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Lekha Ishwar

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Posted: 10 years ago

Hi For those who have no clue who I am I am Lekha an aspiring writer & I never thought I would say this but I wanted to pen down a RizReet centric story because Jhan (daydreamers) was a major Inspiration for me writing this!!

Title inspired by a piece of poetry I was Attempting to write today but failed miserably😆 apart from the title that is 🤢

Please don't get offended if I don't tease you because this piece is a work in progress {literally just started writing it) & I want to surprise you.

A little clarification :- Influenced by the show & RizReet moments & CHEMISTRY but I will be taking creative liberties & will introduce minor characters whenever I need to

hopefully you will not throw joote chappals😳

but if you are interested in seeing my writing go here

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4507448

keep an eye out!!

Lekha

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Lekha Ishwar

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Ok I know I said I would not tease but I could not help

(Original poetry by me) (currently Incomplete)

Let me love your heart & FILL YOU WITH feelings FROM MY REALITY

if you Let me love your heart I will heal all the raw scars

taking away the hurt & pain

If you let me love your heart I will let you love me too

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Teaser For Chapter 1

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Lekha Ishwar

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Teaser Just Because 😆

There were shots there was blood & lots of screaming. A hazy image of a woman who was standing with her back facing a man her falling into a man's arms falling limp after being shot in her spine having a bullet lodged in her vertebral section. The nightmares were unending.

Every night the nightmares kept Aditi Farooqui awake for the past 7 years & since she couldn't sleep she woke up quietly in order to not disturb her sisters the twins Zara & Sanam it was about 4:00 am in the morning in New York City way too early for some but for Aditi it was routine She is constantly in pain

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daydreamers

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Posted: 10 years ago

Lekha 😳

Am overwhelmed 😊

Kya kahu words will fail re... Ek badi jhappi...

And apna ss likhte likhte pls duaa karo that I complete my FF 😆

Am super late in updating everything always... 😆

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -Destiny-

Ok I know I said I would not tease but I could not help

(Original poetry by me) (currently Incomplete)

Let me love your heart & FILL YOU WITH feelings FROM MY REALITY
if you Let me love your heart I will heal all the raw scars
taking away the hurt & pain
If you let me love your heart I will let you love me too

Index😳

Lekha its awesome re... 👏

May I try completing this piece? It would be my version of ur work... 😆. Yahi par post karungi... U write ur version... Me ek extra likhti 😆

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Lekha Ishwar

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Posted: 10 years ago

Jhan Do It Do it Do it Do it

I won't mind seeing it I won't mind seeing it!!

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Originally posted by: daydreamers
Lekha😳
Am overwhelmed😊

Kya kahu words will fail re... Ek badi jhappi...

And apna ss likhte likhte pls duaa karo that I complete my FF😆

Am super late in updating everything always...😆

haha I get what you mean. I'm somewhat a perfectionist when it comes to writing. That's the reason I hesitate so much when it comes to sharing my writing with others. you won't actually believe that if all goes well with this I'll try and get it published as a novel sometime. Hopefully all goes well and you guys will love what I'm writing.

Sometimes what I pen down is a state of my heart. I may look simple and uncomplicated to you guys but a lot of the times it's the inner turmoil within me that makes me feel the emotions of my character. One chotu advice to you. Let your emotions and thoughts mesh together. It should make it so much easier to write. 😳

I'm sorry I'm rambling so much. I should shut up and finish writing.

Take care.
Lee

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Originally posted by: -Destiny-
haha I get what you mean. I'm somewhat a perfectionist when it comes to writing. That's the reason I hesitate so much when it comes to sharing my writing with others. you won't actually believe that if all goes well with this I'll try and get it published as a novel sometime. Hopefully all goes well and you guys will love what I'm writing.

Sometimes what I pen down is a state of my heart. I may look simple and uncomplicated to you guys but a lot of the times it's the inner turmoil within me that makes me feel the emotions of my character. One chotu advice to you. Let your emotions and thoughts mesh together. It should make it so much easier to write. 😳

I'm sorry I'm rambling so much. I should shut up and finish writing.

Take care.
Lee

Yaar don't be sorry ab 😉 and I feel so connected to u... I don't know u but still... Its smthn magical...

Perfectionism 😃 great yaar...

Vo pata nahi mere andar kab ayega 😆

I loved the lines of ur poetry... Likh vo pls.. I would love reading it...

Har artist ka yahi sapna hota h ki vo uski art ko profession banaye... Waqt waqt ki baat hai... My first aim was ye dekhna ki kya mein likh sakti hu? Agar haan, toh kitna bura likh sakti hu? 😆

Ssly jitna shayad me kisi show k cv's ko criticize Karti hoon usse kahi jyada mein khud ko Karti hu... 😆

Writing for me is a process.. An unending process... Apna kaam share karna is again individual choice... But for me it gives me a sense of enlightenment... Ek improve karne ka chance may be... If I show my work to graduates or PhD holders in arts or any language hazaron galtiyaan niklengi.. That I know 😆

End of the day am a last year engg student jo shayad iske baad MBA karke kisi site par cement bags count kar rahi hogi, bldg supervise kar rahi hogi... 😆

So technically mujhe itni knowledge nahi h what is right and what is wrong in terms of pure language...

Only time shall tell where it will take my interest...

By writing and sharing maybe am making a network of my own...

I still don't know who shall publish my novel if I write one or who shall hire me as a lyricist for his/her movie... 😆

I definitely have big dreams... Peanut size brain ke bade bade vichar u know 😆 maybe am preparing myself for that one thing...

One may never know shayad next year I find myself in Mumbai... Performing arts, writing has somewhere become a need for me to express my repressed emotions...

Vo kehte h na saalon ki frustration... As a kid I have been very introvert, insecure and awkward individual..

P.s- le me phir shuru ho gayi 😆 ishriz naama chod ke janhavi naama chalu kar diya maine 😆 ppl will kill me here 😆