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poetic

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Posted: 9 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: imagine43

Arre!! Taarif hai baba..
Its you saying.. dare anyone dislike my OS!!

Still not talking 😕

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poetic

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Posted: 9 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: neiralove
In summer, she'd said maybe. In autumn, she'd said no. In winter, her eyes asked if they could try again. In spring, she said YES.

Dear God Rachna Di! This is BRILLIANT! 😊

The blossoming of their love, from coworkers, to friends, to that awkward stage somewhere in between, and finally to where she can stand in his bedroom and admire him, the flowers blooming as they begin their new relationship...

That innocence, fear, and love in Ragini and the corresponding flirting, softness, and desire in Nachiket...

I'm just a big pile of mush now. ☺️

One of my favorites on the forum for sure! Thanks a lot for writing this! ❤️

Thanks a lot Shikha for the encouragement. 😳

Anything for NR ❤️

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poetic

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Posted: 9 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: Vicky7
I always weep reading your OS.😭
wish I could truly express how I feel reading them.
This was truly a gift for everyone.happy birthday to sukhi and Ragini,I didn't know it was your birthday😳
And thank you rachna,you are truly poetic👍🏼
You should really compile all your works together and get them published
BTW,me being Indian couldn't help asking this million dollar question-did R marry N in this story?😛

Thanks Vicky, you are super kind. 😃😛

And Me too being In dian, I say YES - she did marry him . She did say YES to him in spring, so you may take it as a beginning of their relationship leading to their marriage 😳

R would marry N always . And vice versa. I think they have never copped around for flings any time. Apart from love, they also have a mutual respect for each other and hence, they would always end up married.

Also her being there in his bedroom on that Saturday morning could be interpreted in various ways ... ❤️

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ShyNomad

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Posted: 9 years ago

#44

You know what gets me about this, is that they both seem so young and hopeful, even when Ragini says no, it's not the end but instead a detour to their eventual destination.

Loved the gradual development of their relationship and understanding of the other person, loved the beauty of this, that image of Nachiket walking with his jacket slung over his shoulder, him buying her an ice cream cone just because.

Their first kiss, their love blossoming as the seasons changed.

It honestly took me back to that feeling of a first love, thank you so much for this. One of my favorites for sure.

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poetic

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Posted: 9 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: ShyNomad

You know what gets me about this, is that they both seem so young and hopeful, even when Ragini says no, it's not the end but instead a detour to their eventual destination.

Loved the gradual development of their relationship and understanding of the other person, loved the beauty of this, that image of Nachiket walking with his jacket slung over his shoulder, him buying her an ice cream cone just because.

Their first kiss, their love blossoming as the seasons changed.

It honestly took me back to that feeling of a first love, thank you so much for this. One of my favorites for sure.

Thanks a lot Nidhi. 😳 Loved reading the comments more actually. 🤗

Probably this is now what happened to them, those 19 years back, and not the 2 mins Maggi Love Story that was cooked up.

For me, both nachiket and Ragini are deep personalities - their falling in love could not be that whimsical.

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roneeta

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Posted: 9 years ago

#46

Okay I am finally back with my detailed comments and I am so sorry it took me so long. Just wanted to be completely free of any work commitments when I wrote this.

You know what your story reminded me of? Of the loving care and attention of a loving old lady who knits and completes a pattern to come back to the beginning to replicate that pattern again so the sweater/scarf is complete..

Your words are like those patterns.. the anticipation of yes the needle.. where it all keeps coming back to.. the starting point.. the pattern was so lovely and so heart-warming.. in spring, she said yes - one full season before summer when she intended to! That was absolutely the best part.. how she fell for him and how he did not try too hard.. how they were just meant to be.. and how he bettered himself for her <3

You are a magician with words,Rachana. I swear you are. Thank you so much for this gorgeous gift. It is truly special and unique. LOTS OF LOVE!! MWAH!!

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ShyNomad

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Posted: 9 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: poetic
Thanks a lot Nidhi. 😳 Loved reading the comments more actually. 🤗

Probably this is now what happened to them, those 19 years back, and not the 2 mins Maggi Love Story that was cooked up.

For me, both nachiket and Ragini are deep personalities - their falling in love could not be that whimsical.

2 Minute Maggi love story is SO accurate...and that too undercooked!

Thank goodness for your faith in them and your understanding of these characters...your N/R are the real ones in my mind.

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poetic

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Posted: 9 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: ShyNomad

2 Minute Maggi love story is SO accurate...and that too undercooked!

Thank goodness for your faith in them and your understanding of these characters...your N/R are the real ones in my mind.

Thanks Nidhi 😃

I enjoyed writing this - my last one on NR, for time being.Maybe I will write when I feel like, but I think I have posted enough on this Forum.