Cuteness can no longer cover-up the flaws!

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Look at today's scene, Yuvraj-Gauri one. Very cute. Very well-acted. The smile just slips off Yuvraj's face when he realises what he called her and how the moment made him feel. Even the following Yuvraj-Suhani conversation was nice. But then you can't really enjoy the scene as a whole because you are plagued by questions, " How does he suddenly remember things about his sister, when he earlier said he only vaguely remembers her?", " Why isn't no one taking dadi to a shrink?" , "How come the girl remembers family pic but not the mother's face?".

Yuvraj is really facing a big dilemma. He wants to believe his sister is alive.To believe that means to accept his Dadi wronged them, which is an unbearable thought for him. But you don't FEEL his situation because it is simply not convincing enough. The enormous stupidity of Dadi's drama doesn't even make you feel bad for Yuvraj's genuinely complex emotional situation.

Wouldn't it have been better to have Dadi faking a heart attack and put Yuvraj in this situation?

Earlier too we had stupid situations and tracks. But the overall cuteness/warmth in the scenes made us ignore the stupidity of a situation. Why? Because, even the smallest scene showed Yuvraj coming closer to Suhani, his attraction,his struggle to fight it off, his doubts on the nature of his feelings...in short, his falling-in-love process. So every scene added something to the story.

Now that's not the case. Their scenes don't make sense because we don't know where the hell the story is going or if at all there is any story left to tell?

It's no longer viable to cover up loopholes in storytelling with Y-S cute bits. Because, they themselves are suffering from lack of story to back them up. Even their scenes fall short because there is simply no destination visible of where these moments are leading to.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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What it should all lead to is Dadi's exposure and eventual fall from grace but they are desperate to delay her parda fash! If she's exposed then obviously her aura of invincibility crumbles and Yuvraj has to face the bitter reality that his Dadi;s love is just another form of a dictatorship...it would be a powerful storyline but they cant show that here bec apparently, aunties like absurdities and comedy.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: drummedup


Look at today's scene, Yuvraj-Gauri one. Very cute. Very well-acted. The smile just slips off Yuvraj's face when he realises what he called her and how the moment made him feel. Even the following Yuvraj-Suhani conversation was nice. But then you can't really enjoy the scene as a whole because you are plagued by questions, " How does he suddenly remember things about his sister, when he earlier said he only vaguely remembers her?", " Why isn't no one taking dadi to a shrink?" , "How come the girl remembers family pic but not the mother's face?". You just CANT settle for cute bits when you can't help noticing the 'more holes than a swiss cheese' in dadi's dumb drama and milli's never ending drama.

Yuvraj is really facing a big dilemma. He wants to believe his sister is alive.To believe that means to accept his Dadi wronged them, which is an unbearable thought for him. But you don't FEEL his situation because it is simply not convincing enough. The enormous stupidity of Dadi's drama doesn't even make you feel bad for Yuvraj's genuinely complex emotional situation.

Wouldn't it have been better to have Dadi faking a heart attack and put Yuvraj in this situation? For her age, that would be the best way to fool, if fooling is all she is hell bent on.

Earlier too we had stupid situations and tracks. But the overall cuteness/warmth in the scenes made us ignore the stupidity of a situation. Why? Because, even the smallest scene showed Yuvraj coming closer to Suhani, his attraction,his struggle to fight it off, his doubts on the nature of his feelings...in short, his falling-in-love process. So every scene added something to the story.

Now that's not the case. Their scenes don't make sense because we don't know where they are going with them. So even if a scene is nice/cute, we still end up staring at the stupidity of it in the face because we don't know where the hell the story is going or if at all there is any story left to tell?

It's no longer viable to cover up loopholes in storytelling with Y-S cute bits. Because, they themselves are suffering from lack of story to back them up. Even their scenes fall short because there is simply no destination visible of where these moments are leading to.



Dear sweetheart same doubt n questions I have why she remember her mom
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: yanks28

What it should all lead to is Dadi's exposure and eventual fall from grace but they are desperate to delay her parda fash! If she's exposed then obviously her aura of invincibility crumbles and Yuvraj has to face the bitter reality that his Dadi;s love is just another form of a dictatorship...it would be a powerful storyline but they cant show that here bec apparently, aunties like absurdities and comedy.


It's time they make a jump. Sometimes catering to aunties, sometimes catering to us. This having-feet-in-two-boats scenario is badly effecting the (little) story they are left with. It already feels like SNS to me... with rare, occasional sparks of old SSEL.

It feels horrible to see a good scene leaving no impact because the execution has gone terrible.
What is the future for Y-S as a story? From here to where? Dadi's exposure will be more about Dadi than a push to the leads n their characters. In this half-baked situation I seriously see no future for them😕


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Du if she is exposed it marks a big moment in Yuvraj's life. He'sbeen living a lie and so have his bros. All of them would need to stand up for Pratima and I would liek to see Yuvraj leave BH with Suhani and maybe along side Pratima...it could lead to the brothers splitting up
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But DU that is what his problem is ..It is hard for him to believe that his granny has done it as he is so obsessed and blind in her love..He calls her Gauri n the heat of that moment and also smiled slipped away from his lips..He literally enjoyed himself with his sister..Both were cute in that scene..i loved it.even Y-S scene made sense today..they are given some meaningful scenes last two days..but i dont feel he will be able to believe so soon that Dadi fooled his total family and hid his sister..He himself cleared it today..Though she behaves like my sister i cant accept the fact that she is as why could Dadi everr do such a big thing by lying that Gauri passed away.He too said she may be some other girl even though she does things similar to my sister.Yuvraj cannot accept so soon that dadi has done it as Chandrakala is doing this crap drama of split personality.Suhani doubts on her but i am doubting how far will she be succesful.Till which extent could Suhani convince Yuvraj that Dadi has done it.He has to frame his brain to believe the truth which is hard for him as Dadi has made him a total puppet
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@Yanks: Pipe dreams😆 All I can say is - kaaash.




Originally posted by: srinithi25

But DU that is what his problem is ..It is hard for him to believe that his granny has done it as he is so obsessed and blind in her love..He calls her Gauri n the heat of that moment and also smiled slipped away from his lips..He literally enjoyed himself with his sister..Both were cute in that scene..i loved it.even Y-S scene made sense today..they are given some meaningful scenes last two days..but i dont feel he will be able to believe so soon that Dadi fooled his total family and hid his sister..He himself cleared it today..Though she behaves like my sister i cant accept the fact that she is as why could Dadi everr do such a big thing by lying that Gauri passed away.He too said she may be some other girl even though she does things similar to my sister.Yuvraj cannot accept so soon that dadi has done it as Chandrakala is doing this crap drama of split personality.Suhani doubts on her but i am doubting how far will she be succesful.Till which extent could Suhani convince Yuvraj that Dadi has done it.He has to frame his brain to believe the truth which is hard for him as Dadi has made him a total puppet


Exactly! Look how good this sounds in writing. But why is it not visible on-screen? Why it isn't as impactful as a story in visual narration?

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