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Posted: 9 years ago
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I am back with another OS.It is based on a yesterday's scene from the show.
The lyrics of the song I have put alongside,I feel is very apt for the scene for me.
Though the BG in that scene was just too good.I added this song to give my own take on it.
There might me some similarities but do have a look at it.

Jalte Diye

Aaj agar milan ki raat hoti
Jaane kya baat hoti
To kya baat hoti

Sunte hain jab pyaar ho toh
Diye jal uthte hain
Tan mein, mann mein, aur nayan mein
Diye jal uthte hain

Aaja piya aaja
Aaja piya aaja ho..
Naa ja piya aaja
Teri hi tere hi liye, jalte diye
Bitani tere saaye mein, saaye mein
Zindagani bitani tere saaye mein, saaye mein

She was dressing up for the diwali celebrations in the house.She had worn a beautiful royal blue and beige lehenga.
When suddenly the power went.

I-What happened to the light?Have to go and check

As she was about to go,she felt a tug at her wrist ,Raman pulls her back.She lands right next to him on the couch.

I-Kya raman,you scared me...I thought...

R-I will never allow anyone to look at you,forget about...

As he looked at her lovingly.
I-What happened...

R-You know Ishita,you are looking very beautiful today,truly like an angel...

Ishita lowered her eyes and blushed pink.

She got up to get ready when

R-I will help you get ready today.
As he got up and brought the jewellery box and placed it beside her.

Kabhi kabhi..
Kabhi kabhi aise diyon se
Lag bhi jaati aag bhi

Aa...
Dhule dhule se aanchalon pe
Lag hain jaate raag bhi
Hain viraano mein badalte
Dekhe mann ke baag bhi

Sapno mein shringar ho to
Diye jal uthte hain
Khwahishon ke aur sharam ke
Diye jal uthte hain

Aaja piya aaja teri hi, tere hi liye
Jalte diye..
Bitani tere saaye mein, saaye mein

He picked up the payal(anklet) and knelt down.
R-They jingling of these payal makes me aware of your cheerful presence.They remind me that no matter what may come ,even if no one is there for me,you will always be.

He picked up the bangles
R-You wear them everyday and in the beginning of our marriage days,your red choora signifying that you were forever bound with me.The happiness it gives you will never know.The constant clinking of them reminds me that you are here with me and my dream of a happy and content life has indeed come true.

He caressed them and lifted her hands and brought it near his lips and kissed it.
She blushed.

He next made her wear a necklace and earrings.
R-This necklace and earrings adds more beauty to your angelic face and those beautiful eyes in which I always drown myself in.

He finally got up and took the sindoor and brought it to her and said
R-When we married,I put this in compulsion,but throughout this time you always respected it and now from today and everyday,even though I didn't tell you before you I will put it in your maang with full rights.
Every morning I will put it for you.

He said and filled her maang with sindoor.

He went and brought a diya and came back and and sat next to her.

Mera nahin..
Mera nahin hai woh diya jo
Jal raha hai mere liye
Meri taraf kyun ye ujaale
Aaye hain inko rokiye

Yoon begaani roshni mein
Kab talak koi jiye

R-You know Ishita,before you came my life was dark and just like this diya which filled the room with its brightness,you filled my life with brightness,happiness and spark.Because of you I found my true love,my soulmate whom I want to be with forever till times eternal.
Promise me that you will never leave me because your raavan kumar is nothing without his jhansi ki rani.She is his life and breath.

I-Your don't know what have you done with all this gestures.This small small things are my most precious memories and are always locked in my heart whose key you hold.We may not have had the best start in our relationship but that is not because we are not perfect alone but because we are only perfect together.
These small small gestures make me feel complete in every sense of life.I don't know what I had done before to get you as my life partner and soulmate.You don't know how lucky and contented I feel.
We truly fit each other like pieces of puzzles.
I have already lost myself to you in every way and can never imagine my life without you even for a moment.
I am the luckiest person in this world to have such a supporting,caring husband who loves me unconditionally and who makes my every single moment special.
I promise you I will never ever leave you in my lifetime and till times of infinity.
You are mine forever.
I Love You.

R-I Love You too...

Saanson mein jhankaar ho to
Diye jal uthte hain
Jhanjharon mein kangano mein
Diye jal uthte hain

Aaja piya hmmm...
Jalte diye
Bitani tere saaye mein, saaye mein
Zindagani bitani tere saaye mein, saaye mein

And they hugged tight to feel the world in their arms.
Truly their life was a bliss.With each other's support and care,they could overcome any obstacle of life.

Saaye mein saaye tere..

(Saaye mein tere.. bitani zindagani..)

Saaye mein saaye tere..

Saaye mein.. bitani Zindagani..

So that's it guys.

I know it's a little short but didn't want to go overboard with it.
Tried to write something,don't know if it turned out good.
Hope it was not too mushy-mushy.

Sorry if you all didn't like it.😭

For those who want to know,the song in the os is Jalte diye from the 2015 Hindi film Prem Ratan Dhan Payo

Do leave your comments as your feedback matters a lot to me.😊


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ruhi_ishra thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#2
i wanted to comment first

Its beautiful
I have not watched yesterday's episode
But still I can say yr version will be better

lovely OS
Keep writing 😊
Edited by ruhi_ishra - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Magical jst lyk ISHRA... dnt wana say much...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome dear👏
i am in ishra land...😳
song is beautiful...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ruhi_ishra

i wanted to comment first

Its beautiful
I have not watched yesterday's episode
But still I can say yr version will be better

lovely OS
Keep writing 😊

Aww...thank you...
Thank youuu so much for believing that my version is better☺️,but got to say ishra were truly wonderful in that scene...
Thank youuu so much for liking it...😳
Will definitely try to write more 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: swatica.arora

Magical jst lyk ISHRA... dnt wana say much...

☺️
Thank youuu so much...so glad you liked it 😳
Edited by traveller_girl - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ishrasoul

awesome dear👏

i am in ishra land...😳
song is beautiful...

Thank youuu so much...so glad you liked it 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow wow wow darling 👏
Just loved your OS, a different view 😳
Raman dressing up Ishu with jewelry,
Payal... ❤️ it. Wished this was shown on screen.
For me the bangles took the cake. You gave detailed explanations from Ramans Pov.
Sindoor.. I wished this was shown too.
Puttar holds the key to ishus heart... Aaawww loved it... So romantic ..., ❤️ 🤗 .
I like the way you come up and use the props..seriously how do u come up with these? Enjoyed it.. Very romantic. Very simple yet beautiful. 👏
Edited by Mdwst - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Woww..😃
I want sme1 to write on dis sng nd u did it.. Surprise 4 me.. 😛
Well I can must say dis was d best rather den d shw lollipop scenes.. Although it was juz a divan/ishra moment.. But I lyk nd lov mostly dis 1..
D way he describes and says abt d beauty and ishu replies i.e. wat I missed ysterday on d shw..
U've very well portray it and beautifully written..👍🏼
Love it
Love it
And
Juz love it...
❤️

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