Manan Lovestories ...Fs Sanam Ray.. Note on pg 143 - Page 4

Awww wat a cute update...
Plzzz update more OS...

Wow.
amazing story.
Thanks for pm.

great single story i mean os
superb

Hey
Wow yr cute sa os hai yr
Drunken nandu is always so cute and made manik shocked... And her cuttest and kid like expressions always make him clean bold.. Made him fall for her...

And ur writing is commendable... And with d pictures u make things more expresable and attractive..

hayr appi os bhi likh diya? but bht achcha hai
loved it very much but song mere sar pe se gaya kaun sa hain?
and I think u r not online so m going
bye tc and miss me...

awesome OS 👏loved it
nandini's one sided love😆
lattu over manik😆
fianlly her love won😃
drunk nandini was superbb😉
plzzz write more such OS

Interesting writeup.

Hi Friends.How are you all.Thank you yaaro for your overwhelming response.A biggg wala hug for you.



So considering your request part b/ last part of this Os is here.and a news for you that I am changing this page to Manan Love stories Collection.All these stories will be In Os form. I mean all stories will be in 1 or 2 parts. so tell me how is it?😊
and also tell me about the banner I uploaded on 1st page .
Ok ab chalte haan last part pe I hope k app sub ka response mujhe aise hi milta rahe ga.


Sorry In advance for mistakes.




I love you (Last Part)

After the song Manik hold Nandini's hand and drag her with himself out of the venue.

He made her sit in the car and then they left from there.Nandini was so much happy at that time that she forgot all other things. She was happy that her Manik was with her and he accepts her love.A wide smile is placed on her face.Manik was watching her cute antics. He time to time stealing glances at her.Now he realizes that he is madly in love with this cutie pie.

Nandini closed her eyes and with her folded hand she thanked her ayiappa.

Nandini's POV

Thank you ...Thank you...Thank you Aiyappa.Thank you app ne mujhe mera Manik de diya.Hmmm Aiyappa I am so so so much happy.thank you for giving me this happiness.

Manik with the corner of his eyes looked her with lopsided smile.

Her thanking session broke with the ring of her phone.She opened her one eye and with that eye looked here and there ... Then she looked towards Manik and he with a smirk told her with his hand about her phone.

She with sheepish smile took that call.Navya was on other side... Manik switched off his cell phone so to know about Manik Cabir asked Navya to call Nandini and ask her about Manik.

Navya: Hello Nandu! Kahan hai tu... Aur Manik wo terey sath hai kya.

Nandini after listening this asked with surprise: Manik?(and she looked towards Manik and he indicated her to say no to Navya)

Navya: Arey haan Manik... Aur tu ne mujhe bataya kyo nahi Manik k bare mein haan... Aur yeh sub ... yeh sub kya tha?

Now Nandini replied with cute angry pouty face: Ahhh Jhooti main ne to sub kuch bataya tha na Manik k bare mein but tum ne hi meri baat ko kabhi seriously nahi liya?

Navya: Arey hamara wo Matlab nahi tha.hum to yeh poch rahe they yeh ajj jo kuch bhi hoa.

Nandini with anger like a kid said while showing her nakhra's to her friend: Nahi bataon gi... Tumhe nahi bataon gi kuch bhi... Tumhe waise hi meri baton pe yaqeen nahi hai so main tumhe kuch nahi bataon gi.Aur Manik ... wo bhi mere sath nahi hai... Now Happy...Chalo ab phone band karo Tumhe waise hi Cabir k sath koi kam hoga.

After listening this from Nandu ,,,,... Navya's opened her mouth in "O" and she looked at phone with wide eyes.

Manik gave a laugh to her on this drama and said: I really love your cute complaining sessions.

Now Nandini looked at his face and she got her mind back: Complaining sessions?

Manik with innocent smiling face turned towards her and said: Yes cute se complaining sessions.

Nandini like a kid said: Manik don't tease na...

Manik again laugh on this cuteness and concentrate on the road as he want to reach on the desired destination as soon as possible.

After about half an hour they reached at their desired destination .

Manik opened the car door for her lady and then extended his hand for her. Nandini looked all this with a smile and placed her hand on his. This mere touch of hers started effecting his senses. He helped her out and then extends his elbow for her lady to escort her.

Nandini was on ninth cloud after receiving this special treatment from her Manik .She with a lil giggle put her arms in his and then they moved inside.

As they entered in that house Nandini eyes grew wide with shock and her mouth opened in "O" Shape ...She saw that their way was carpeted with rose patels.She gave an astonished look to Manik and Manik with a smile only said: Chalein...

She then nodded like an excited kid.Manik take her hand in his and lead her towards the garden area.

Nandini saw from far that a table was set there for a couple. When they reached there Manik picked a bouquet from the table and gave that bouquet to her. She with a smile accept that .

After that Manik pulled a chair for her like a true gentleman and then he takes his seat.

He hold her hand and then kissed her on her hand.Nandini gave a shy smile to him and after that Manik looked at her face and adored her.

After sometime he asked with his husky voice: Nandini Tumhe mujhe se kuch pochna nahi hai?

Nandini 1^st looked at his face and then shook her head in negative.

Manik with surprise asked again: Really ... Tumhe kuch bhi nahi pochna mujh se.

Nandini again shook in no.

Manik: Yeh bhi nahi k yeh sub change kab aur kaise hoa?

Nandini again said No.

Manik again with extreme surprise: Kuch bhi nahi?

Nandini said with love: Manik! Mujhe tum se kuch bhi nahi pochna coz I trust u itnaaa K mujhe pata hai k agar koi baat aisi hogi jo mujhe pata honi chahaye to tum aj nahi to kal mujhe bata hi do gey.

Manik in astonished voice asked again : Itna pyaar karti ho mujh se?

Nandini with a proud smile : Khud se bhi zyada.

Manik was very happy as wel as emotional at that time. He said to her: I don't know Nandini k main ne kon sa aisa acha kam kiya k mujhe tum jaisi chahne wali mil gayi.

Nandini to lighten this atmosphere said while giggling: hmmm Mr Manik Malhotra socho socho kyo k mujh jaisi larki aise hi nahi mil jati. (after that she winked at him and then started laughing)

Seeing her laugh Manik also smile on her drama.

After sometime they ate their lunch and then Manik again asked her in hopeful voice(as he want her to question him about this change): Nandini tum waqae mein kuch nahi pocho gi?

Nandini after gazing at his face said like a kid: Ab tum itnaaa insist kar rahe ho to 1 question ka answer dou gey ?

Manik with wide smile node his head

Nandini: Manik... wo... ( she bite her lower lip in hesitation)...wo... Kal raat...Main(while saying this she saw his face with corner of her eyes) Main tumhare sath ... tumhare sath thi na?

Manik with wide grin: awww itni si baat k liye itna time (so cute ha while saying this he again pinched her cheek) Waise Tumhe kya lagta hai?( Manik played with her and asked with raised eyebrow).

Nandini with sad pouty face started complaining: Dekha dekha ... Rahne do mujhe kuch nahi pochna tum se?

Manik with smile started to manofy this kid fianc ofhis.he hold her hand and said: Acha ok sorry baba ! Main mazak kar raha tha.

Nandini turned her bollon like face on other side: Manik hold his ear and said: Sorry na baba... Apney is Manik ko Maaf nahi karo gi.

Nandini slightly turned her face and with corner of her eyes saw his cute face.A small smile appeared on her face and then she turned his face in his direction and continued her drama.

Nandini: Mr Manik Malhotra is sorry se kam nahi chale ga.Mujhe manana hai to kuch aur sochna pare ga.

This thing put a smile on his face and he said: Ok !Your wish is my command sweetheart.

Manik left from there and came back with in 2 mints and then he gave a red rose to her.

Nandini hold that rose and then showed him her fake smile.

Manik with a smile again gave her a teddy bear.

Nandini again hold that teddy bears and showed an angry face to Manik (while hugging that teddy)

After that she placed both the things on table.

Manik then gave him different gifts time to time including perfume, watch, dress, Ring and bracelet .But Nandu was not in a mood to forgive her.

Manik after that thought for a sec while ruffling his hair and then he again went inside.

Nandinni saw all this and thought( Arey lagta hai kuch zyada hi ho gya... Main Manik ko tang nahi karna chahti thi ... but os ka wo cute sa face...aw... I just want to eat him alive at that time).

Her thinking process broke when she heard a voice... A voice which she loved the most...Her Manik's voice... He was singing the same song for her which he sang few hours ago in that concert.

He came with a guitar and started singing the same song for her Love while doing the cutest action.

O Meri Soni Meri Tamanna
Jhoot Nahin Hai Mera Pyaar
Diwane Se Ho Gai Galati (he hold his ear while looking towards Nandini)
Jaane Do Yaar I Love You I Love You

He extend his arm and with his expression called her near him.She came near her and he held her hand and sing

Aake Meri Aankhon Me Tum Dekko
Ein Me Har Ek Jaaga Tumhari Hai

Kahene Ko Yeh Dil Hai Mera Lekin
Dhadkan Yeh Sada Tumhari Hai
Tum Pe Chain Mera
Tum Pe Hai Mera Karaar

Ah Ah I Love You,

He remove the strand of her hair from her very gently and while caressing his face sing.

Tadap k Tum Mujh Ko Na Tadapau

Maan Jao Hum To Haan Tumhare

Tum ne bhi to dil se mujhe chaha

Tumhi to ho sanam mujhe payarey

He gave a quick peck on her lips

Merey Kareeb Ao Zara

Sun bhi Lo...Dil Ki Pukaar

I Love You... I Love You

O Meri Soni Meri Tamanna
Jhoot Nahin Hai Mera Pyaar
Diwane Se Ho Gai Galati (he again hold his ear and this time Nandini with love removed his hand from his ear and shook in no and then hugged him)

Jaane Do Yaar I Love You I Love You

Yes I do

I love you... I love You.

After the song He said: I am sorry.Main bus mazak kar raha tha.plz mujhe maf kar do.

Nandini with a lil guilty voice: Manik plz no na... Tum mafi nahi mango. Tumhari ghalti nahi hai... mujhe bhi aisa mazak nahi karna chaheye tha.

Manik while caressing her face said: Don't say this sweety.U have now all the rights to say what u want to me and after that he picked her hand and then kissed her on her ring finger.Infact Mujh se yeh ghalti hoe k main ne sub k samne tumhein ring pahna di aur tum se pocha bhi nahi about our relationship.

Nandini on listening this extended her lower lip outside and made a cute pout and then said:hmmm Mistake Mr Manik Malhotra ... Very Big Mistake(She said all this in funny manner) Tou kya kiya jae ab bolo ... bolo.

Manik gazed in her eyes and then the next moment Nandini got a heart attack coz Manik was again on his knee and he like a gentle man extend his hand infront of her and said: Nandini jaise in pholon k ( he indicated her through his eyes towards the flower bouquet which he gave her earlier)different colors haan waise hi zindagi k different shades haan.aur main Zindagi k yeh taman color ... taman shades Tumhare sath Dekhna aur Enjoy karna chahata hoon. Kyat um zindagi k har color ko enjoy karne mein mera sath dou gi? Kya tum Mujh jaisey pagal rockstar ko apni life mein shamil karna pasand karo gi.? Kyat um Mujh se... Apney is Manik Malhotra se Shadi karo gi?

Nandini eyes popped out on this. She didn't think that her dream came true like this.Her eyes became teary after hearing this.The only words came from her mouth was: Manikkk Shadiii.

Manik looked all her emotions so he again kissed her knuckles and said tell me na Nandini: Will you marry me?

Nandini with teary eyes nodded in yes.

Manik after listening this Yes stands up and then he picked her lady love in his arms and twirled her in circles and said: Thank you... Thank you baby for accepting my love.

He put her down and then cupped her face while gazing in her eyes and then placed his lips on hers. Their 1^st kiss of love. Manik was very gentle with her as he knows about her kid girl. But Nandini she bite his lower lip and then suck that area.Manik instantly gazed at her face and saw her smiling eyes.So He put his hand behind her neck and pulled her more to himself.He now bite her lower lip in reply and when Nandini hissed and slightly opened her mouth then he entered her tongue inside and taste her mouth with full concentration.

After some time he felt that Nandini was out of breath so he broke their first kiss and with long breath said while rubbing his lips I really love this treatment My would be wify.

Nandini with lowered head gave a shy smile to him.

Manik now held her hand and moved back towards table. He sits on a chair and then pulled her on his lap. Nandini with shy sits on his legs.Manik caressed her face and said: You know Kal raat tak main yeh pyaar vyaar pe zyada yaqeen nahi karta tha.Phir kal raat ko mujhe aik angel mili jis ne mujh pe koi magic kar diya . Aur ab dekho yeh ... yeh Manik Malhotra ab Pyaar k bina rah nahi sakta.

Nandini with love gazed at his face.

Manik then told her all about last night. And then said: Nandini main tumhari diary read karne pe tumhe sorry nahi bolon ga coz wo diary to waise bhi mujh se hi belong karti hai na.

Now Nandini placed her hand on his face and then said: Nahi Manik tumhe kisi bhi baat k liye sorry bolne ki zarorat nahi.Main aur mera sub kuch tumhara hi to hai na?

Manik pulled her hand forward and kissed her hands inner side and said: Ok tou jab sub kuch mera hi hai to kya khyal hai is sub kuch ko officially apney naam hi kyo na kar loon?

Nandini asked: Kya matlab?

Manik: Matlab yeh madam: Abhi aur isi waqt shadi karo di mujh se.

Nandini again with shock asked: Manik... abhi... But Chacha Chachi..

Manik: Tum mujhe yeh batao tum ready ho Abhi mujh se shadi karne k liye .Chacha Chachi ko main handle kar loon ga.

Nandini with a smile nodded like like a kid.

Manik held her hand and then they moved inside of the house where she got again a heart attack when she saw Chacha Chachi,Rishab Navya and all his friends there.

She looked at Manik's face and hold his hand tightly in nervousness and he with his eyes assured her to Calm down.and the caressed her hand with his thumb.

At same time a lawyer entered with some papers and Told Manik that everything is ready.Manik turned towards Nandini and then said to her: So Chalein my would be wifey.

Nandini moved with him towards the table where that lawyer placed those documents.

Manik with extreme happy face signed on that papers and then gave pen to Nandini.

Nandini 1^st looked at his face and then she looked towards her family who showed her a thumbs up.

Nandini after that signed on that papers. After that Manik told some things to that lawyer and he left with those papers.

Manik now thanked all his family members and they all hugged both Manik and Nandini.

After sometime they also left this newly wedded couple and leave from there.

Manan were now alone.

Manik looked at Nandini's face and then asked with concern: Nandini tum thek ho?

Nandini gave a smile to him and nodded in yes.

Manik then picked his wifey and moved towards their room.

He opened that door with his leg and then he put her lady love down.

Manik placed his hand on her waist and pulled her towards himself and said: Welcome to your Dream World Wifey. And gave a kiss on her cheeks.

Nandini closed her eyes with shyness.

Manik: O no aik cheez to rah hi gayi...

Nandini with surprise asked: Kya?

Manik: 1 mint Ruko

He left her there and moved towards drawer and then picked a file from there and moved back to her wife.

Nandini: Manik yeh kya hai?

Manik forward that file to her and said: 1^ST gift from Manik Malhotra to his dear wife Mrs. Nandini Malhotra.

Nandini with surprise take that file and looked on that papers.That was her admission papers of that same university which she left for his Manik.

Nandini with teary eyes: Manik yeh...

Manik then again handed over her an envelop

Nandini opened that also and find her passport and tickets for tomorrow's flight.

Nandini with surprise again looked at Manik's face.

Manik: Arey abhi to shadi ki hai aur mera bilkul koi mood nahi k apni wifey ko akela chorna ka so kal merey sath tum bhi chal rahe ho.sub arrangements pahle hi ho chukey haan.Chacha chachi and rishab ne tumhare liye yeh sub gifts bhi diye haan.(he showed her a bag) aur yeh raha tumhara suite case.Waise to ab Tumhe kapron ki zarorat kum hi parne wali hai but phir bhi ab chachi ne diya hai to lena para... U know na what I mean(he said this last line with a wink)

Nandini's mouth opened in O on this besharmi.and she slapped him on his arm.

Manik now to tease her further: Arey Marney se kapron ki zarorat mein izafa nahi hoga my dear wifey.

Nandini after hearing this batein put her hands on her face.

Manik after seeing this Hugged her and said: awww I really love you for your cute antics.

Nandini replied her back with her head on his chest: and I love you too My Dear husband.

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