New IshMan SS: Agar Tum Saath Ho (update pg 2) - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: DivanIsh

finally got a PM from you

this looks really interesting

waiting to read ahead



I've been wanting to write this one since so long! Hopefully, ill get it right! I'm glad you received the PM!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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AGAR TUM SAATH HO
UMERA
13/12/15

INT. DAY. COFFEE SHOP

A YOUNG GIRL aged no more than 23; rushed to a YOUNG LAD who was busy reading a travel magazine.


ISHITA (in a cold manner)
You wanted to meet?

RAMAN (still busy with his MAGAZINE)
Samajh lo shayad ek aakhri baar...

ISHITA (frustrated at RAMAN'S lack of interest)
RAMAN milne mujhe tumne bulaya hai & here now that I'm trying to initiate a conversation; you're not even bothering to glance at me. I best just leave!

RAMAN (grabbing hold of her hand to stop her leaving)

ISHITA (releasing from his hand)
Yeh haq toh Raman tumne bahut pehle hi gawah diya so please jo bhi kehna hai; distance maintain karke hi kaho...



RAMAN (irritated at her coldness, loosened his hold; letting go)

ISHITA tujhe kyun yeh misconception ho gayi hai that tujhse door hoke mein khush reh paaonga. Yaar tujhse zyaada dard mujhe mehsoos hoga! Bhale you understand or you don't; I love you more than you can even deem it possible! I really love you alot but ...

Dekh yahan pe koi emotional drama nahi create karte hain. Simple hai naa... tu khushi se wahan jaana chahta hai & I'm cool. Meri tension-vention lene ki zaroorat nahi hai!

Teri yahi taqleef toh mein kam karna chahta hoon. I wanna see that smile adorn your lips yaar. Please aapne heart mein mere liye koi bitterness math rakhna ...

Tu "I love you" kehdega & mera heart melt hojayega! Seriously? Accept kar lena; you yourself ended things... deal with it... how it is!



Saying so; she strode out...
Edited by Badtameez_Dil_1 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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UPDATED ON PAGE 2; HAVE A READ & PLEASE LEAVE YOUR REVIEWS BEHIND. THANKS!
Edited by Badtameez_Dil_1 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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IF YOU BELIEVE THE UPDATE IS CAPABLE ENOUGH; LEAVE YOUR FEEDBACK BEHIND. THANKS!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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intersting start
wating for 1 part
update soon

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