ISHRA II OS JUDE DO DIL KUCH AISE II epilogue on page 21 dec/29

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey my dear friends...

So I am again comes up with a new story to bother you all... I hope you all will like it.. do comment and long one... So enough of my banters here go the prologue... THANKS SUSH... i love this title...

ISHRA OS: JUDE DO DIL KUCH AISE...

PROLOGUE:


Vandita: are you sure ishu??? Really you want to marry raman...

Ishita: I am sure vandu...

Vandita: but you does not know him... look its better for him that he get shifted to rehabilitation center... its not safe dear.. he acts violent... He is mad ishu try to understand its just an infatuation..

Ishita screams: he is not mad vandu... he is alright.. he only need love...and I love him truly... dekhna wo theek hojaye ga

Vandita: I am scared ishu... jab wo theek hoga to tumhain bhool jayega...

Ishita: nahe aisa nahe hoga...

Raman comes there holding a Barbie doll in his hands and says: guriya... guriyaa kahan ho tum??? He stumbles and was about to fall but ishita holds him...

Raman: kahan thi tum.. kabse dhoondh raha hoon... Tum bhi muje choor dogi???

Ishita firmly holds his hand and says: I will never leave your hand raman... never...

That's it... I hope you will love the prologue... will post the os when I get some good time to write and post... waiting for your lovely response...

OS: JUDE DO DIL KUCH AISE (updated)

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ishrasoul thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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prologue posted... waiting for comments...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Res
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Unres...

Me first...me first...me first



Coming to the prologue...;

Awe...such a cute start 😳
RKB with Barbie doll 🤣
I couldn't help but laugh yaar...!!!! I just couldn't help place KP there...doing such antics 🤣🤣🤣
But on a serious note, he's so fragile 😔
Hope Ishu will be able to help him recover...
The main thing, I'm praying that he should remember her and her immense love even so he recovers 🤔
In spite of all these, I know he may forget her. if so, I want to know how you're going to make him remember her.
*sigh*
You've gotta do a lot in this OS girl... 😉
I'm waiting...
Update soon...

PS. I tried to give long review... This is what I could manage 😆

PPS. Please add English Subtitles...😳

Love you Rida...

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Edited by Gaya3sb - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice start dear
Very emotional
Very different concept
But what happened to raman
Why is he like that
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Posted: 9 years ago
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New n interesting prologue plss update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey Rida It is beautiful concept ...

Ishita will take care of Raman...will love him...will heal his wounds.

But The question is...why Raman is in that position???

& How Ishita know him...

Ishita is Raman's Guriya...so because of her he is in that situation or he is consider Ishita as someone else...

But I am afraid of Your Twists...Rida... What if Raman will leave Ishita after he will be alright ...

I know I am over thinking ...Continue Soon...But the title is OS????
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: prayosha

Hey Rida It is beautiful concept ...

Ishita will take care of Raman...will love him...will heal his wounds.

But The question is...why Raman is in that position???

& How Ishita know him...

Ishita is Raman's Guriya...so because of her he is in that situation or he is consider Ishita as someone else...

But I am afraid of Your Twists...Rida... What if Raman will leave Ishita after he will be alright ...

I know I am over thinking ...Continue Soon...But the title is OS????


glad u like it...
you will no why raman is like this
ishita is not responsible for his state...
os means one shot...
suggest title... please
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Posted: 9 years ago
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unres soon dear
glad u commented on my story...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow amazing! is it an os or an ss?
update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hey title can be JUDE DO DIL KUCH AISE

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