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Posted: 9 years ago

Sapna dear you are too brilliant yaar...
It was an Beautiful and Romantic update..
I loved their morning romance a lot...and
all the images are so beautiful...
That mangalsutra wala scene was so real
and beautiful too...
Loved their happy moments with family...
Simmi and her teasing session was too good..
Yaar ye Bhalla's to bade hi samajhdar
nikle...neg me sidhe honeymoon ki tickets
hi de dali...
Ye lo room me aate hi inka romance phirse
chalu hogaya...Par Toshi ji ne bhi kya galat
time pe aawaz lagai yaar ...loved their
surprises for each other...
Yaar you mentioned each and every rituals
and functions so very well...
And I loved Ishita's look for reception...
Aur Raman ne kya speech diya hai boss...
sabki bolti humesha ke liye band kardi bande
ne ...
And at the end he helped her in packing...
and also helped her in changing as well...
haahaaa...
Loved this update so much yaar...
Now waiting for their honeymoon ...
Update sooonnn...



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Posted: 9 years ago
I enjoyed every bit of this story. Awesome. 👏 Please continue soon. 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Today it's you tomorrow it will be someone else--- this was my favourite line n so true.

Isshhh... I have recently attended a marriage n had enjoyed all these rituals.
Kangana .. Was my favourite this time.

I loved it
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Posted: 9 years ago

Friends
Story now moving to its culmination.

Thank you all for commenting on previous update.
Thanks a lot
Could not comment you all individually due to lack of time.

Please Ignore spelling and grammatical mistakes.

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PART 15


Next day, Ishra took blessing from elders and left for airport. It was about 6 hour's flight to Singapore.

In the flight

Ishita was resting her head on his shoulders while he was holding her close to him.

Raman - Ishita what are you thinking.

Ishita - Nothing I have never been to Singapore. I am just excited to be there

Raman smiled - Sleep for sometime

Ishita - Yah

Raman closed her eyes with his hand - Sleep jaan. Because I have no plan of letting you sleep there also.

She hit him slightly, closed her eyes. Soon she was lost in deep slumber while he slept resting his head on hers. Both were still sleeping when an airhostess came and shook Raman slightly.

Airhostess - Sir we have reached. Hope you had pleasant experience with us.

Raman smiled and woke Ishita. Outside the airport, cab was waiting for them which took them to Marriott. On reaching their suite, he ordered lunch which they had after changing. They then moved to Changi point for coastal walk.

Next day, Raman wore jeans with black jacket while she chose to wear blue top with black bottoms and an overcoat.

They visited many places like Bukit Batok Town Park, Gardens by the Bay, Light & water show at the Marina Bay Sands. Later that night they slept cuddling each other. Like this 4 days passed. That day they decided to explore Sentosa Island followed by shopping session for all. After getting something for everyone, they finally moved to men's section.

Raman was trying few shirts and had gone to try them. On returning, he saw her missing. He looked around and saw her standing talking to someone. She was hugging and giggling with that man. Raman moved towards them. Ishita was hitting him playfully and laughing. He came from behind and wrapped his hand around her waist.


Ishita - Oh Raman . You came. Meet my friend Mani

Mani - Ishita plz

Ishita - Ok fine. Abhimanyu Raghav

Raman shook hands with him - Hi

Ishita - Raman he is my college friend. We were in same college though different branch. He is my best friend.

Raman tightened his grip around her - Oh Good. Ishita chale . It's late.

Ishita - Mani why don't you join us. Raman say na

Raman looked at her - Off course Abhimanyu Please join us.

Mani - No ways you guys are here for your honeymoon. I don't want to disturb you. Waise bhi I am leaving tonight for London.

Ishita - Arre you are not disturbing us. You are leaving today. At least we can have dinner together.

Mani - Okay then lets meet in evening. Then we will have dinner in Club Street.

Ishita - That's great .

Raman just faked a smile.

Soon Ishra left for sightseeing. Throughout journey she was talking about Mani. He was just smiling back.

In the evening they were meeting in Merlion Park. Mani was already waiting for them there.

Mani - Hi Ishu . He hugged her
Hi Raman.

Raman - Hi ...He spoke disinterested

They roamed there sometime. His whole concentration was on them. Soon they left for dinner in Club Street.

Club Street

They settled for dinner.

Raman- So Mani what will you have.

Ishita - Let me order. I know his choices.

Mani smiled - Okay

Ishita ordered for Mani as well for Raman. She excused herself to freshen up. Raman and Mani were left behind alone.

Mani - So Raman. What do you do?

Raman - I own a company Bhalla industries.

Mani - Oh you are Raman kumar Bhalla. I was thinking the same. I have heard your name somewhere. Raman we talked last week on phone for collaboration. I am Abhimanyu Raghav from PSR.

Raman was not interested in his talk, he just smiled back.

Mani - I am very happy for Ishita. She has found you as her life partner. Raman just take care of her. She has gone through a lot.

Raman - Mr Raghav. I know how to take care of my wife.

Ishita came back - So what are you guys talking.

Mani - Nothing just about you.

Ishita - About me. Raman don't trust him . He is very mischievous.

Mani - Not more then you Ishu

He continued their talk while Raman felt alien between them. After dinner they moved to hotel while Mani left for airport.

Hotel Suite

Ishra came back from dinner with Abhimanyu. Raman was feeling a bit insecure, nor that he was doubting her, but it was his possessiveness which was making him feel that.

Ishita - Raman! It was so unexpected we met him here.

Raman ignored her and was clicking his mobile randomly. She moved to wardrobe and took out her nightwear.

Ishita - Raman

He didn't reply this time too.

Ishita shook him slightly - Raman where are you lost. I am talking to you.

Raman raised his voice - What Ishita. Can't you see I am doing some work?

Ishita - Ok Baba. Do your work. Sorry to disturb. I was just saying can we order ice cream. I feel like having it.

Raman - Hmm..Do what you want.

Ishita - Let me order black current. You know what Raman, Me and Mani use to have it every day after college. And you won't believe...

Hearing his name, his anger grew. It added fuel to fire.
He shouted - Stop it Ishita.

Ishita - What Raman. Why are you shouting? I am just asking for an ice cream.


Raman - Go! Tell your Mani to bring it for you

Ishita - Mani From where he came between this.

Raman - Ishita I didn't. You brought him in between. Subah se Mani Mani

Ishita was shocked - Raman what are you saying. He is my friend whom I met after long time.

Raman - Long time. Pehle milta toh usse Shaadi bhi kar leti.

Ishita - Raman. You are not realizing what you are saying in anger. I don't want to talk to you.

Raman - Oh Yes. Why will you talk to me now. Go and be with him.

Ishita lost her patience - Enough Raman. Not a single word more. I am going out. I don't want to discuss this

Raman -Please Go. I won't stop you

Ishita with teary eyes - Fine I am going. And I won't come back. Dhoonte rehna ab, kabhi nahi ayugi.

Saying that, She moved out of their room.

An hour passed, she didn't came back. His temper ceased by then. He started worrying for her.

Raman dialed her no. but her cell was ringing in room itself. He realized she left without taking her purse or mobile. He immediately left and starting searching for her in whole hotel.
11 in night, it was getting cold outside. He enquired about her from reception, but to his disappointment they had no idea about her. He checked outside, by then snow fall started. Temperature dropped further.

Raman was cursing himself for being rude to her. Her words her constantly replaying in his mind - I won't come back...Dhoonte rehna ab...Kabhi nahi ayugi.

Raman - Please Ishita. Don't do this. Please I am sorry

He was moving back to their room when he saw terrace door open. Some unknown energy pulled him towards it. On entering he saw a small figure sitting on floor with folded legs, burying her head in between. He immediately recognized her and ran towards her. She was crying loudly, at the same time shivering due to cold.

He touched her shoulders - Ishita Are you mad. Get up

Ishita - Just go away. I am not coming.

Raman - Ishita yeh pagalpan chodo. You will get sick.

She was adamant - I won't come.
She spoke sobbingly.

Raman - Bacha you are angry on me. Why are you punishing yourself. Please get up.

Ishita - No..You shouted on me.
She was behaving like an stubborn child.

Raman - Ishita look I am sorry. Get up baba

He made her stand forcibly - Chalo Ishita
He was dragging her, but she fainted in his arms.

Raman - Ishita bacha. Open your eyes.

He lifted her in his arms and moved to their suite. On reaching there, he placed her on bed and started rubbing her feet with his hands. Her face was pale, her extremities as cold as ice. He called reception and asked for doctor. Soon doctor arrived and examined her.

Doctor - Mr Bhalla! I think she remained in cold for long time.

Raman with teary eyes- Yes Doctor. Is she okay. She fainted few minutes back.

Doctor - See Mr Bhalla. Let me be straight with you. Her pulse is low also her body temperature is falling. We need to give her heat. Since you are her husband only you can help her in this. I hope you are understanding me. I have given her medicines. But they are helpful only after she gain consciousness.

He left pressing his shoulders.

Raman looked at her. She was shivering, her lips trembling due to cold.

He sat near her crying - Ishita Please bacha don't punish me like this.

He wiped his tears - I won't let anything happen to you.

He stood up, locked the door. Next he removed his and hers clothes and joined her in bed.
He made love to her until she stopped shivering and her breathing become normal. She cuddled more to him in her sleep seeking his warmth while he close his eyes hugging her.

Next morning, she stirred in sleep as sun rays fell on her face, peeping out of curtains. Raman immediately woke up and caressed her face.

Raman - Ishita are you okay.

Ishita - Hmm..

Remembering their last day conversation, she become angry but on seeing tears in his eyes her anger was replaced with concern.

Ishita - Raman Why are you crying.


Raman - I thought I lost you.
He hugged her while she caressed his back.

Ishita - I am okay Raman. Don't cry.

He was not leaving her, pulled her closer to him.

Raman - Never do that again.
He spoke kissing her forehead.

Ishita - But you shouted on me
She complained pouting.

Raman - I am sorry Jaan. I am sorry.

Ishita - It's okay. Now stop crying.

Raman finally parted away from her.

Raman caressed her cheek - Jaan are you angry on me.

Ishita - Raman I told you it's okay.

Raman - Jaan I am saying sorry for this.
He spoke looking down.

She looked at their position and realized she was lying without her clothes.

Raman - I m sorry Ish..

She stopped him and closed his mouth with hers. He was shocked by her sudden reaction.

She broke first - Raman you don't have to say sorry. You are my husband. You have full right on me.

Raman smiled and hugged her tightly resting his face in crook of her neck.

Raman - I am sorry Jaan. I should not have shouted on you.

Ishita was caressing his back.

Raman - Last night I died every min thinking I lost you. You left saying you will never come back. Ishita I am warning you don't you dare say that again.

Ishita pouted - You are again scolding me

Raman smiled - Jaan I am not scolding. I am just concerned for you.

Ishita - Hmm... But Raman What about my ice cream.

He raised his head and looked at her in disbelief.

He shook his head smiling - Ishita what am I going to do with you.

Ishita looked at him cutely - What Raman . Why are you smiling?

Raman - Nothing jaan. You were shivering last night. And now you want to eat ice cream. Unbelievable. Have your medicines first.

Ishita - But Raman

Raman with stern voice - Ishita.

Ishita - Okay but we will have it in lunch. Promise

Raman - We will think about it.

He helped her freshen up and fed her breakfast with his hand. He then gave her medicines and called doctor for reassurance.

Doctor - Mr Bhalla . Your wife is perfectly okay now.

He looked at Ishita - Mrs Bhalla I must say your husband loves you a lot.

She smiled and looked at him lovingly - I know doctor

Doctor left after assuring him and giving her medicines.

Raman was caressing her head - Jaan Rest for some time.

Ishita - Raman I am fine now. Let's go out for walk. I am bored here.

Raman - No way. Ishita we are not going out today. You are resting here whole day. That's final.

Ishita - How rude
She spoke making faces.


Raman smiled - Jaan It's for you I am saying.

Ishita - I want to talk to Maa. I will complain her about you not taking me out.

Raman - Ok .Do that. What will you say her? That I am not taking you out of our room on our honeymoon.
He winked saying that.

Ishita opened her mouth in perfect 'o' - Shameless

She blushed looking down while he embraced her in his arms.

Precap - 2 years leap ...Talli Ishita ...


NEXT PART


Edited by ruhi_ishra - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Sapna...It was a beautiful update dear...
I loved it to the core...
Loved their scene in the flight...

"Raman closed her eyes with his hand -
Sleep jaan. Because I have no plan of
letting you sleep there also."
Haahaaa...he is too naughty yaar...

Enjoyed their outing in singapore...written
very well...

Phir entry mari mani ne ...jise dekh
Raman ko jealousy feel hone lagi...but I
loved this jealous kumar yaar...jealousy
bhi badi kam ki cheez hai ...jaise ke Ishra
ke beech hui...pehle takrar phir dher sara
pyaar...
Yaar doctor bhi kya sahi idea dekar gaya...
too good...

I loved him even more when he called her
baccha...
Loved their morning scene...

"Nothing jaan. You were shivering last night.
And now you want to eat ice cream.
Unbelievable. "
Don't worry Mr Bhalla aap hona Ishita ko
sardi se bachane ke liye...haahaahaaa

Precap seems very very interesting dear...talli
Ishita ...kuch naughty naughty sa ho jaaye...
Plzzz Update soon ...

Edited by riYa09guPta - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
aweome
how can raman scream on her
but end is good
update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Raman so jealous. Nice. Mani poor you
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice
cute Ishra moments. Raman's possessivnous,l always
like this side of raman.
continue waiting.😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update and nice ending... Precap 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
Gud dat Mani matter didn't create misunderstanding b/w dem...
It was NYC updte...
Lol wats d precap

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