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Posted: 9 years ago
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Well .. Well .. Well .. I'm here again 😃

Today .. it's a very special occasion ..


Warning : Please take NOTE .. This is a SENSITIVE OS and is for appropriate audience only .. Please stay away if you're not comfortable.. Sensitive topics related to terrorism, religion, peace discussed here ..


December 8, 2014
8:24 PM


The door bell rings.
Bell rings again ..
Again ...

" Ragini, Darwaza kholo .. Koi hai ghar pe ?"

After some time .. A woman in her mid forties dressed in a pale-white saree open the door.

"Itni time kyuun lagadi door kholene ke liye ? Kabse bell ring kar raha hoon .. Awaz de raha hoon.. Sunayi de nahin raha hai kya tumhein ? Kahan hai sab ? "

" Sorry.. Mujhe sunnai nahin diya thaa .. Ghar mein koi hai nahin.. Bacche Karan Dimpy ke ghar gaye hein.. Aaj raat wohi rahenge .."


" Tumhein kya hua hai ? Itni udaas kyuun ho ?"

"Nahin .. Main theek hoon .."

" Nahin batana hai toh maat batao.. Jo tumhari marzi hai karo.. Main fresh ho ke aata hoon .. Khaana laga do .."


Nachiket freshens up .. Has a bath .. Gets into his night wear .. and reaches to the dinning.

" Ragini .. Kahan reh gayi tum ? Bohot bhookh lag raha hai .. Khaana toh laga do .. "


Time passed by .. Still he had no response from his wife.. Now Nachiket was really getting desperate .. Hungry he was.. Now this behaviour from Ragini was taking a toll on his patience.. He was getting angry ..

He goes directly to the bedroom .. and confronts her ..

"Kabse se chila raha hoon.. Tumhein sunayi nahin de raha hai ? Deaf ho gayi ho ya aaj maun vrat rakhi ho .. Not to respond to me ? Kabse bol raha hoon .. Bohot bhookh lag raha hai.. Kucch khila do .."


" Tum bula rahe the ? Sorry main sunna nahin tha.. Nachiket.. actually.. aaj kucch khaana banaya nahin hai maine .. Tumhein bola tha tum aate samay kucch khaane ko le aana .."


"Kab boli thi yeh ?"


" Bola toh tha .."


" Now enough .. Kya hua hai batao .. Yeh sab drama aur kisike saamne karna .. Definitely not mere samnne.. Aatey samay se observe kar raha hoon tumhein.. Something is wrong .. Kya hua hai ? Kissine kucch kaha hai tumse ? Bachhon ne kucch kaha ?"


"Nahin .. Kucch nahin Nachiket .. I'm fine .."

" Now you're really testing my patience ... You're making me angry .. You better start vomiting everything .. You know how bad it becomes when I lose my temper .. "


Nachiket forcefully tries to pull her hand .. Trying to take her to open space ..
Well, Nachiket never wanted to force her ..

Suddenly ..


Ragini pulls her hand from his clutches .. breaks down.. She starts crying ...


Nachiket is surprised .. Something is surely wrong ..

"Ragini .. Sorry .."


"Sorry kyun bol rahe ho ?"


"Kya hua hai Ragini .. Ro kyuun rahi ho ?"


" Bohot time se bohot saare questions have kept me occupied.. Answer kar sakte ho tum ? Tumhein toh sirf khudd se matlab hai.. Kabhi doosron ke baare mein sochhe ho ? Kya khaana nahin banayi.. Toot pade mere upar .. Nachiket kabhi socche ho Iss duniya mein KITNE log har din bhookah sote hein ? Kabhi EK bhi baar socche ho unke baare mein ? "


"Ragini, aaj aisa kya ho gaya hai tumhein ? Aise kya baatein kar rahi ho ?"


"Kucch nahin hua hai mujhe .. Just a realization.. "


"Kaisa realization ? Kya hua hai ? What are you behaving so differently today ? "

"Jaan na hai tumhein ? Himmat hai tumne to answer my questions ? Aao mere saath .."


Ragini holds his hands and pulls him towards the TV ..

Switches it ON






Massacre on the streets of Paris .. 130 people killed .. Islamic State (IS) claims responsibility ..


"Nachiket .. Yeh duniya ko kya ho gaya hai ? Kyuun insaan insaan ke jaan ke peeche pada hai ? Hai tumhein fikar iss duniyaki ? Hai koi answer tumhare paas ? Kyun hogi tumhein ? Everyone is damn greedy in this world .. This reminds me of M.K Gandhi .. "


"Iss duniya mein .. Sab log tumhare jaisa greedy hein .. They don't care for anyone else .. Had people cared for each other .. Love could have been a much better place to live in .. There would have been no terror .. "


"Tumahari lecture khatam ho gaya ? Yeh roz ki baat hai .. Nothing new .."

"Kya lecture haan ? Yeh tumhein lecture lag raha hai .. Mujhe agar pata hota.. Tum itni inhuman hoge.. Kabhi shaadi nahin karta tumse .. You don't have a heart .. Tumhare jaise ghatiya type ke log bhare hue hein iss duniya mein .. So we're in such a mess .."


"Ragini.. Kucch jyada hi bakwaas kar rahi ho .. I say .. JUST STOP .. Tumhari gyaan baantna abhi bandh karo .. JUST keep your mouth shut.. Abb meri baari hai .. "


Nachiket .. switches to another channel ..


France declares WAR on IS .. Bombs Syria..

Switches to another channel :

IS shoots dead 200 children at point blank range


" Yeh kya hai then ?
Paris ki logon ko bohot fikar hoti hai .. Sabke ke sab apni Facebook profiles .. change karke bohot mahan bann rahe hein.. Blue-White-Red everywhere ..
You think these are the people who CARE ?
They are nothing but HYPOCRITES ..
Jab same baat Syria .. Lebanon .. Nigeria .. ya Afghanistan mein hota hai.. Kitne logon ko dekhi hai tumne to STAND UP for them ? Just because it's a fancy thing to do .. Change your DP to show your support ?
This is all bullsh*t .. France ne jo decide kiya hai to BOMB Syria ..
Pata hai tumhein KITNE innocent .. poor people .. will die ..
Kabhi EK baar kisine soccha hai unn becharon ke baare mein ?
Nahin! Just because they were not fortunate enough to be born in a posh country like France ...
They have NO one to shed tears for them .. They are meant to be killed.. Iss duniye mein sirf MIGHTY logon ka chalta hai ..
No one gives a sh*t what happens to anyone else...
Yeh toh terrorism ki baat hai ..
And why define terrorism to any religion ?
Those SCOUNDRELS who think they are doing their religion GOOD by doing such things .. Chasing after their 72 Virgins in their afterlife are FOOLS .. No RELIGION preaches VIOLENCE .. It's only the FOOLS who misinterpret ...

Yeh to chodo terrorism ki baat hui ..
What about the so called gentlemen of our society ?
The huge foundations ? The BIG NGOs ? What good are they doing ? Go to poor countries of Africa to test their medicines on innocent children ? Is this being human ?

Chodo .. Ragini .. I can just go and go and go ..
This world is a very CRUEL place to live in ..
We can JUST do nothing BUT to live our time here ..
Life goes on Within Us Without Us .. "


Ragini is REALLY disturbed by all this .. She starts crying BITTERLY ..

"Ragini .. Kyun ro rahi ho .. Haan thoda kucch jyada bol diya .. But yahi toh sacchayi hain na .. Abb please stop crying .. Tum jaanti ho na main tumhari aankhon mein aansoon nahin dekh sakta hoon .. Ragini please stop.."


All his efforts to console her .. to pacify her were futile.. Nachiket had never seen his Ragini cry so bitterly .. that too in front of him..
A full hour passed away .. Still she didn't stop ..
He just didn't know what to do .. to STOP her ..

Then 😃

an idea struck him 😆

Nachiket takes out his special John Lennon Signature model Gibson J-160E ⭐️

Such a SEXY delight .. Such a SEXY piece of Sitka Spruce top and Mahogany back , sides and neck ... Rosewood fretboard .. Nachiket was instantly 'turned ON' 😆 having this SEXY guitar in his hand ..

He begins ...

As if magic struck .. Suddenly Ragini was QUIET .. She was intently listening to the strumming of his guitar.. Each word that he sung.


Imagine there's no heaven
It's easy if you try
No hell below us
Above us only sky
Imagine all the people
Living for today...

Imagine there's no countries
It isn't hard to do
Nothing to kill or die for
And no religion too
Imagine all the people
Living life in peace...

You may say I'm a dreamer
But I'm not the only one
I hope someday you'll join us
And the world will be as one

Imagine no possessions
I wonder if you can
No need for greed or hunger
A brotherhood of man
Imagine all the people
Sharing all the world...

You may say I'm a dreamer
But I'm not the only one
I hope someday you'll join us
And the world will live as one



Ragini was SO happy with this song .. She forgets everything .. Gives Nachiket and tight hug ..




Forget ... Forgive ... Live and Let Live .. Only then can this World be a really beautiful place ..

Give Peace a Chance ..



The End ...




Song Source :

Song Imagine
Artist John Winston Lennon
Year 1971


Special Mentions :


The occasion is very special .. This day in 1980 .. John Lennon was assassinated .. I'd request all of you to give a listen to this WONDERFUL Song ..


This is a special gift to Narges Di .. This was small surprise I could give you before letting you go ..
A small gift from a loving brother .. With the same hope he's always had .. He'll keep having ..



Thanks Everyone for going through this ..

Ignore the errors .. Comments will be appreciated ..

Thanks ..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Shaun bhai it's very unique you try something different this time.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I've been a long time silent reader here. Rarely do I comment.

This is something very different. Kudos to you for your efforts. You tried to explain something of great importance. Nice try. It was nice, if not that good. Most people won't like such topics.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey BM,
Truly a nicely written piece. I have to listen to this song though. 😊

You have uniquely woven the story with the reality - the present happenings. It's a reflection of how life is, for any normal couple.

I hope you continue writing more
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Santosh99

Shaun bhai it's very unique you try something different this time.


Hmm .. A bit different it definitely was .. Don't think most people will like to read such stuffs ..
Thought to give it a try ..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks ..

Glad you liked it 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nachiket_Khanna

I've been a long time silent reader here. Rarely do I comment.

This is something very different. Kudos to you for your efforts. You tried to explain something of great importance. Nice try. It was nice, if not that good. Most people won't like such topics.



WoW !

Hmm .. This was something VERY different ..

Thanks ..

Hmm.. For appropriate audience only ..

Do be here regularly 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: poetic

Hey BM,

Truly a nicely written piece. I have to listen to this song though. 😊

You have uniquely woven the story with the reality - the present happenings. It's a reflection of how life is, for any normal couple.

I hope you continue writing more


Thanks a lot Di ..

Listen to the song 😊 I've sent the link, right ? Do let me know 'there' 😉

This a one of the MOST popular songs .. Often quoted .. Often covered by many artists .. Beautiful song preaching PEACE ..

Hmm .. Just tried something different .. A brush with reality .. Day-to-day happenings ..

Hmm .. Will for sure 😊

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: poetic

Hey BM,

Truly a nicely written piece. I have to listen to this song though. 😊

You have uniquely woven the story with the reality - the present happenings. It's a reflection of how life is, for any normal couple.

I hope you continue writing more



Thanks Di 😃

Did you listen to this song ? I've sent you the link, right ? Do let me know 'there' 😉

This is one of the MOST popular songs .. Quite often quoted .. Often covered by various artists.. Beautiful song preaching PEACE ..

Hmm.. It's a bit different .. Day-to-day affairs .. A brush with reality ..

Hmm .. Sure will 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superb piece BM😊

A fantastic portrayal of fictional characters and the dark reality that we are facing these days

It truly depicts our world's situation. Keep writing😃

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