SWASAN TS....O' SANAM TERE HO GAYE HUM (UPDATED)

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This story on based about Swara's confession & regain sanskaar's trust back on her.

My story is start with the party scene which is held on Ragini's victory as per Ragini but swara have a plan to destroy Ragini's evil plan & saved their hubby hardcore earned business from Ragini.

This OS not about DP's ex & alll. I am not stretching the Ragini's

At the tym of deal signature.

Ragini: papaji, 8 baj gye hain. Pls sign the papers so ki hum abb iss company pr raj kr sake.

DP sign the papers. But jaise hi Ragini papers pr sign krne lgti h tabhi all the guest heard a voice "Ruko"

All r looking the entrance of MM. some cops with lady police is there.

MM wasis are scared ki kahin ye RAgini or kakisa ki koi nai chaal to nhi h. ab jb sab inke naam pr kr hi rahe h to fir ye dadi poti ka kaunsa naya natak h.

Cops come to Ragini.

Cops: sorry Mrs. Ragini. Aap ye sign nhi kr sakti. There is arrest warrant against u.

Ragini & dadi shocked & MM wasis surprised ki ye kya hua????

Ragini: aap jante h inspector aap kisse baat kr rahe h???? aur huamara jurm kya h jo aap hume arrest krne aaye h.

Swara: inhe maine bulaya h ragini. Tumhare gunahon ki list bahut lambi h. agr me sabka hisab krne lgi na to bahut samay barbad ho jayega. But let me clear to u one thing ki tumne mujhe 2 baar jaan se marne ki koshish ki h & I filed FIR against u to attempt to murder for twice me & Kidnapped own mother with the help of dadi. & sanskaar also filed his FIR (molestation case of ragini)

Ragini: swara tumhare pass koi sabot nhi h ki maine tumhe maarne ki koshish ki h.

Swara: o really. Then swara played the CD in which Ragini confessed all her crimes. (swara seeing ragini surprised & shocked) kya hua ragini ??? tum soch rhi ho ki ye CD to tumne destroy kr dee thi fir ye kaise to dear before u destroy the CD I have already saved this CD on my Hard drive & mailed it to the commissioner.

Dadi: aye chori. Tu bawli ho gyee h ke. Ragini thaari bahan h. tu wake saath aise kaise kr sakti h?? je main nah ne doongi. Mhari ladoo ko koi na mujhhse door kr sake h.

Swara: dadi aap chinta mt kro. Aap b upni laado ka saath dene k liye jail hi jaa rahi h. mahila samiti walon ki report already hi commissioner sir ko fwd kr dee h ki aapne meri maa ko jaan se maarne ki koshis ki h & Ragini ne jb unka kidnep kiya that b aapne uska iss kidnapping mein poora poora saath diya tha.

Dadi to shekher

Dadi: shekher iss chori ka dimag kharaab ho gya h. maine pahle hi kaha thi ki inn balgalnon ka saath mat dena. Ab dekh liya. Je dono thari maa aur beti ko jail bhej rahi h.

Shekher: maa swara ne kuch galat nhi kiya h. jb aap ragini ki galat harkatoon ko support kr sakti h to swara to sahi raste pr h fir main upni iss beti ko support kyo na kru??? Aap hi batao. Ragini ne jo kuch kiya tha & jo kr rhi h kya wo sahi h???? Durga Prasad ji ne biklul sahi kaha tha ki"ye duniya ache bure dono tarah k logon se bhari hui h" agr bure k saath hum b bure ban gye to kaise rishte nibhenge. Muhe garv h swara pr ki jindagi me har kisi se dhoka khane k baad b usne upni achai nhi chodi. Wo aaj b ye kadam nhi uthati agr aap dono ne ye sb nhi kiya hota. Sorry maa, main swara k har faisle mein uske saath hoon.

Dadi: ye tu kya kaha raha h shekher. Ragini b thari beti h. usse itni badi saja na de.

Shekr: maa ye saja usse nhi, mujhe mil rahi h ki bin maa ki bachi ki aapne aisee parvarish ki ki usse aaj kis mod pr lakr khada kr diya h.

Shomi: shekher, pls ek baar or soch lo. Hum milkr koi rasta nikalenge na pls.

Shekher: nhi ab kuch nhi ho sakta mishit. Ragini ko sudhrne ke sabne bahut moke diye. Pr ab nhi.

Pls inspector aap inn donolo yaha se le ja sakte h. lady constable arrest the both ladies.

DP to swara: beta humne na jaane kaunse ache karm kiye the jo ki tum humari jindagi me aayee. & humare pariwaar k liye ye sab kiya.

Swara : bade papa ye mera b to parivaar h. & maine aapse vaada kiya than a ki main sab thik kr doongi. Aapne mujhe hamesha upni beti maana h to ek beti kaise upne pita ko bebus aur haara hua dekh sakti h. ye sab maine upne pita k liye hi to kiya h na.

She touches his feet & DP hugged her & put his blessing hand on her fore head.

DP to shomi: sharmistha ji humne pahle b kaha tha aur aaj fir kah rahe h ki aapne sach mein swara ko bahut achi parvarish dee h. hum sach mein bahut kismet wale h jo aapne upni beti hume dee. Ab hum nishchint h ki swara hamesha iss parivaar ko baandh kr rakhegi.

DP to sanskaar: sanskar beta, bahut achi kismat h tumhari jo swara tumhari patni h. hume poora yakin h jindagi k har har ache bure samay mein ye tumhara saath kbi nhi chodegi. Ye ek heera h & iski hamesha kadr karna.

Precap: swara cleared sanskaar's MU & confess her love to him


pls guys shares ur view so i can update the next final part

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In the late evening swara comes to guest room to talk with sanskaar along with divorce papers. Who was stand near the window.

Swara: sanskaar, tum thik ho?? Mujhe tumse bahut jruri baat krni thi.

Sanskaar (in angry look): tum chati kya ho swara?? Maine tumse kaha tha na ki ab ki baar agr tum wapsi krogi to mujhe lekr ya humare rishte ko lekr krna pr nhi tumhe to mahaan banne ka shok h na. ho gya na tumhara mission complete. Ab kya bolne ko raha gya h?? sab kuch to clear ho chukka h. friendship maine finish kr dee & iss shaadi ko to tumne kbi kuch maana hi nhi tha. Hamesha se hi tumhare liye ye ek jabardasti ka rishta tha. To ab kis "HAQ" se tum wapis aayee thi.

Swra (with Tashan) : sanskaar tumhara ho gya?? Nikal lee upne dil ki bhadas ya abi b kuch or bolna raha gya h??? agr nhi to main upni baat complete kru?? May i??

Sanskaar: ab kya rah gya h kuch kahne sunane ko swara?? Jo tum chati thi wo main tumhe de to raha ho. Pls I am requesting u ki inn divorce paper pr sign kro & chali jao iss ghar se & meri jindagi se hamesha hamesha k liye.

Swara: (with teary eyes): sanskaar kya main itni buri hoon ki tum meri taraf dekh kr baat b nhi kr sakte. Main manti hoon ki maine galti ki h tum pr shaq krke pr trust me wo intentionally nhi tha. Tum jante ho na sanskaar main kbi b jhooth nhi bolti jo mere dil mein hota h wo mein saaf saaf bata deti ho. Mera tum pr shaq krne ki wajah tum pr trust krna nhi tha balki ye the ki tum bahut jaldi upna temper loose kr dete ho & jb sb baatein samne aayee to mujhe lga ki kahin tumne ragini ko sabak sikhane k liye to ye sab nhi kiya na. Mujhe takleef na pahunche iske liye pahle b to tumne laksh ko kidnep kiya tha, jisse ki ragini upna jurm kabool kr le. Bus iss baar b mujhe yahi lga ki kahin tum meri wajah se kisi musibat na fans jao & mujhe poora sach bata do. Main tumhe nhi khona chati thi sanskaar.upne ek ache & sache dost ko. Tum mano ya na mano tum pr shaq krne ka yahi ek kaaran tha.

Tum aise kaise soch sakte ho ki jis insaan ne meri jindagi me sab kuch sahi kiya, meri jindagi k sabse tough tym mein mera saath diya usse kaise kisi musibat mein fansa hua dekh sakti ho.

Sanskaar iss baar mein tumhare liye hi yahan aayee ho. Pls trust me. Kya meri galti itni badi h ki main ek or moka b deserve nhi krti.pls mujhse aise munh mat modo.

Sanskaar (being so rude): swara iss baar main tumhari baton me nhi aane wala. Ab mujh mein itni himat nhi h ki mein roj mar mar k jiyon so pls upna ye rona dhona band kro & divorce paper pr sign kro aur yaha se hamesha hamesha k lye chali jao.

Swra turned him to herself.

Swara: pls look at me sanskaar kya um sach mein chate ho ki mein tumhari jindagi se chali jaon??

Sanskaar: haan. (& turned his face) Pls tum upni jindagi me wapis chali jao aur khush raho.

Swara : thik h sanskaar. Mujhe laga tha ki koi mujhe samje ya samje pr tum mjuhe samjoge. Pyar ka ristha nhi tha humare beech pr dard ka rishta to tha na. Yaad hai tumne mujhe ek din kaha tha ki upne pyar ko dard dekr, dukh dekr tum khush kaise rah sakte ho to ek baat batao ki main upne pyar ko, upne sanskaar ko dukhi krke khush kaise rah sakti hoon. mana maine bahut badi galti ki hai or iss galti ki saza tum mujhe upne aap se door rakh kr dena chate ho to thik h. mujhe wo saza manjoor h.anyways. Galti maine ki h to upne pyar se door rahne ki saja b to mujhe hi milegi. Pahle iss pyar ko mahsoos nhi kiya pr jb mahsoos kiya tb tk bahut der bahut der kr dee maine.Pr ek baat ache se sun lo Mr. Sanskaar Maheshwari...

"ki main inn divorce paper pr kbi b sign nhi krungi. Na aaj & na hi kal. Tum azad hona chate ho na mujhse to thik h main tumhe azad krti hon. pr main zindagi bhar "Mrs. SWARA SANSKAAR MAHESWARI " ban krhi jiyoongi. Maana ki pyar hasil nhi kiya jaata paya jaata h. aur janti hoon aaj maine mera pyar hamesha k liye kho diya h. Ho sake to mujhe maaf kr dena. Ab kbi b main tumhari pareshani ka karan nhi banoogi. She put the divorce paper on table & goes from there with teary eyes.

Sanskaar swara ke munh se ye sab baatein sunkr chonk gya ki she confessed she has feeling for me. She loves me. & mein stupidusse bolne ka moka b nhi de rha. Kya galat kaha usne "sahi hi to h. main usse lekr jyada hi to possessive ho. Nhi chata ki use koi gum, koi takleef milejindagi me. Agr mere loose temper ki wajah se usne MU kr liya to koi badi baat nhi thi. Mujhe b to uski condition samjni chahiye thi n a. jis ladki ne mujhe poori tarah se badal diya, mujhe mere parivaar se mila diya. Usse main galat kaise samj sakta hoon. Galti to meri b ha na. oho shittt. She is in love with me. Yes she accepted. Oho god ye maine kya kr diya.He turns to talk swara but see ki swara wahan se chali gayee.

Then he looked the bloody divorce paper on the table & tears that bloody paper & goes to his sorry their bed room to talk with his love, his swara.

She was not in the room even not in the washroom. Usne swara ko sab jagah dekha. Kitchen, garden but she was not there at all.

Sanskaar: itni raat ko kahan chali gayee. Kya jrurt thi usse itna hurt krne ki. Tu janta h na ki swara bahut jaldi se upne dil ki baat nhi kah paati. Wo rishte nibhane me kitna viswas rakhti h. He become panic & thought ki Badi ke siwa to wo kahin nhi ja sakti.

Sanskaar called shomi.

Shomi: haan sanskaar bolo beta. Kya hua?? sab thik to h na???

Isse pahle ki sanskaar koi jawab deta . swara hugged her mother & crrying badlyg. Shomi put down the phone & forget to disconnect the call.

Shomi: swara kya hua beta??? Itna ro kyon rahi ho.

Swara (chocked): maa maine sanskaar ko upne pyar ka viswas nhi dila payee. He hates me maa. Maine bahut koshish ki pr maa main haar gayee. Main bahut buri ho maa. Maine upna pyar fir kho diya. Ab meri yahi saja h ki mein upne sanskaar se jindagi bhr k liye door raho. Wo meri shakl b nhi dekhna chata.

Shomi trying to pacify her but she can't. due to much stress & pain she become unconscious. Sanskaar feels restless to hear chocking cry of his life. He disconnects the call & rushed for the badi.

When he reached there he saw a doctr comes from gadodia house. He asked to doctr ki what happen.

Dr: nothing serious. Jyada stress & sadme k kaaran wo behosh ho gyee h. maine injection de diya h. subah tk hosh aa jayega. Fikr ki koi baat nhi h.

He rushed to swara's room. shomi sees him

Shomi: beta bahar kyo kahde ho?? Ander aa jao. Tumhara b ghar h.

Sanskaar: maa I m sorry. Shomi: kis liye beta

Sanskaar: maa swara ki iss halat ka jimedaar main hoon. Maine usse bahut hurt kiya.

Shomi: nhi beta. Aisa kuch nhi h. main tum dono ko bahut ache tarah se janti hoon. Tum dono chah kr b ek doosre ko hurt nhi kr sakte. Tumhara rista hi kuch aisa h. pr beta ek baat jo main swara ko kahti ho wo tumse b kahoongi ki pati patni ka rista khatta mitha hota h. jo unke pyar ko banaye rakhne k liye bahut jruri hota h. bus khatte mithe ka balnce barabar hona chahiye.

Aur ek baat beta ye baat to main bahut pahle se hi janti thi ki swara tumhare liye sirf dost nhi h balki dost se badkar h. tum cha kr b usse kbi koi takleef nhi de sakte. Aur yahi baat swara b feel kr rhi h ki tumse uska rishta sirf dosti ka nhi h balki usse kahin badkr h pr ye baat wo tumse kah nhi pa rhi h. pr mujhe viswas h ki tumhara pyar usse majboor kr dega ki wo tumse upne pyar ka izhaar kr degi.

Sanskaar shomi ko chonk kr dekhta h.

Sanskaar: maa ye aap kya kah rahi h???

Shomi: Maa ho tum dono ki. Upne bachon k dil ki baat maa nhi janegi to aur kaun janega J

Sanskaar: thanks maa. Maa agr aapko aitraj na ho to kya main swara k pass mein ruk sakta ho. Aap pls jakr aaram kijiye.

Shomi (smiles): ye b koi poochne ki baat h. of course pati hone k naate itna "HAQ" to banta h ki upni bimar patni ki sewa kro. Thik h tum b aaram kr lo. Agr kisi cheej ki jrurt ho to bata dena.

Sanskaar smiles. Sanskaar took her face in his palm & put a fore head kiss.

Sanskaar: sorry swara, tumhe hurt nhi krna chata tha balki upne aapko ko hurt hone se bachna chata tha kyoki tumhare bina jindagi jindagi nhi rahegi. Aur mujhe ye viswas tha ki tum mere pyar ko kbi b accept nhi krogi.

Sanskaar sits beside her & take her hand in his palm & fall asleep.

At mid night. Swara awake up to drink water but due to weakness she won't be able to stand. Usse lga ki maa uske saath hi so rhi h. she said : maa paani peena h.

Sanskaar wake up & put on the side lamp. She was surprised to see sanskaar beside herself & get up.

Swara: sanskaar tum yahan kaise??? I mean tum kb aaye???

Sanskaar (gives her water): jb tum behosh ho gayee thi.

Swara: sorry!!! Dekho naa maine fir tumhe pareshan kr diya. Upna ek promise b nhi nibha payee. Main thik hoon tum jao ghr jakr aaram kro. Ajnabiyoon k liye itna pareshan hone ki jrurt nhi h. Maine tumhe azad kr diya h. Tum upni jindagi me aage bad sakte ho. Tum ek achi life deserve krte ho. Kya pata jindagi k kisi mod pr tumhe koi aisa mil jaaye jiske saath tum upni poori jindagi khushi khushi jee sako.Yakeen mano main kbi b tumhari khusshiyoon ke aage nhi aaongi na hi kbi upna haq jataongi but divorce paper sign nhi krungi. Tum iss rishte se poori tarah se azad ho.

& turned her face. Wo nhi chati thi ki wo ab sanskaar k samne kamjor pade. Bhale hi usse galti hui & wo uss galti ki saja b bukhtegi jindagi bhar sanskaar se door rah kr. Pr ab aur sanskaar ko mushkil mein nhi dalegi.

Sanskaar pulled her to himself & put his hand on her shoulders. Sanskaar gives her naughty look & swara chup chap sir jhuka kr khadi rahi.

Sanskaar: to tum divorce paper sign nhi krogi??? Swara noded " no". & tears roll down from her eyes.

Sanskaar cupped her face & suck the tear drop from her life's face.

Sanskaar: to tum mujhe azad krna chati ho???? Swara noded "yes". He kissed her right cheek.

Sanskaar: to tum kbi b mujh pr upna haq nhi jataogi?? Swara noded "no". He kissed her left cheek.

Sanskaar : to iska matlb ye hua ki hum jindagi bhar dost hi bane rahenge???

Swara : Mein janti ho ki maine bahut galat kiya h tumhare saath & iss sabke baad b agr tum mujhe upna dost banana layak samjte ho to.

Sanskaar: aur agr main kahu ki mujhe ye dosti nhi chahiye to???

Swara : fir to ye meri badkismati h ki maine meri galti ki wajah se upne pyar k saath saath ek dost ko b kho diya.

Sanskaar (Put his finger on her lips): shhh. Agr main ye kahu ki mujhe meri patni chahiye to.

Swara looking surprisingly to sanskaar. Sanskaar comes to very close near swara & whisper her ears.

Sanskaar: Meri jaan ko satane ka "HAQ" sirf mera h shona. Ye "HAQ" to maine tumko b nhi diya ki tum meri jaan ki jindagi se khelo.

Swara starts crying badly & sanskaar hugged her & console her.

Sanskaar: Tumne kaise soch liya ki main tumse nafrt kr sakta ho shone.Meri jaan to tumme basti h. haan gussa tha tumse pr naraaz nhi. Pls mujhe maaf kr do. Maaine tumhe samjne main galti ki.

Swara hugged him tightly & sobbed.

Sanskaar took off her face & intense eyelock. He put a forehead kiss.

Swara do the same & place a forehead kiss to him.

Sanskaar kissed on right cheek then left cheek. Swara does the same & hide her face on his chest with blushing.

Sanskaar took off her face & she closed her eyes. Sanskaar admire her beauty . swara's lips trembling.

The distance between them was two short. Sanskaar put his hands on her waist & her hands on his shoulders.

Sanskaar gives a pack on her lips. He saw a mole on the tip of her lower lips which makes her lips very sexy. He sucked that mole gently & took her lips in his and sucked them with all his love. His tongue probed inside her mouth and found her tongue and they intertwined with each other.

After having a long kiss they parted away. Swara was blushing & hide her face in his chest & place a soft kiss on his chest.

Both are standing in each other arms with peacefully.

Edited by manisha.8148 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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chalo Dadi Poti ka kam to tamam hua
love Swara and Durga Parsad moments and love to se Shekhar sporting Swara
Now Patni g wooing Pati g
waiting for Swara's confeesion and their romance😳☺️
plz PM me next part
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow very nice :)

Eagerly waiting for swara confession n their romance please update soon


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Wow...!bahut acha that...kaash isa serial may hota tho...bhut acha hota...na Shekar is present in party not this won't happen...continue soon...😊
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awesome story dear...pls update the next part soon ..&& pm me if u can
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Wow... Nice start update more soon
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wow...this one is nice...far better than the ongoing track...dadi n her laddo both deserve jell..
plzz continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice part
This is what we wanted to happen in the serial...
Pls continue soon and pm if possible
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i wish ye show mw v dekhne milti..
ab amazingly written
waiting fr nxt part

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