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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sanghita0000

I didn't get password for ch 20 & 21...have come back IF after a long suffering due to fever...still not well...

if u find time , plz send me password...otherwise it's okay...

posting on IF
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Posted: 9 years ago

Part 20

Dev come in her cabin...

Dev : geet

Geet : ha dev

Dev : geet I don't know

Why tara want to send me here

.

Usne abhi tak kuch nhi kiya hai

Ho sakta hai

Ab kre

Tum careful rhehna

Geet : hmm

You are right dev

Kuch toh chl raha hai uske dimag mein

Par kya

.

Dev : geet

Now am going

Take care

Geet : hmm

********

From blinds maan see both... not knows what he believes... His eyes watching dev and geet together mostly, but he doesn't want to think on that point... But he feels pain in this heart so much...

There is a pain in me,
Ignited inside of my heart.
But no one will see...

*********

One side party arrangement going on full swing and another side storm is ready to burst...

Daadi : Vicky beta

Aapne sb achi tarah check kr liya hai na

Vicky : ji daadi

Bro aur bhabhi ko koi problem nhi hongi

Nandini : aur ek achi outing bhi ho jaayengi

Daadi : ha

Un dono ko is holiday ki bhut jaroorat hai

Chaliye abs b so jaaiye

Yaad rhe

Geet ko koi wish nhi kareng

Lucky : ji

***********

Vicky : bro

Maan : ha Vicky

Vicky : bro sb thik toh hai na

Aap kuch pareshan se lag rhe hai

Maan : sb thik hai Vicky

Tum jaake so jaayo

Vicky : bro aap ko bhi ab so jaana chaiye

Maan : hmm

*************

He goes towards garden and sees geet sited on swing... & seeing towards moon...

Maan : geet

Geet : aap itni raat ko yaha

Soye nhi aap

Maan : tum bhi toh nhi soyi

Geet : bs maan neend nhi aa rhi thi

.

Aap khade kyun hai

Baithye na

Maan : hmm

He come and sits near her...

Maan : kya soch rhi ho geet

Geet : kuch nhi maan

Bs kuch beete huye pal yaad kr rhi thi

Maan : jaise

Geet : jaise

.

Wo jhula jhulna

Veerji se chup - chupake mela gumna

Late aane pe

Wo sja

Darji ki chaddi

Aur mera hath

.

.

Maan : tum unse jaake mil kyun nhi leti

Geet : maan

Bhut kuch badal chukka hai

Jo aap bhool gye ho

Par mujhe yaad hai abhi bhi

.

Mein chaha ke bhi nhi bhool sakti wo sb

Maan : mujhe yaad nhi geet

Unhone kya kiya hai tumhare sath

Par unki galati us gunaah se toh bdi nhi hongi

Jisse tumne itni asaani se maaf kr diya

.

Sayad tum us insaan se itna jyada pyaar krti ho

Jiske saamne tumhe shi aur galat kuch nhi dikhta

Geet : maan

Aap kya bole jaa rhe ho

.

Mujhe kuch smjh nhi aa rha hai

Maan : geet raat kafi ho gyi hai

Aur thand bhi br gyi hai

Tum so jaayo

Good night

He stand from swing, geet held his hand and stand from swing, then come in front of him...

Geet : maan aap ase nhi jaa sakte ho

.

Mujhe bataiye

Aapke mann mein kya chl rha hai

Asa kya hai jo aapko pareshan kr rha hai

Maan : asa kuch nhi hai

Mere saamne se hato

Geet : nhi maan

Kuch toh hai asa

Jiski wajh se aap pareshan hai

.

Boliye maan

She cupped his face and said maan kya aap

Apni geet ko bhi nhi batayenge

Maan held her hand and said meri geet

She nodded

Maan : ek aur jhooth

Mt kaho geet

.

Mein aur jhooth apni zindagi mein bardaast nhi kr sakta

Geet : maan

Ye aap ky akh rhe hai

Kaunsa jhooth kha hai

Maine aapse

Maan : you act very well geet

.

Pata hai

Jb tumne wo divorce diya na mujhe

Eri khushi ke liye

Bhut gussa aaya tha mujhe tumpe

Par fir tumhara sacrifice dekha

.

Meri khushi ke liye

Tum apni khushiyo se durr jaa rhi thi

.

I feel so guilty geet

Kyun mein tumhe bhula

.

Sb khte hai

Humare beech bhut pyaar tha

Kyun bhool gya mein

.

Tumhara dard mujhse dekha nhi jaa rha tha

.

Par ab lagta hai

Acha huya

Bhool gya wo mein sb

.

Jb aaj itna dard ho rha hai

Tumhare is dhoke se

Us waqt toh sayad mein bardast hi nhi kr pata

.

Acha huya geet

Maine ab aapne dil ko rok liya hai

Jo firse tumhare liye dadkane laga tha

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.

Shi waqt pe tumne

Mujhe rok diya

Thanks for this

.

Geet : maan

Ye sb aap kya kh rhe hai

.

Maine kiya kya hai

Maan : geet

Tumhe ab aur ye sb acting krni ki koi jaroorat nhi hai

Geet : maan I really don't know

What you saying

But I never cheat you

.

I really love you maan

Geet sirf maan se pyaar krti hai

.

Aap boliye na maan

You trust your geet

.

Maan this time I cant take more

.

Maan trust your geet

Mein nhi jaanti

Aapko kya galatfami huyi hai

Par yakin maaniye mera

Maine kbhi aapko koi dhoka nhi diya hai

.

Maan I take your anger

But nor your silence

Please boliye

You trust me

You trust my love

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.

Maan

I die without your love

Your trust

She fall on her knees, repeating this lines only

Please boliye

You trust me

You trust my love

.

Maan

I die without your love

Your trust

.

Maannn

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He can't see her in this state, he sit beside her and cupped her face...

Maan : geet

Stop crying

Geet : maan

Mein sch kh rhi hu

Maine kuch asa nhi kiya hai

Maan : sshhh

Chup ho tum phle

She hugged him by neck, he also don't want to push her ... He takes her in embrace...

Precap : geet birthday celebration continue.

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Posted: 9 years ago

Part 21

He can't see her in this state, he sit beside her and cupped her face...

Maan : geet

Stop crying

Geet : maan

Mein sch kh rhi hu

Maine kuch asa nhi kiya hai

Maan : sshhh

Chup ho tum phle

She hugged him by neck, he also don't want to push her ... He takes her in embrace...

Geet : maan aapne asa socha bhi kaise

Mein aapko cheat karungi

.

She comes out little from hug and sees in his eyes...

Kaise maan

.

Aur kya kh rhe the aap

.

Acha huya geet

Maine ab aapne dil ko rok liya hai

Jo firse tumhare liye dadkane laga tha

.

Aap chaha ke bhi maan

Apne dil ko mere liye dadkane se nhi rok sakte hai

.

.

She sees question in his eyes...

.

Kyunki maan

Aapki hare k dadkan mein bs geet basti hai

Jaise meri hare k dadkan mein maan baste hai

She again hugged him tightly...

Aaj Agar Milan Ki Raat Hoti...

Jaane Kya Baat Hoti...

Toh Kya Baat Hoti...

Maan : geet raat kafi ho gyi hai

Aur thand bhi bad rhi hai


Dhin Dhin Dhak Dhak Dhak...

Geet : hmm

.

Maan aapko asa kyun laga

Maine aapko cheat kiya hai

.

Bataiye na

.

.

She come out from hug and cupped his face...

.

Maan : geet

.

Kya tumhari zindagi mein mujhse bhi phle koi tha

Jisse tumne pyaar kiya ho

.

Geet : nhi maan

.

You give me hope when I'm all out

.

When I'm feeling down
You make me feel good about myself

.

You mean the world to me
You are my soul
my spirit
My everything

.

World is within you..
Love lies within you..
As my love is you..

Day starts with you..
Day ends on you..
As my love is you..

.

He only feel love in her words, he smile hearing her lovely word, but next moment he sees her with dev...all happiness crushed again...he stand from ground, she also stand, held his hand ...

In crowd companion is you..
Because my love is you..

.

Smile in pain is you..
Tears in smile is you..
As my love is you..

.

Breath in my breath is you..
The one in me is you..
As my love is you..

Beauty in me is you..
My Trust in trust is you..
As my love is you..

.

The one who loves me more than me is you..
The one who trust me more than me is you..

Thats why my love is you...

I love you..i love you
..


Sunte Hai Jab Pyar Ho Toh Diye Jal Uthte Hain

Tann Mein, Mann Mein, Aur Nayan Mein, Diye Jal Uthte Hain

.

.

Both lost in this moment, her phone buzzed in between...

Geet (mummer) dev

Maan :kiska phone hai geet

Geet : maan ek minute

Hello dev

Waha sb thik toh hai na

Tumne itni raat call kiya

.

Dev : nhi geet

Kuch thik nhi hai

.

Ye site pe problem jaan buzkar create ki gyi hai

.

Mujhe asa lag rha hai

Geet : kuch pata chala

.

Dev : abhi toh nhi geet

.

Pata nhi kyun

Mujhe kuch ajeeb lag rha hai

.

Waha sb thik toh hai na

.

Geet : hmm

.

Dev : naintara ne khi kuch

Geet : sb thik hai abhi

.

Dev : hmm

I try to come soon

.

Geet : take care

Dev : you too

.

.

***********

Maan : dev ne tumhe is waqt kyun call kiya

.

Geet (think) abhi inhe ye bataya ki

Site pe jaan buzkar ye situation create ki gyi hai

Toh badak jaayenge

.

Maan : geet maine kuch pucha

.

Geet : bs ase hi

.

He tries to control the stuation

Bs updates di site ki

Maan : geet now am going to ask directly from you

.

Tumahre aur dev ke beech

.

He stops in mid...

.

Geet : maan

Kya kh rhe the aap

.

She tries to behave strong... but fearing from his upcoming words...she is right, she knew, but his husband going to ask her relation with other man...how

.

How she handle this mistrust

.

Geet : maan jo baat aap mujhse kh nhi ph rhe directly

Wo janana chahte hai

.

Maan kya aapka dil nhi jaanta uska jwab

.

Ek baar apne dil se jwab maangiye

Wo aapko saare jwab denga

.

Maan : geet

Dil aur dimag ki jung mein

Dil haar rha hai geet

Aaja Piya Aaja, Aaja Piya Aaja Ho...

Aaja Piya Aaja, Tere Hi Tere Hi Liye, Jalte Diye

Geet : humara pyaar itna kamjor nhi tha maan

.

.

Maan : geet

Tell me whole truth

Now

.

This time don't hide anything

.

Bitaani Tere Saaye Mein, Saaye Mein, Zindagaani

Bitaani Tere Saaye Mein, Saaye Mein

*********

Precap : geet birthday celebration continue.

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Posted: 9 years ago
i post full part here

i hope now you all comment or likes regularly...

see my new Mg ff


New ff - YOU ARE MINE & part 1 on page 16
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Posted: 9 years ago
next update in new Thread
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update. So Maan is still having doubts on Geet's and Dev's relationship. This all done by Naintara. Poor Geet how can she convince Maan that he is the one for her
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Posted: 9 years ago
very emotional update
maan is doubting geet n dev's relation
finally he ask directly her which hurt geet

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Posted: 9 years ago
Fantastic Updates
True Geet is hurt that Maan suspects her love but she is the one that is creating this
between them why is she not clear with him he had memory loss so why does she feel
that every problem concerning the company too she should hide it from Maan
why can she not be truthful to him
that is the reason he feels that Geet still loves Dev and why does Dev and Geet feel the need to
always hide from Maan
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Posted: 9 years ago
maan question hurt geet but his secret doubts would have hurted her more hope geet now tell him full truth
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Posted: 9 years ago
Lovely updates! I hope Geet tells Maan whole truth herself not have viciousness of Naintara.

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