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Well guyzz dis is my 2nd piece of writing..I am not soo gud at writing but ive put down a mere thought aftr watching yestrdays episode...so here it goes..
Dhaani was luking away frm viplav..
V: iss ka matlab jab hum behosh the..tumne ek jawaan ladke ka behosh hone ka faida uthakar uska kapde. ...ram ram ram..agar dulaari mai ko patha chalega tho vo kya sochegi...
D: achha... and a tub of water goes splashing on viplav...dhaani leaves nd viplav stands smiling.
viplav enters the room shivering a little while dhaani was keeping clothes for viplav on de bed...
D: hume tumse Kuch kehna hai..
V: haan boliye rajkumari ji. .
D: umm...hume maaf kardo..humne tumhe galat samjhdiya...uss din
V: kis din??
D: vo...vo...us din jab tumne humari jaan bachaya tha mandir mein aur humne tumhe bohot kuch kehdiya..hume maaf kardo..
V: koi baat nahi rajkumari ji..ab to tumhe samaj mein aaya hoga ki ye sab itni aasan nahi tha karne ke liye..agar kisi ki jaan bachana ho tho ye sab karna padtha hai..ab mujhe kapde pehen ne ke liye madad karoge yaaa issi tarah mujhe bina kapdon ki. ...
D: chal betho
she made him sit and started to help him wear the kurta..viplav wasnt comfortable while sitting nd wearing de dress so he stood up..he stumbles nd she holds him by catching him by his bare waist as his kurta wasnt fully down on him..dey were so close that their chests were sticking to each...both were caught in an intense eyelock...nd the distance between their lips wasnt too far... dhaani realized in what position they were she broke de eye lock nd turned away...an awkward silence prevailed among them for a few minutes. .
Viplav sat on de bed pulled up his pants up to his knees nd gets up...
V: dhaani mujhe tumhari kandhe ki zaroorat hai.
D: kya??
V: vo mujhe support chahiye pant ko pehen ne ke liye..
Dhaani turns nd viplav holds her shoulders nd wears de pant...
V: shukriya..
Dhaani makes him lie on de bed. .
D: tum ruko hum tumhare liye khaana lekar aate hain.
Just then sarla kaki enters with a tray in her hand.
S: ye khaana tum dono ke liye hain khaalo aur araam karo. .
she leaves shutting the door. .
Dhaani takes the tray..
D: mu kholo
viplav was astonished by de act of hers nd opens his mouth nd she feeds him...he keeps on staring at her.
D: aise ghoor kyun rahe ho?
V: rakshas ki itni madad...aur tum mujhe khud khaana kila rahi ho..wah kya baat hai meri banaras ki dhaani..
D: jab hume zaroorat thi to tumne hamaari madad ki ab jab tumhe zaroorat hai hume tho madad karni padegi na. .
Viplav takes a morsel of food in his hand. ..
D: ye tum kya kar rahe ho. ..
Dhaani's mouth is open nd viplav feeds her..
V: tumhe khaana kila raha hoon...
D: hume bhook nahi hai...
V: tum apni aap ko superwoman samjtiho kya... agar tum khaana nahi karoge tho tum bhi bimaar padjaoge...agar tum bimaar padgayi to tum apne pati ka khayal kaise rakhoge?
D: tum mere pati nahi ho...
V: lekin kaki ko to lagta hai hum tumhare pati hai...
D: iss ka matlab ye nahi ki tum meri pati nahi banjaoge...
V: teek hai baba mazaak kar raha tha gusse mat ho. Waise tum itni gusse mein sherni dikhti ho...
Dhaani glares at him and she finishes feeding viplav...
dhaani wipes his lips nd gives him water..a drop runs down his neck...she takes her duppata..
D: tum paani bhi theek se pee nahi sakthi ...she traces her duppata down to his neck. they steal glances...
Dhaani gets up to leave then suddenly she stops it was lyk sumone held her dupatta . She turns and luks nd sees that her duppatta was stuck in the button of viplav's kurta. Dhaani slowly goes nd sits by his side..she gets on removing her duppata while viplav keeps on staring at her...she feels that he is staring at her...when she luks at him she melts in his eyes 😳 finaly she removes her duppata..
D: ab tum so jao...
V: apne pati ko sulaoge nahi...
D: bakhwaas band karo VIPLAV..
V: tumne mujhe viplav kehkar bulaya...waisa mera naam tumhare mu se acha lagta hai. Aaj se tum hume viplav kehna vakeel babu nahi ..
D: teek hai ab tum so jao... she covers him wid de blanket and sits by his side...Viplav dozes of to sleep. Dhaani stares at a sleeping viplav..she caresses his head and a faint smile appears on his face, Dhaani says hum tumhe kuch nahi hone denge Viplav kuch nahi...and she softly places her hand on his face and Viplav turns and catches hold of her hand close to his heart...looking at dis Dhaani smiles and dozes of to sleep leaning on de bed...
It was like They both felt complete with each other... 😊
So dear ppl I hope u lyk it...and pls leave ur comments...
Dhaani was luking away frm viplav..
V: iss ka matlab jab hum behosh the..tumne ek jawaan ladke ka behosh hone ka faida uthakar uska kapde. ...ram ram ram..agar dulaari mai ko patha chalega tho vo kya sochegi...
D: achha... and a tub of water goes splashing on viplav...dhaani leaves nd viplav stands smiling.
viplav enters the room shivering a little while dhaani was keeping clothes for viplav on de bed...
D: hume tumse Kuch kehna hai..
V: haan boliye rajkumari ji. .
D: umm...hume maaf kardo..humne tumhe galat samjhdiya...uss din
V: kis din??
D: vo...vo...us din jab tumne humari jaan bachaya tha mandir mein aur humne tumhe bohot kuch kehdiya..hume maaf kardo..
V: koi baat nahi rajkumari ji..ab to tumhe samaj mein aaya hoga ki ye sab itni aasan nahi tha karne ke liye..agar kisi ki jaan bachana ho tho ye sab karna padtha hai..ab mujhe kapde pehen ne ke liye madad karoge yaaa issi tarah mujhe bina kapdon ki. ...
D: chal betho
she made him sit and started to help him wear the kurta..viplav wasnt comfortable while sitting nd wearing de dress so he stood up..he stumbles nd she holds him by catching him by his bare waist as his kurta wasnt fully down on him..dey were so close that their chests were sticking to each...both were caught in an intense eyelock...nd the distance between their lips wasnt too far... dhaani realized in what position they were she broke de eye lock nd turned away...an awkward silence prevailed among them for a few minutes. .
Viplav sat on de bed pulled up his pants up to his knees nd gets up...
V: dhaani mujhe tumhari kandhe ki zaroorat hai.
D: kya??
V: vo mujhe support chahiye pant ko pehen ne ke liye..
Dhaani turns nd viplav holds her shoulders nd wears de pant...
V: shukriya..
Dhaani makes him lie on de bed. .
D: tum ruko hum tumhare liye khaana lekar aate hain.
Just then sarla kaki enters with a tray in her hand.
S: ye khaana tum dono ke liye hain khaalo aur araam karo. .
she leaves shutting the door. .
Dhaani takes the tray..
D: mu kholo
viplav was astonished by de act of hers nd opens his mouth nd she feeds him...he keeps on staring at her.
D: aise ghoor kyun rahe ho?
V: rakshas ki itni madad...aur tum mujhe khud khaana kila rahi ho..wah kya baat hai meri banaras ki dhaani..
D: jab hume zaroorat thi to tumne hamaari madad ki ab jab tumhe zaroorat hai hume tho madad karni padegi na. .
Viplav takes a morsel of food in his hand. ..
D: ye tum kya kar rahe ho. ..
Dhaani's mouth is open nd viplav feeds her..
V: tumhe khaana kila raha hoon...
D: hume bhook nahi hai...
V: tum apni aap ko superwoman samjtiho kya... agar tum khaana nahi karoge tho tum bhi bimaar padjaoge...agar tum bimaar padgayi to tum apne pati ka khayal kaise rakhoge?
D: tum mere pati nahi ho...
V: lekin kaki ko to lagta hai hum tumhare pati hai...
D: iss ka matlab ye nahi ki tum meri pati nahi banjaoge...
V: teek hai baba mazaak kar raha tha gusse mat ho. Waise tum itni gusse mein sherni dikhti ho...
Dhaani glares at him and she finishes feeding viplav...
dhaani wipes his lips nd gives him water..a drop runs down his neck...she takes her duppata..
D: tum paani bhi theek se pee nahi sakthi ...she traces her duppata down to his neck. they steal glances...
Dhaani gets up to leave then suddenly she stops it was lyk sumone held her dupatta . She turns and luks nd sees that her duppatta was stuck in the button of viplav's kurta. Dhaani slowly goes nd sits by his side..she gets on removing her duppata while viplav keeps on staring at her...she feels that he is staring at her...when she luks at him she melts in his eyes 😳 finaly she removes her duppata..
D: ab tum so jao...
V: apne pati ko sulaoge nahi...
D: bakhwaas band karo VIPLAV..
V: tumne mujhe viplav kehkar bulaya...waisa mera naam tumhare mu se acha lagta hai. Aaj se tum hume viplav kehna vakeel babu nahi ..
D: teek hai ab tum so jao... she covers him wid de blanket and sits by his side...Viplav dozes of to sleep. Dhaani stares at a sleeping viplav..she caresses his head and a faint smile appears on his face, Dhaani says hum tumhe kuch nahi hone denge Viplav kuch nahi...and she softly places her hand on his face and Viplav turns and catches hold of her hand close to his heart...looking at dis Dhaani smiles and dozes of to sleep leaning on de bed...
It was like They both felt complete with each other... 😊
So dear ppl I hope u lyk it...and pls leave ur comments...
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