhi faltu mein gussa dikhane ka waqt nahi ha, doctor ke saath appointment hai

Khinchke le gaya

Geet ka bohot der tak examination chala

Geet ko doctor ne kaha aur bhi aage aana hoga aisa waisa

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Do din baad Maan ki mom stormed in Geet's house

M Mom-Nahi karna aap logon se humein rishta!!!! Barbaad kar degi aapki badi beti mere bete ko! Pehle uska jee nahi bhara ab mere bete se aise badlaa lena chahti hai

Sab ne pucha hua kya

G Mom- Meri beti ke baare mein aisi baatein bilkul mat kariye!

M mom-Acha aur Maan jo pagalon jaisi harkatein kar raha hai

Maan's mom shows a form

M mom-Ye form ankhein donation ka hai. Maan ne doctor ko convince kiya hai ki agar Geet ki eyes aise restore nahi hui to wo uski ankhein Geet ko de de. Doctor ke laakh samjhane par ki wo zinda aadmi ka donation nahi kar sakta, Maan ne sab kanooni paintre lagwake manwaliya doctor ko

Edited by NilzStorywriter - 9 years ago
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sahi mein maan pagal hogaya...abb geet bhag jayegi...

awesome update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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amazing update good that kaira got to know about maaneet ohh he is ready to donate his eyes for geet he just madly love her thnx 4 pm
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I was surprised not shocked at Maan phoning both Kiara and Geet to meet him
actually that was a perfect way to solve the entire situation but Kiara she is adamant
that she is pregnant from Maan and Geet came between them
Geet thinking about her sister's future but she also understands that Maan will
never love Kiara so why Geet did not let Kiara know that she had known Maan
way much before Kiara met him in London
Maan wanting to donate his very own eyes to Geet now how is that possible
and I hope by this Kiara can also see the depth of Maan's love for Geet
but now his mother wow she is super angry well I actually don't blame her
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hi thanks 4 da awesome update! well written! Maan calls Kiara n Geet! he talks 2 dem! Maan says he loves Geet! Geet reciprocates! Kiara angry! Geet doesn't reveal tht the baby is nt Maan's! Kiara only thinking abt the baby! Maan wants 2 take Geet 2 the see a doc! Maan;s mom reveals he wants 2 donate his eyes 2 Geet! she is angry! Geet stunned! update soon
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hi nilz
nice update but why in poetic way ..
man called kaiara and geet together ..
yeh kar kya raha hai ..hope the child is not of maan .
now he want to donate his eyes to geet ..how can alive man donate his eyes ...he didn't think once abt geet ..how she going to react and survive ..

thanks for update
waiting for next
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What is wrong with Kiara, blaming Geet! Why does she not realize that Maan was a part of Geet's life even before she forcefully came into the picture.

And Maan? He does not know that the baby is not his, even then he is wanting to be with Geet?! That day he told her all those hurtful things and now wanting to break his marriage with Kiara.

He is going to donate his eyes so that Geet is able to see! That's shocking!

Waiting for more! Continue soon please.




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