Shayari for SidNi :)

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey peeps,


I wrote a few lines for SidNi and their current situation. Taaliyan aur gaaliyan...dono manzoor hain 😆


Paas ho kar bhi hum judaa judaa
,
jaane kab tak chalega yeh silsila.
Bikhar chuka hoon mein iss qadar,
samet lo ek baar mere humsafar.

Edited by ..Bohemian.. - 10 years ago

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Posted: 10 years ago
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its suits their current situation..u wrote it beautifully👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ChandzLoveSidNi

its suits their current situation..u wrote it beautifully👏



Thank u for reading. Much appreciated :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow... beautifully written😳😳 U are a great poet too, didn't know that😉 Would love to read more from u.. U can even write good OS / SS I suppose😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Woww.awesome ...writing..loved it..do share ur shayaros often👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice shayari!👏 I am a big fan of people who can write poems or can rhyme anyhow coz I can't so love it!😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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It was beautiful!! I didnt know u could write shayari's as well!! Do write more!!! :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: rosesidni

wow... beautifully written😳😳 U are a great poet too, didn't know that😉 Would love to read more from u.. U can even write good OS / SS I suppose😛



Thank u, Rose :) Very kind of u. I will try to write more but I can be very lazy 😆 But I don't think OS or SS is my forte! I'm not good with stories and we have some awesome writers here that would put me to shame 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Purni12

Woww.awesome ...writing..loved it..do share ur shayaros often👏



Thanks a lot Purni :)

I will try to watch lots of SidNi moments to get inspiration 😆 and then would love to share with u all...!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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English please, can't understand Hindi. I want to be able to participate.
Edited by Gingerly - 10 years ago

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