Abhigya FF: WOH HUMSAFAR THA last ch pg 76dt 9.4.16

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Nora9497

@Nora9497

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#311

Thank you so much for PM,It's an amazing update as usual but please make them live in the same place again it has been to long and make them get closer before Shalini kick Pragya out after the baby

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sanya_p

@sanya_p

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Posted: 9 years ago

#312

Hey Rose,

I'm a big fan of your writing, I read "Night to Remember" in one go.

Please update it quick, curious to know if everything is fine with the baby.

-Sanya

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1012277

Hibernated

Posted: 9 years ago

#313

Wow Rose! Read the last 3 parts in one go! You've written their emotions very nicely. Especially Abhi's in the previous part. I wish he would come and stay with Shalini and Pragya here. I feel really bad for Laxmi Mausi. :(
Thank you for the PM's. Continue soon. :)

Edited by apple123flower - 9 years ago

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Rose

@stranger2rose

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#314

Teaser

Leaning against the bonnet of the jeep abhi dialed shalini's number and drummed his idle slender fingers on it. pragya heard the cell phone ringing and looked around for shalini but she wasn't there. Through the corner of her eye she got a glimpse of the name flashing. It was him, his name started with a 'A' and at least this much English she knew.

Exact twenty days and she hadn't heard a single word from him. Rolling her eyes she attempted to ignore the call and began gathering her knitting needles along with the balls of wool.

He exhaled an audible sigh as he impatiently waited for the call to be attended. Once again she glanced towards shalini's room, the door was ajar and her cell phone was continuously ringing. Seeing his name flash again and again made her heart beat loudly inside her chest. A part of her had this strong urge to pick the phone and speak to him even if in all these days he didn't bother or care to talk to her, still she desired to hear his voice...just once. Contemplating on whether to give in to her wish or not, her fingers opened and curled back slowly. He called up several times in a day and amongst all those calls he must've asked about her from shalini, her heart could vouch for that.

Stretching her arm slowly towards the phone, she picked it up and hesitantly pressed the green button. Licking her dry lips and gulping the lump formed in her throat she said," sahab."

His jaw dropped slightly and he straightened his posture. His brows furrowed and his eyes scattered the ground aimlessly as his ears tried to believe what they had heard. With bated breath she waited to hear his voice from the other end.

" sahab" she said once more.